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    Cool LiFe iz-a- LiE

    one of my peices...rate please
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    wars, cigars, pollution, inhumane slavery going on,
    neighbors fighting beating each other thinking they have won,
    humans no longer looking for enuff food or leather for support,
    carelessly hunting other innocent souls for fucking sport,
    corporate world struggling but insanely holding down their filthy fort,
    yall welcome to the 2000+ century where everything seems going wrong,
    racism, ethnicism, people xcluded lost their sense of where they belong,
    motherfucker being saying things will get better for so long,
    lower classes enslaved by those filthy companies has been the work song,
    if yall thought you really know whats going on you really dont know jack,
    govenments running sinful shit behind all of our back,
    if you discovered what you really part of youd prolly end up with a panic attack,
    making you think everything is normal but your not like you on crack,
    its like we all though we got rid of it but there still seems some sorta plague,
    television shows designed to keep many from the truths like springer and jenny craig,
    if yall though you were part of something then think again cuz your an exception,
    the only part everyhuman on earth is part of is the fucking great deception,
    thats right as each day passes you begin to find out life is made out of lies,
    mad shit happening behind our eyes, assasinations, fbi's, spies,
    youd begin to think someone is right ,when you look into it hes satan in disguise,
    political bullshit, that no-one wants to admit, so they can get what they wanted,
    the game continues on you cant quit, spies listening to your everyword what you say theyll transmit,
    shit like smoking marijuana supports terrorism and lies and shit,
    what you need to know tho we all being deceived from the truth,
    life is a lie that you make something out of its up to you to get outa the booth,

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    Is Gettin' Busy. Orikle's Avatar
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    Yo Kool, this shit aint bad, u got a nice rhyme scheme which is good to see, you show good concepts and ideas in this rap, man,

    "if yall though you were part of something then think again cuz your an exception,
    the only part everyhuman on earth is part of is the fucking great deception,"

    I liked that line dogg, keep it up yo.

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