Yeah
I have 7 games this week, so I wanted to get this done quick.
Uhh
2-6
If I counted correctly
Yeah
I have 7 games this week, so I wanted to get this done quick.
Uhh
2-6
If I counted correctly
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Bitch, I'll disperse of you G, 'n here's your first verse of defeat
Put yourself in my position, nah... then I'd be the worst in the league
^Nah.
On route to the title? Caesar can't even be a contender thats stupid
Dawg, when Caesar posts its like the lottery, he just enters and loses
^Meh.
I've already won, he'll come with bad shit that's probably done time
Caesar will be takin' the league...down to a level worse than frontlines
^Meh.
To me, your my lesser, but I still have to say Caesar's the best...herb
The only positive shit about you, is that you are increasing my record
^Nah.
I'll son you with scars, embarase this clown and show the blunder you are
Come on faggot, your verses are limbo's, the way you drop under the bar
^No.
Queer, I spit witty intelligent punches, thats shit you lack in the head
For this to be close,
I'd have to drop dope punches, and post some fuckin' wack ones instead
^Iight.
Holding a 2-0 record, < that faggot, is shit that you aint fit to carry
Gayface you've sucked more wangs than there are in a chinese dictionary
^Okay.
Shit Caesar text is like your dick... cause girls don't feel you dude
And losing battles never will be popular, but faggot its eye deal for you
^Meh.
vs.
Arrested development–I’m everyday ppl, somebody warn da Boy u know he soft
Cuz once I get my hands Onkor its gone take 4 or 5 people to get me off
^Okay.
faggot, sure you was made fun of in school s’like it was a local tradition
Seriously Y wouldn’t u get Ragged on...when that term describes ya clothing’s condition
^Played as fuck.
listen, whore I know you poor thats Why I’m beating you in advance as if you stole
Cuz I’m sure you won’t be able to pay up–once my punch’s start taking a toll
^Meh.
Y u acting dense, We both know I’ll run str8 thru ya defense, RB style, geek
but hey maybe you’ll have better luck when you defend in your 4-3 next week
^Nah. Filler.
give it up u ain’t got a Champs mystique....
...... think u could b a contender then honestly u need be committed
w/hard work u could get used to the Padded room n Jacket that come’s wit it
^Meh.
I see the state of the league n yeah It’s a few issues But I know how to solve ‘em
& freeing ourselves of onk to start’ll be getting rid of the Kor problem
^Nah.
man, ya punch lines are gay– John Amaechi status faggot what more can I say
except the rest of the League hating ‘em like they admire Tim Hardaway
^Meh.
n I know da wordplay’s played but its appropriate since this battle’ll end in defeat
and for you it’ll be an onkor– of exactly what happened to you last week
^Meh.
Weak battle. Onkor takes it for having less bad lines.
\\//Onkor
6-3
Why didn't y'all delete my ugly ass sig while I was gone?
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Onkor
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Bitch, I'll disperse of you G, 'n here's your first verse of defeat
Put yourself in my position, nah... then I'd be the worst in the league
I think it shoulda been you in HIS postition, but I get what you were tryin to say1/2
On route to the title? Caesar can't even be a contender thats stupid
Dawg, when Caesar posts its like the lottery, he just enters and loses
Uhh... sorta decent1/2
I've already won, he'll come with bad shit that's probably done time
Caesar will be takin' the league...down to a level worse than frontlines
I liked this.2/2
To me, your my lesser, but I still have to say Caesar's the best...herb
The only positive shit about you, is that you are increasing my record
This was real good too.2/2
I'll son you with scars, embarase this clown and show the blunder you are
Come on faggot, your verses are limbo's, the way you drop under the bar
Wow, three good bars in a row.2/2
Queer, I spit witty intelligent punches, thats shit you lack in the head
For this to be close,
I'd have to drop dope punches, and post some fuckin' wack ones instead
I think it could've been worded differently1/2
Holding a 2-0 record, < that faggot, is shit that you aint fit to carry
Gayface you've sucked more wangs than there are in a chinese dictionary
There prolly aint any... lol. Proofread, like you stated.0.5/2
Shit Caesar text is like your dick... cause girls don't feel you dude
And losing battles never will be popular, but faggot its eye deal for you
Not your best, and you closer should be one of your best.1/2
Overall, a 10.5/16. This was pretty damn good in my opinion. Those three straight lines were real nice imo. Everything else was decent, you only had one bad bar. Props.
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Caesar
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Arrested development–I’m everyday ppl, somebody warn da Boy u know he soft
Cuz once I get my hands Onkor its gone take 4 or 5 people to get me off
Hmm... threatening, not harsh.0.5/2
faggot, sure you was made fun of in school s’like it was a local tradition
Seriously Y wouldn’t u get Ragged on...when that term describes ya clothing’s condition
Lol, good2/2
listen, whore I know you poor thats Why I’m beating you in advance as if you stole
Cuz I’m sure you won’t be able to pay up–once my punch’s start taking a toll
Blah... won't really feelin this1/2
Y u acting dense, We both know I’ll run str8 thru ya defense, RB style, geek
but hey maybe you’ll have better luck when you defend in your 4-3 next week
Hmmm... decent.1/2
give it up u ain’t got a Champs mystique....
...... think u could b a contender then honestly u need be committed
w/hard work u could get used to the Padded room n Jacket that come’s wit it
First line was stretched as hell. This was bad imo.0.5/2
I see the state of the league n yeah It’s a few issues But I know how to solve ‘em
& freeing ourselves of onk to start’ll be getting rid of the Kor problem
Good use of nameplay. Very clever.2/2
man, ya punch lines are gay– John Amaechi status faggot what more can I say
except the rest of the League hating ‘em like they admire Tim Hardaway
Damn, wont feelin this either man.1/2
n I know da wordplay’s played but its appropriate since this battle’ll end in defeat
and for you it’ll be an onkor– of exactly what happened to you last week
I know this shit is played on him...1/2
Overall, a 9/16. This was not as good as Onkor's verse. You had 2 good lines, and a whole lot more that I wasn't feelin AT ALL. Maybe it's the wordplay, because the shit just doesn't seem harsh. You're far from being bad, but this verse just paled in comparison to Kor's. Decent battle though.
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VOTE: Onkor
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Onkor
Bitch, I'll disperse of you G, 'n here's your first verse of defeat
Put yourself in my position, nah... then I'd be the worst in the league
nice
On route to the title? Caesar can't even be a contender thats stupid
Dawg, when Caesar posts its like the lottery, he just enters and loses
lol nice
I've already won, he'll come with bad shit that's probably done time
Caesar will be takin' the league...down to a level worse than frontlines
meh
To me, your my lesser, but I still have to say Caesar's the best...herb
The only positive shit about you, is that you are increasing my record
nice
I'll son you with scars, embarase this clown and show the blunder you are
Come on faggot, your verses are limbo's, the way you drop under the bar
lol i like this
Queer, I spit witty intelligent punches, thats shit you lack in the head
For this to be close,
I'd have to drop dope punches, and post some fuckin' wack ones instead
ok
Holding a 2-0 record, < that faggot, is shit that you aint fit to carry
Gayface you've sucked more wangs than there are in a chinese dictionary
lol but not all that effective
Shit Caesar text is like your dick... cause girls don't feel you dude
And losing battles never will be popular, but faggot its eye deal for you
weak ender
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Caesar
Arrested development–I’m everyday ppl, somebody warn da Boy u know he soft
Cuz once I get my hands Onkor its gone take 4 or 5 people to get me off
nah
faggot, sure you was made fun of in school s’like it was a local tradition
Seriously Y wouldn’t u get Ragged on...when that term describes ya clothing’s condition
meh...a bit weak and sum what ok
listen, whore I know you poor thats Why I’m beating you in advance as if you stole
Cuz I’m sure you won’t be able to pay up–once my punch’s start taking a toll
nah
Y u acting dense, We both know I’ll run str8 thru ya defense, RB style, geek
but hey maybe you’ll have better luck when you defend in your 4-3 next week
ok
give it up u ain’t got a Champs mystique....
...... think u could b a contender then honestly u need be committed
w/hard work u could get used to the Padded room n Jacket that come’s wit it
meh - 2 stretched
I see the state of the league n yeah It’s a few issues But I know how to solve ‘em
& freeing ourselves of onk to start’ll be getting rid of the Kor problem
not bad
man, ya punch lines are gay– John Amaechi status faggot what more can I say
except the rest of the League hating ‘em like they admire Tim Hardaway
weak
n I know da wordplay’s played but its appropriate since this battle’ll end in defeat
and for you it’ll be an onkor– of exactly what happened to you last week
weak ender
.
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pretty weak battle in sum spots...both came ok - caesar had sum ok wordplay, seems like he tried to be 2 creative and sum lines didn't work 4 him....they were ok attempts but they didn't hit hard enough and have that effect of the "OH" factor....as 4 onkor, he had great wordplay, sum nice consistency and good personal use....caesar had sum good personal uses 2 but they weren't as effective as he coulda made it...
v/ OnKor
BRAZIL
5-6
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Vote DQed, quoting another voters comments is lazy, inexcusable & blatantly stupid. First warning, pull this stunt again & you could be booted from the League. - D.Silver
Last edited by D.Silver; February 17th, 2007 at 01:39 PM
Bitch Im From Texas
7-5
No hate, but are you an alias?
Cause I don't think your even in the league
^^
Originally Posted by B.Nesse
Aw.Then.Tick copied and pasted that..
Seems kinda weird.
No hate though, I just don't know if Aw
is in the league
EDIT: I checked and Aw is some Tek~Nikal guy.
But I dunno why you bite from Nesse's vote.
Especially when you weren't in the league last week.
last week you did a shit of a lot better than this
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Aw.Then.Tick's Vote DQed
6 - 5 to Caesar
5-6
Upp
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To me, your my lesser, but I still have to say Caesar's the best...herb
The only positive shit about you, is that you are increasing my record
vs.
faggot, sure you was made fun of in school s’like it was a local tradition
Seriously Y wouldn’t u get Ragged on...when that term describes ya clothing’s condition
^ played and the rest had bad wording.
vote - onkor.
v/onkor
I damn sure ain't counting that. You didn't explain and After seeing you Just Post a Vote wiht no reason I see no reason to except any future Votes from you in this Battle and Don't Edit ya shit the Quote I put up there is/Was your Entire Post.
Its Even
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Why didn't y'all delete my ugly ass sig while I was gone?
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Onkor
Bitch, I'll disperse of you G, 'n here's your first verse of defeat
Put yourself in my position, nah... then I'd be the worst in the league
I've already won, he'll come with bad shit that's probably done time
Caesar will be takin' the league...down to a level worse than frontlines
Queer, I spit witty intelligent punches, thats shit you lack in the head
For this to be close,
I'd have to drop dope punches, and post some fuckin' wack ones instead
vs
Ceas
faggot, sure you was made fun of in school s’like it was a local tradition
Seriously Y wouldn’t u get Ragged on...when that term describes ya clothing’s condition
I see the state of the league n yeah It’s a few issues But I know how to solve ‘em
& freeing ourselves of onk to start’ll be getting rid of the Kor problem
n I know da wordplay’s played but its appropriate since this battle’ll end in defeat
and for you it’ll be an onkor– of exactly what happened to you last week
id say onkor took this one, damn close battle both had about the same amount of quotables... only difference was i thought the rest of onkors punches landed a little harder but not quite quotes while ceasar seemed to have a little bit of filler, both good work... seems like you are starting to elevate nicely. keep at it, good to see some good battles this week.
Vote - Onkor.
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