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    Why Care

    I wish i lived in a dream because life is too complicated
    Its overrated, Fated to die, Lifes road has clearly stated
    That life is bound to end, No matter the facts, ur Dead
    People fear death and the fact u will die, why the dread?
    Embrace it, Dont hate it, Life always ends with no remorse
    So why make the end wait if the wait is long and coarse
    Ignorance is shown....through the psyche of the opposed
    Supposed prophecies exploded in the face of thee imposed
    Disarray portrayed by the dismay presented by life
    Easy to imagine the slicing of wrists, so endless is the knife
    Pain to much to bare, the image presents itself so clear
    Smiles never presented, the wear of depression to severe
    The fixation of death drilled into the feeble mind of the depressed
    The tortured soul to be cleansed by none other then death
    Hell or heaven exist? Who cares where the deceased may rest
    Rotten flesh on the ground, smell of maggots the best
    Never noticed to be gone, nor' to be dead
    Just thought to be lost in his own head


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    RazorBlade Romance

    "Even if we are spared destruction by war, our lives will have to change if we want to save life from self-destruction"
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    RazorBlade Romance

    "Even if we are spared destruction by war, our lives will have to change if we want to save life from self-destruction"
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    RazorBlade Romance

    "Even if we are spared destruction by war, our lives will have to change if we want to save life from self-destruction"
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    RazorBlade Romance

    "Even if we are spared destruction by war, our lives will have to change if we want to save life from self-destruction"
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    -(Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn)-


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    just upping this for you atm

    nice to see you back my dude.

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    hmmm...this piece gave a very interesting perspective on life and death...concept was played but for some mysterious reason i still came to like this very much...vocab was nicely used . you didnt just use unneccessary diction...every word was placed well..nice imagery..i would have like to see more multies but oh well...this piece stands on its own two feet...good drop...

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