Icarus 3-1 VS Blue Bayou 3-2

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Icarus 3-1 VS Blue Bayou 3-2
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[Icarus]

check... good luck man

[Blue Bayou]

you as well mang.

[Blue Bayou]

Homo's skills ain't even close, rep's set for destruction
Cuz if Icarus holds a candle to me..it's only an attempt at seduction
Congrats are in order, his played shits been aching dudes
Kids raps are makin history...look fresher than braking news
But now I got his head in the water, aint no breathing appartus
& i'll be holdin it down with such force it'll grant me G status
Plus i'm always on ya girl, one call i'm hittin it rookie
n while iPhone her for sex.. you had to to buy her one to get pussy
Ya just a frail bitch, we all know you're scared to fight fag
Even a panic attack would make ya start wavin the white flag
He's beatin nobody's, now in over his head without a ray of hope
Icarus been makin waves...but they only from his struggles to stay afloat
You been mamed, beatin, embarrsed.. but don't call it quits
There's still a waffer you to win...baking cookies bitch!

[Icarus]

It's like..

Contempt is bred by familiarity, and I did a search and got to know this pussy
In battles he needs no introduction, more like a funeral procession & a eulogy
So how people believe he gon last after he up n' ran from Tony B. hella fast?
It was as if Blue had a cult folllowing... him looking to 2 sacrifice his virgin ass
Plus ya verses make me hurl, a couple rushed idioms dont rock my world
& I'd tell you take things slow, but you already gotta settle for retarded girls
So pray from him coz no lie, here Im looking to skin this faggot's hide
and go to town on Bayou's face like 18th Century steamboat rides
And I'm pointing out ya every flaw, like how you quit the league before
& if u thought saying goodbye was hard then, wait til u try it w/ a broken jaw.
...after you take punches and kicks. Shit, just sign out of the league quick
..you know its for the best.. and you just above average in text bitch
So Im heated n' you gettin ethered, im pissed @ all the shit you speak of
n' I want us to look back in a year & laugh..
...but ya verse wont be funny then either

[I Got Pwnd]

Contempt is bred by familiarity, and I did a search and got to know this pussy
In battles he needs no introduction, more like a funeral procession & a eulogy
^I had a similar concept,an now why i see it was meh-ish/:
So how people believe he gon last after he up n' ran from Tony B. hella fast?
It was as if Blue had a cult folllowing... him looking to 2 sacrifice his virgin ass
^pretty cool..
Plus ya verses make me hurl, a couple rushed idioms dont rock my world
& I'd tell you take things slow, but you already gotta settle for retarded girls
^ha.
So pray from him coz no lie, here Im looking to skin this faggot's hide
and go to town on Bayou's face like 18th Century steamboat rides
^ha,ha.. nice lil history lesson
And I'm pointing out ya every flaw, like how you quit the league before
& if u thought saying goodbye was hard then, wait til u try it w/ a broken jaw.
^aight,
...after you take punches and kicks. Shit, just sign out of the league quick
..you know its for the best.. and you just above average in text bitch
^sorta weakend it,when u said ur above part-u couldve said less than.
So Im heated n' you gettin ethered, im pissed @ all the shit you speak of
n' I want us to look back in a year & laugh..
...but ya verse wont be funny then either
^lol.good closer

vs.

Homo's skills ain't even close, rep's set for destruction
Cuz if Icarus holds a candle to me..it's only an attempt at seduction
^hold a candle concepts have been used,but pretty cool.
Congrats are in order, his played shits been aching dudes
Kids raps are makin history...look fresher than braking news
^okay.
But now I got his head in the water, aint no breathing appartus
& i'll be holdin it down with such force it'll grant me G status
^aiight
Plus i'm always on ya girl, one call i'm hittin it rookie
n while iPhone her for sex.. you had to to buy her one to get pussy
^lol.
Ya just a frail bitch, we all know you're scared to fight fag
Even a panic attack would make ya start wavin the white flag
^ha
He's beatin nobody's, now in over his head without a ray of hope
Icarus been makin waves...but they only from his struggles to stay afloat
^ha,haaa
You been mamed, beatin, embarrsed.. but don't call it quits
There's still a waffer you to win...baking cookies bitch!
^pretty damn corny,but cool wordplay.. i likes.

Overall/-Pretty good battle.. Im amazed noone voted yet.. alotta flipd concepts.. but still pretty cool..I got blue by a smidget.. Ic came good too.. but i got blue in the quotes.. good battle,props to u both..

V/-Blue

[Chrit.]

v/ Blue

[Phil Benjamin]

Homo's skills ain't even close, rep's set for destruction
Cuz if Icarus holds a candle to me..it's only an attempt at seduction
^^^weak opener
Congrats are in order, his played shits been aching dudes
Kids raps are makin history...look fresher than braking news
^^^good
But now I got his head in the water, aint no breathing appartus
& i'll be holdin it down with such force it'll grant me G status
^^^good i liked this
Plus i'm always on ya girl, one call i'm hittin it rookie
n while iPhone her for sex.. you had to to buy her one to get pussy
^^^lolol
Ya just a frail bitch, we all know you're scared to fight fag
Even a panic attack would make ya start wavin the white flag
^^^decent
He's beatin nobody's, now in over his head without a ray of hope
Icarus been makin waves...but they only from his struggles to stay afloat
^^^nice
You been mamed, beatin, embarrsed.. but don't call it quits
There's still a waffer you to win...baking cookies bitch!
^^^nah at this closer


vs


Contempt is bred by familiarity, and I did a search and got to know this pussy
In battles he needs no introduction, more like a funeral procession & a eulogy
^^^Good opener
So how people believe he gon last after he up n' ran from Tony B. hella fast?
It was as if Blue had a cult folllowing... him looking to 2 sacrifice his virgin ass
^^^nah
Plus ya verses make me hurl, a couple rushed idioms dont rock my world
& I'd tell you take things slow, but you already gotta settle for retarded girls
^^^lol funny/good
So pray from him coz no lie, here Im looking to skin this faggot's hide
and go to town on Bayou's face like 18th Century steamboat rides
^^^decent at best
And I'm pointing out ya every flaw, like how you quit the league before
& if u thought saying goodbye was hard then, wait til u try it w/ a broken jaw.
^^^nah
...after you take punches and kicks. Shit, just sign out of the league quick
..you know its for the best.. and you just above average in text bitch
^^^played
So Im heated n' you gettin ethered, im pissed @ all the shit you speak of
n' I want us to look back in a year & laugh..
...but ya verse wont be funny then either
^^^weak closer

V/blue, this was a decent one both haad some good punchs, ica had the opener that was pretty good, you feel off in alot of partss some your concepts need work.blue had a more consistent verse with harder hitting punchs.

[Born To Kill]

Homo's skills ain't even close, rep's set for destruction
Cuz if Icarus holds a candle to me..it's only an attempt at seduction
Nice opener...funny...
Congrats are in order, his played shits been aching dudes
Kids raps are makin history...look fresher than braking news
Ha!
But now I got his head in the water, aint no breathing appartus
& i'll be holdin it down with such force it'll grant me G status
Very clever...
Plus i'm always on ya girl, one call i'm hittin it rookie
n while iPhone her for sex.. you had to to buy her one to get pussy
Eh...not as good as the last few...
Ya just a frail bitch, we all know you're scared to fight fag
Even a panic attack would make ya start wavin the white flag
Eh again...
He's beatin nobody's, now in over his head without a ray of hope
Icarus been makin waves...but they only from his struggles to stay afloat
Better, but...still kinda eh...
You been mamed, beatin, embarrsed.. but don't call it quits
There's still a waffer you to win...baking cookies bitch!
No.

Vs

Contempt is bred by familiarity, and I did a search and got to know this pussy
In battles he needs no introduction, more like a funeral procession & a eulogy
Eh...his opener was better...
So how people believe he gon last after he up n' ran from Tony B. hella fast?
It was as if Blue had a cult folllowing... him looking to 2 sacrifice his virgin ass
Nice...funny shit...
Plus ya verses make me hurl, a couple rushed idioms dont rock my world
& I'd tell you take things slow, but you already gotta settle for retarded girls
Wording, funny still...
So pray from him coz no lie, here Im looking to skin this faggot's hide
and go to town on Bayou's face like 18th Century steamboat rides
Hahahaha!
And I'm pointing out ya every flaw, like how you quit the league before
& if u thought saying goodbye was hard then, wait til u try it w/ a broken jaw.
Nice...I like alot...
...after you take punches and kicks. Shit, just sign out of the league quick
..you know its for the best.. and you just above average in text bitch
Eh...
So Im heated n' you gettin ethered, im pissed @ all the shit you speak of
n' I want us to look back in a year & laugh..
...but ya verse wont be funny then either
Eh again...weak close...

I'm thinking Icarus by a tiny, tiny hair...very close...
But, to me...Blue fell off towards the end...more consistency from Icarus...
Barely.

Icarus

Peace

[Big Question]

Homo's skills ain't even close, rep's set for destruction
Cuz if Icarus holds a candle to me..it's only an attempt at seduction
COOL
Congrats are in order, his played shits been aching dudes
Kids raps are makin history...look fresher than braking news
COOL
But now I got his head in the water, aint no breathing appartus
& i'll be holdin it down with such force it'll grant me G status
OK
Plus i'm always on ya girl, one call i'm hittin it rookie
n while iPhone her for sex.. you had to to buy her one to get pussy
HEH
Ya just a frail bitch, we all know you're scared to fight fag
Even a panic attack would make ya start wavin the white flag
NAH
He's beatin nobody's, now in over his head without a ray of hope
Icarus been makin waves...but they only from his struggles to stay afloat
COOL
You been mamed, beatin, embarrsed.. but don't call it quits
There's still a waffer you to win...baking cookies bitch!
WAFFER?, MEH

VS

Contempt is bred by familiarity, and I did a search and got to know this pussy
In battles he needs no introduction, more like a funeral procession & a eulogy
NOT REALLY
So how people believe he gon last after he up n' ran from Tony B. hella fast?
It was as if Blue had a cult folllowing... him looking to 2 sacrifice his virgin ass
DECENT
Plus ya verses make me hurl, a couple rushed idioms dont rock my world
& I'd tell you take things slow, but you already gotta settle for retarded girls
COOLISH
So pray from him coz no lie, here Im looking to skin this faggot's hide
and go to town on Bayou's face like 18th Century steamboat rides
COOL
And I'm pointing out ya every flaw, like how you quit the league before
& if u thought saying goodbye was hard then, wait til u try it w/ a broken jaw.
MEH
...after you take punches and kicks. Shit, just sign out of the league quick
..you know its for the best.. and you just above average in text bitch
OK
So Im heated n' you gettin ethered, im pissed @ all the shit you speak of
n' I want us to look back in a year & laugh..
...but ya verse wont be funny then either
MEH

VOTEAGE FOR BLUE BAYOU. FUNNIER VERSE.

V/BLUE

[Erupt]

Blue wins 4-1 and goes to 4-2
Icarus loses and is 3-2