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    Thoughts of a soldier

    A city nigga but these bitches got me deep in the woods
    thought peace was supposed to be good
    this shit's worse than the streets in the hood.. seems like hours
    we've been laying in this ditch of ours
    buddy's tellin me the forecast is callin for showers.. could it get worse
    yes... we hear a shot.. bullets disperse.. god i'm to young
    I'm not really ready to fill up a hearse...
    seems like yesterday i was back on the block smokin weed wit da homies
    talkin bout givin bitches da cock
    now i'm over here fightin while they talkin about givin my bitches da cock
    were they really my dudes?? does it come as a shock??
    real niggas.. thought they was the best.. realize the best nigga's
    is the ones dumpin to my right and my left
    other ways I wouldn't have it another.. I love these nigga's for real
    they my band of brothers
    dawg we really down for each other.. my dude we really ride for each other
    come to grips fam... we'll even die for each other
    pray to god
    I don't have to take a flag to one of they mothers
    and they don't wanna take one to mine this is true brotherhood defined... loyalty can you take that from me?? ... its kinda funny
    nigga only really joined for the college money
    now i'm hear wit my buddies as infantryman facing our fears
    don't get it twisted my jobs not to die for my country
    but its to make the enemy die for theirs............

    This is a rough draft. I just thought of the idea and started typing it. I'm probably gonna redo it and put a lil more thought into it, but i thought it was a good concept and just wanted to see what it would turn out as real quick. But holla at me and let me know what y'all think. ONE
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    Re: Thoughts of a soldier

    Hey dawg, good to see u still spittin dawg. I thought u had some ill lines, and a few semi-lost ones but like u said its a rough draft.
    "(could it get worse
    yes... we hear a shot.. bullets disperse.. god i'm to young
    I'm not really ready to fill up a hearse...)"-decent, we all don't want to be there
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    now i'm hear wit my buddies as infantryman facing our fears
    don't get it twisted my jobs not to die for my country
    but its to make the enemy die for theirs............)"- my fav line. that was nice, and i totally agree with the angle. keep reppin dawg, -1- 5.25/10
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    Re: Thoughts of a soldier

    leave feed on my peace's for your links or brix or someone will close this, i'll rtf fam

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    what
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    Re: Thoughts of a soldier

    you'r om will be closed because you don't have links to where you left feed at , leave feed on my peaces or this will be closed by brix or someother mod famo.

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