Losing Myself.

[Prince Escobar]

Losing Myself.
Esco 3000

i awaken to her smile,
and i lose all sense
of where i am. for
that small photographic
moment in time i'm
lost, and i love it.

old dreams of being
lost still come to me,
and yet on those rare
mornings that i awake
to my dreariest dream
my frowns find that,
something-to-lift-the
-spirits like i thought
only wine could provide.

so i sit up, of course,
hoarse and found somewhere
between last night's inebriant
and this morning's luck.

and though i'm slow to recover
she is swift to lift my senses
with the smile i know will see
no braces, a face that raises
my hope, and a nose like a rose,
honoring her mother's own.

and as it happens, things slowly
come into focus. i see the door by
the dresser is ajar, meaning the
woman i shared this bed with is
gone. my eyes again find my
daughter and i'm sewn into
her epic of this morning's muffins,
missing.
like her mother,
missing.
like her aunts,
missing.
like her father....missing.

her mother, her aunts,
her muffins, and all
together missing a bit
of myself, lost. and
when i found that,
well...what could i do,
but resign myself
to tonight's thunder
slumber's downpour
and the morning's
thirst for finding
a familiar rose,
and losing myself.

[HighEngineChief]

This was a very attractive piece, it sucks you in from the get go with it's smooth flow and excellent imagery wrapped in detailed emotion. I loved the way it read like a story and kind of oozed off the page. It was a easy read but still carrired alot of strength. I havnt seen your work on here in a while so it's nice to see that your still going strong and can still produce some really dope work. Loved the read and keep writing.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ne-333093.html
PLease RTF^^^

[Prince Escobar]

Thanks a lot man, i appreciate the feedback.

Anyone else want to get into it?

Elevation is key, 1luv.

[aLeXiO]

I really liked the imagery in this piece its well written and tells a story really well you inspire me as much as High Chief Engine does to write more constuctively so thanks

[Prince Escobar]

Thanks for the feed, elevation is key.

[Spoken]

real good eye catcher and a nice reel man. i you had such a nice story line it evolved well and just transformed such words into meaning and description ya know. it was smooth and yet rough. i cant explain it but it was abstractive at the same got damn time man...lol it was vivid man...it was like you were whispering this to me but when it came to climax sections you would yell it and suspense would kick in and i would jump man....nice.

it wasa nice clean read man. i liked it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ur-334508.html

[Prince Escobar]

Could i get some real feedback on this piece, i'd be glad to return the favor.

[urban legendz]

Yo this was really appealing I deffinently agree with high, you didn't allow me to lose track of what was going on in this piece, it was like a story once I read the first part I had to read the second and so on so on, keep the ish up famo. You made a great writier choice when you took a simplistic turn with this topic, but the question is was this too simplistic?...Idk I'll ponder that but as of now I'm deffinently nominating this piece for hof..

if you can..please hit up my piece fam...