Heart in the sand

[Poeta Demonio]

[Spoken]

word really creative man....i loved it...such a short yet effective written man...the sand thing was really cool man i was inlove man...shits really ill i was thinking of something like this man...but damn you beat me...but the wording in this little poemwas cool aswell as the metaphor of cupids darts..was ill man nice shit i loved it man nice drop

[Poeta Demonio]

Thanks alot man, i was just writing stupid shit in the sang, like 'i love josie' and random stupid things out of boredom... then i just figured i'd write a piece in it lol... I'm dope like that. tehe

[Spoken]

^^you concept jacker......whore!

[Poeta Demonio]

tehe, oops... either way you're a good loser so i still love you man

[Spoken]

you fucker just cus your sexy were is my name on the roster for WV.....holla i can help.

[Soule]

Hmm. Alright, it was deffinently different. Instead of typing the verse. You carved it into sand and took pictures. Ncie job dude. It was un-original. But a great new way to do it. So I dont know. Whether I liked it or not. It was different, Not Hall of Fame. yet not bad at all. Keep it up.

Lol, ok!

The Word use was nice. But too short and simple. The Metaphores were great. The Structre was cool . This was toooooo short, but nice while it lasted. I liekd the new idea, but dont do it again please.

[Soule]

By the way, please Return The Favor with my peice Forgotten Saint.

[Poeta Demonio]

Man, that was awful feed. seriously.

I refuse to give any sort of feed to your piece untill you actually give me feed and not some un thought out bullshit. Take into consideration WHY i wrote in the sand, yet chose not to carve into stone or any other sort of canvas.

Deary me, you people.

[Soule]

there, happy?

[Poeta Demonio]

Upping

[Soule]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ah-333332.html

When you have the time please.