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    school of coke

    to start off another lonely thought or dream
    it must seem to me like another dope fiend
    cause if you scream
    im a let it scream
    and be straight up
    im a do my thing
    i never lack dope
    my sack and my rope
    and half a ounce of coke
    i dont try hard shit just falls in place
    and im overcrowwed
    in a comfortable space


    from gram to o's half's to kilos
    ill let a nigga know im not here for freetos
    i want it weighed sold straight in a fat sack
    cuz if it comes back to wrong
    that another nigga i have to wack

    all deals got to be final
    that how i sell
    and if its a problem
    ill cut ya up like caine rails
    dont ever fuck wit my shit nigga
    get you ass stuck
    you cant steal from me anyways
    cuz im always on my way to re-up

    never lookin back, on the hardest to high
    the 1st nigga to try me
    is the 1st nigga to die
    scratches became scars
    scars marked lies
    if you keep ya shit straight
    then nigga ya wise
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    "Steadly Deciding...Thoughts Sowing Deadly weather
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    Re: school of coke

    This topical was pretty good. R U a coke fiend? If not, then your rhyme was convincing. The whole piece was serious except you kinda threw it off wid this line.

    from gram to o's half's to kilos
    ill let a nigga know im not here for freetos

    Its a good multie, but the freetos thing don't really make sense. The flow was good, vocab was simple but it helped the flow. Keep practicing. Elevate

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    Re: school of coke

    this made no since
    to sart another dream it seems like a dope fiend
    come on be realistic the rhymes scheme is decent aswell maybe flow and u atleast can tell a story although very weird one at that but dude u need to peep some om's by vetse or elevated users and kinda grasp the way they're wrighting and technique are more at use....then elevate yourself and re drop this cus i believe u could have done alot more with this topic and been more creative
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    Re: school of coke

    it was suppose to show the elevation of a coke dealer(school)
    kinda like from grades k to 12 im gonna make somethen for all the grades before i record
    biggies - 10 crack commandments kinda gave me the idea to do it like this
    the freetos repesent dealers trying to blaze up with you or compensate you while your in their crib, say because their waiting on your sack
    the dope fiend was to show the love and addiction to the game
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    Re: school of coke

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    "Steadly Deciding...Thoughts Sowing Deadly weather
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    Re: school of coke

    This was a piece that was just all over the place. The thing didn't make sense, and I couldn't figure out how it fit in with the title. The rhymes were awkward and sometimes you used them twice in a rhyme, and some didn't even make sense like the line about "Fritos". You lack relevance, and you need to work that out, work on a structure, and work on making sense. This was pretty much wrecked, man. I didn't even like it, and I'm sure no one else will unless they're snorting your coke.

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    Re: school of coke

    nice topic.. creative an very convincing i felt as if it was what u was sayin as if it was a tru story nice
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    Re: school of coke

    I thought this was really good and the flow made it easy to follow... glad to see a post upped. It's been so boring here lately.
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