10 lines
check in 10
drop by midnite
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ill check in after you
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pz.
10 lines
check in 10
drop by midnite
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ill check in after you
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pz.
This nigga ray want 3 battles he cant stand after this one cuz he leanin, cuz if ray think about winning he like young jeezy he must be dreamin
Im a threat so beware, cuz shit get uglyier then britney spears after she cut off all her hair
I got that full clip if u on that beef shit, you can bring more niggas then the one blood remix
Hit ray up it nothing, when it comes to these bullets they like jay-z he catch bout 30 something
CashBoy i bang with anybody, shot take off ray body parts now he aint got anybody(get it)
Cuz ray u a straight hoe, i go in ur pocket and take the cake this not a game show
you were supposed to check verses were due midnite but o well ill be droppin b4 then
but anyways...check
i went u go i dont have to warm up go practice and still spit an it sem like u just gettin warm up how u want it
^^i couldnt understand a word you said lol
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anyways backk to business
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all ya verses played drop some dope shit for once in ya life
cash boys dropes are like fags gettin married
..............................cuz evryone says fuck ya gay writes
iight so dude jus quit this text shit it aint getting you fame
cash Umass so many losses
……………...the college team holds their heads in shame
and please duke stop braggin you aint a legend wit clout
on the real you leave pple on the edge of they seats...jus trynna sneak out
Don't test me man, or your face'll catch such a beating dude
That it'll make Ash Ketchum regret taking a pikachu
^^i couldnt understand a word you said lol
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anyways backk to business
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all ya verses played drop some dope shit for once in ya life
cash boys dropes are like fags gettin married
..............................cuz evryone says fuck ya gay writes
iight so dude jus quit this text shit it aint getting you fame
cash Umass so many losses
……………...the college team holds their heads in shame
and please duke stop braggin you aint a legend wit clout
on the real you leave pple on the edge of they seats...jus trynna sneak out
Don't test me man, or your face'll catch such a beating dude
That it'll make Ash Ketchum regret taking a pikachu
nothin
-vs-
and please duke stop braggin you aint a legend wit clout
on the real you leave pple on the edge of they seats...jus trynna sneak out
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summary- basically this was a 1 sided battle in which Ray destroyed young cashboy with an overall much better verse in all sections..i,e. punches, structure, vocab.. Cashboy first things first you need to improve on that sturcture you persist to use, you've been told again and again to fix it but still havent. and also tone down on the self glory cash, it doesnt wotk
Vote- Ray Pue
Cash...ur structure will do nothing but lose u battles, cuz its hard to develop a set up n a punch with how you do it, cuz its so inconsistent etc...also its not like u didnt have some nice thoughts,just wording killed it..and some self glory doesnt help either...
Raypue.....some ok lines, ur closer was gay the pikachu thing NO...however the bar above that the "sneak out" one that was really nice, i liked that all in all. your punches were a little underdeveloped, and that hurt and the umass one was nice aswell..so you had nice punches..and overall deserve a win.
VOTE/Ray Pue..
get at one of my threads...thanx
Succeed Without Fear
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Don't test me man, or your face'll catch such a beating dude
That it'll make Ash Ketchum regret taking a pikachu
[wtf, lol - this is a perfect example of wp not making that a good punch]
anyways the rest of your stuff wasnt bad, seen the edge of the seat punch before
Cash learn to throw punches instead of flowing unorginal content, you will not win any battles until you do
v/RP
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Decent battle,
Cash - you seriusli need to work on your structure althou you did have some decent concepts you punches and set ups wer kinda inconsistent
Ray - pretty nyc verse....some hard hitting punches and the fact they wernt too technical was nyc, Decent concepts some of the wer a lil wierd (pikachu...?) but you took the win.
\/ - Ray
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bump 5 the final bump close this shiit peoples...........................leave links and illl hit them up honestly..
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