I'm really inspired by instrumentals, lyrics, and flows to all different kinds of music and I tend to write a lot of songs to beats. And this one I wrote to the song Cupid's Chokehold by The Gym Class Heroes. I also wrote it so that it would flow the way the real guy flows to the beat, because he kind of sings at the end of some lines, you know? Any and all criticism appreciated...
I'm being choked by this little fucker in wings,
being stabbed and poked by every lover he brings.
Left one because she had no time for me everyday,
left another and I lover her, but she lived too far away.
But this one girl right has really got me...
She's got blonde hair and blue eyes,
I know our relationship is really really live.
'Cause her tongue is in love with mine,
plus everyone says, "Together you guys looook fine."
I'm seducted by her lips,
lovin' the way it feels when I'm holdin' on to her hips.
I want us to be together like onion dip and barbeque chips,
but to me, she's acting like a real big bitch.
I'm feeling she's starting to not understand me,
like a stray cat she abandones me.
I tell her I don't love her noooo more...
and that's when she just storms right outta the door!
I met a new girl at this school I attend,
I'm thinkin' she's one of those preppy girls because of her best friends.
I really want to get to knoooow her,
she doesn't know so I got to shooow her.
I talked with her and she looked at me like I was a joke,
so I impressed her with a flow to the song I wrote.
I did what I can, but she did noooot giiive in...
What do I gotta do to impresss her?
Let her take my money, no I wont let her.
But what do I got to do?
Wont cut off my feet just to give her my damn shoes.
Her mentality is where mine caaame from,
so I have a special feeling about thiiis one.
She's got a smile and that style,
she's the type of girl I haven't seen in a while.
I really think she is theee one...
When we're around her friends she kind of ignores me,
but when we're alone she's all for me.
I used to say "she rocked myyy woorld"....
but now I know she's just another one of thoooose girls....
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