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  1. #1
    Soule
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    Happy?

    I crawl beneath you're skin
    Fear dwells deep inside you
    A battle&war you cannot win
    Better think the future through
    I burn the veins that surround..
    You're deepest secrets and sins
    Creating painful memories&sounds
    Drown you in you're tears, can you swim

    ..it was a dream, now you're ready to scream

    Bring you down to you're knees
    Watch you as you begin to bleed
    And to think, you thought you were free
    This is joy amongst my own greed
    But you know, who said this is the truth
    The only thing that matters now is you
    I'm a legend, you're born new with youth
    I'm old with a pain that gathers on through

    ..may I barrow a quarter before I take you life?

    My scyth is ready, god is behind the golden gate
    The angels want to play while demons smile away
    Angel of death, you're own father; its you're fate..
    To die in the name of our family, so begin to prey
    I'm just so fucking proud of you, you kept a past on well
    Our past, was about nothing but writing and rapping
    Now you're memories dwell, going to rest in hell
    I have a question for you faggot, right now; are you happy?

    ..Now you're dead, gone; enough said.
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    Once and for all, rest in peace Proof
    You're the main reason I rap with youth
    Thankyou.
    Last edited by Soule; December 5th, 2006 at 08:54 PM

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    A Married Man Jonezy's Avatar
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    Re: Happy?

    Yeah man pretty cooll...see your improving alot.. good imagination and shit.

    nice lil poem son
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  3. #3
    Soule
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    Re: Happy?

    thanks Jonezy.

  4. #4
    Soule
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    Re: Happy?

    Bump.

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    It's Willie Baby Willy B's Avatar
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    Re: Happy?

    mmm nice....not much of a poetry reader but i liked this...good wording...nice "flow".

    good nice piece my son stay up

  6. #6
    Soule
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    Re: Happy?

    Aiight.

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    Soule
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    Re: Happy?

    Bump.

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