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aka the season champ match.
i'm gonna say 24, but max out at 30.
there's only one season champ up in this thread
but good luck to you nonetheless. 30's good.
pretty cocky, huh joseph? listen bitch..Originally Posted by $pitacular
it's ironic that you would say that..it's pretty damn conceited, wow..
that's a 99.9% promise that'll get broken..like the reason you're breathing now
so lose the ego pal, i know you like to compensate by gloating faggot
cuz girls put ya dick under a microscope more than Question's voting habits
you're trash, it's unanimous..i don't need to ask these cats to poll
you write so bad santa'll replace your pen with a fucking sack of coal
you can say i'm gassed up for no reason but i'm scoping ya lies kid
how do i suck? when last week you thought my verse was doper than I did
instead of praising me you oughta focus on dropping a witty verse
n i know you'll come ready for me..equipped with pom-poms n a mini skirt
ya getting worse, shoulda stayed gone when you left from the site
your 15 minutes are up..n i'm callin dibs on ya wife for the rest of the night
dawg i'm fresh when i write so saying you'll beat me is kinda silly
i'm a force to be reckoned with..you're just a fag who steals lines from Philly
you used to drop ancient punches, you know me homie i speak bold
looks like you're improving now..writing concepts that are only a week old
it's puzzling you say you get laid a lot, i'll pick apart the jumble
your sex life is busy..to the point you even developed carpal tunnel
ya senile ass says you'll get to the finals with your so-called verse
n i'm sure you'll be competing with Born, to see who's gonna go bald first
yo but you're still my dawg though you may need to practice a bit
cuz even if you fell off..i know you'd lift yourself right back on my dick
damn what happened to $pit? guess ya better days are through bitch
been around the block a few times..n even have the tired cliches to prove it
i stay abusive n i'ma slap this whiny bitch cuz he's a pretender
you were a wild card, now you're acting more like a queen with a temper
cute chicks on both ya sides, but all you'll ever get's a hug g
cuz we know girls try n look hotter but kicking it with a bitch that's ugly
$pit is fugly, with the type of grill you shouldn't look at long
n after this face-off..try finding a fucking decent one to put back on
that was ^ predictable, but you ain't the head they're choosing
n shit, if i wanted to be obvious..i should've just said you're losing
32.
go home faggot.
* if you didn't get the philly line..
Last edited by SmokaJoka; November 3rd, 2007 at 02:38 AM Reason: Changed Font by Request
lmao. you shoulda tried harder.
I'm bringin the heat evil. but we'll always be cool.. man we's people
I remember all the times we shared... my lines so you could beat Feeble
once I'm gone, you'll still be in my shadow.. never forget it man it's true
cuz if my memory serves correct... even my memory's better than you
oh n' say hi to ya Mom. I could say things that'd make you disgusted
but homie I got respect, so I'll show you honor.... face where I busted
try to be a thug like $pit. don't know why you wanna copy a genius
Ryan everytime you do dirt, you just end up with rocks in ya penis
n' faggot I mean this.. you don't have the talent to beat me
but hey if you develop your skills, you can make a photo album of feces
it's no surprise... you can't whip this. you a bitch in disguise
trust me... if I catch 40 lashes, it'll be on my fists from your eyes
but I can't lie. I admire your talent. hope you shine, forever gleam
homie I wish the best.... that second place could ever bring
quit tryin to wile out.. c'mon man lets jus put shit on the table
yeah you're rockin a fresh style now.. but it still says $pit on the label
I was your mentor. not ya friend.. so all that fakin need to quit
there's iPhones now.. I don't need a side-kick you outdated piece of shit
heard you working at Sears. see the truth hits a fool in his face
they got all that Craftsman.. n' you're the biggest tool in the place
n' goddamn you're white.. anyone light sensitive is in for a shock
your face is so pasty... no wonder you're always glued to my cock
sure you can win when you want to. n' ya flow's fluid when you rap
I never woulda guessed I'd stomp you.. cuz homie I knew it for a fact
you blew it man ya wack. you're in trouble chump I'ma whore
we'll just call you LayLay... the way you'll be doubled-up on the floor
it's too bad.. what a waste.. all the lines you been savin to win
but if you play your role right, you might put out the flames on ya skin
n' don't call my baby a slut. listen man that's the wrong direction
cuz my daughter's too good for you... n' she ain't even started textin
I know you're hungry for the title. but my punches sting ya face
don't worry your day's coming... I won't be signing in for season eight
you're done bitch.
Last edited by $pitacular; November 2nd, 2007 at 08:42 PM
pretty cocky, huh joseph? listen bitch..
it's ironic that you would say that..it's pretty damn conceited, wow..
that's a 99.9% promise that'll get broken..like the reason you're breathing now
wasnt feelin
so lose the ego pal, i know you like to compensate by gloating faggot
cuz girls put ya dick under a microscope more than Question's voting habits
lol funny shit
you're trash, it's unanimous..i don't need to ask these cats to poll
you write so bad santa'll replace your pen with a fucking sack of coal
cheesy
you can say i'm gassed up for no reason but i'm scoping ya lies kid
how do i suck? when last week you thought my verse was doper than I did
haha nice
instead of praising me you oughta focus on dropping a witty verse
n i know you'll come ready for me..equipped with pom-poms n a mini skirt
decent at best
ya getting worse, shoulda stayed gone when you left from the site
your 15 minutes are up..n i'm callin dibs on ya wife for the rest of the night
ouch
dawg i'm fresh when i write so saying you'll beat me is kinda silly
i'm a force to be reckoned with..you're just a fag who steals lines from Philly
na
you used to drop ancient punches, you know me homie i speak bold
looks like you're improving now..writing concepts that are only a week old
lol aight
it's puzzling you say you get laid a lot, i'll pick apart the jumble
your sex life is busy..to the point you even developed carpal tunnel
na
ya senile ass says you'll get to the finals with your so-called verse
n i'm sure you'll be competing with Born, to see who's gonna go bald first
lol..
yo but you're still my dawg though you may need to practice a bit
cuz even if you fell off..i know you'd lift yourself right back on my dick
ight
damn what happened to $pit? guess ya better days are through bitch
been around the block a few times..n even have the tired cliches to prove it
na
i stay abusive n i'ma slap this whiny bitch cuz he's a pretender
you were a wild card, now you're acting more like a queen with a temper
haha dope
cute chicks on both ya sides, but all you'll ever get's a hug g
cuz we know girls try n look hotter but kicking it with a bitch that's ugly
decent
$pit is fugly, with the type of grill you shouldn't look at long
n after this face-off..try finding a fucking decent one to put back on
lol nice hit
that was ^ predictable, but you ain't the head they're choosing
n shit, if i wanted to be obvious..i should've just said you're losing
ehh not a very harsh close
Vs
I'm bringin the heat evil. but we'll always be cool.. man we's people
I remember all the times we shared... my lines so you could beat Feeble
damn.. ouch
once I'm gone, you'll still be in my shadow.. never forget it man it's true
cuz if my memory serves correct... even my memory's better than you
Lmfao
oh n' say hi to ya Mom. I could say things that'd make you disgusted
but homie I got respect, so I'll show you honor.... face where I busted
nooo
try to be a thug like $pit. don't know why you wanna copy a genius
Ryan everytime you do dirt, you just end up with rocks in ya penis
ehh this was off
n' faggot I mean this.. you don't have the talent to beat me
but hey if you develop your skills, you can make a photo album of feces
lol corny but coo
it's no surprise... you can't whip this. you a bitch in disguise
trust me... if I catch 40 lashes, it'll be on my fists from your eyes
ight
but I can't lie. I admire your talent. hope you shine, forever gleam
homie I wish the best.... that second place could ever bring
haha ight
quit tryin to wile out.. c'mon man lets jus put shit on the table
yeah you're rockin a fresh style now.. but it still says $pit on the label
coo
I was your mentor. not ya friend.. so all that fakin need to quit
there's iPhones now.. I don't need a side-kick you outdated piece of shit
na
heard you working at Sears. see the truth hits a fool in his face
they got all that Craftsman.. n' you're the biggest tool in the place
lol nice
n' goddamn you're white.. anyone light sensitive is in for a shock
your face is so pasty... no wonder you're always glued to my cock
na
sure you can win when you want to. n' ya flow's fluid when you rap
I never woulda guessed I'd stomp you.. cuz homie I knew it for a fact
ight hit
you blew it man ya wack. you're in trouble chump I'ma whore
we'll just call you LayLay... the way you'll be doubled-up on the floor
wasnt feelin the wording
it's too bad.. what a waste.. all the lines you been savin to win
but if you play your role right, you might put out the flames on ya skin
dope
n' don't call my baby a slut. listen man that's the wrong direction
cuz my daughter's too good for you... n' she ain't even started textin
nice hit
now you wanna fight, think you sick? ..shit bring it I'm the cure
you'll throw with all your might... me dog I'm swingin my for sures
ight this was coo
I know you're hungry for the title. but my punches sting ya face
don't worry your day's coming... I won't be signing in for season eight
direct close.. simple but good
just seen it N thought i'd vote.. not gonna count but o well.. this battle was pretty good.. lay came above average as usuall but i felt he was outshined by $pit in this one.. spit picked up steam at the end and shut it down.. good showing from both.
$pit got it
- ghost
Vote Disqualified, you were banned from LLL and RB for biting.
-Smoka
Last edited by SmokaJoka; November 3rd, 2007 at 02:41 AM
it's ironic that you would say that..it's pretty damn conceited, wow..
that's a 99.9% promise that'll get broken..like the reason you're breathing now
Hmm...
so lose the ego pal, i know you like to compensate by gloating faggot
cuz girls put ya dick under a microscope more than Question's voting habits
Hahaha!
you're trash, it's unanimous..i don't need to ask these cats to poll
you write so bad santa'll replace your pen with a fucking sack of coal
Uh..no.
you can say i'm gassed up for no reason but i'm scoping ya lies kid
how do i suck? when last week you thought my verse was doper than I did
Eh...
instead of praising me you oughta focus on dropping a witty verse
n i know you'll come ready for me..equipped with pom-poms n a mini skirt
Ok, I guess...nothing wow so far.
ya getting worse, shoulda stayed gone when you left from the site
your 15 minutes are up..n i'm callin dibs on ya wife for the rest of the night
Hahaha! Though sloppy seconds are nasty...
dawg i'm fresh when i write so saying you'll beat me is kinda silly
i'm a force to be reckoned with..you're just a fag who steals lines from Philly
Eh...
you used to drop ancient punches, you know me homie i speak bold
looks like you're improving now..writing concepts that are only a week old
Eh again...
it's puzzling you say you get laid a lot, i'll pick apart the jumble
your sex life is busy..to the point you even developed carpal tunnel
Haha, sorta.
ya senile ass says you'll get to the finals with your so-called verse
n i'm sure you'll be competing with Born, to see who's gonna go bald first
Haha! Funny.
yo but you're still my dawg though you may need to practice a bit
cuz even if you fell off..i know you'd lift yourself right back on my dick
No, ancient concept...blah.
damn what happened to $pit? guess ya better days are through bitch
been around the block a few times..n even have the tired cliches to prove it
Tire/tired...ok...aight...just that...
i stay abusive n i'ma slap this whiny bitch cuz he's a pretender
you were a wild card, now you're acting more like a queen with a temper
Better...
cute chicks on both ya sides, but all you'll ever get's a hug g
cuz we know girls try n look hotter but kicking it with a bitch that's ugly
Hahahahahahaha! Best punch so far!
$pit is fugly, with the type of grill you shouldn't look at long
n after this face-off..try finding a fucking decent one to put back on
Ok, not great, not bad...
that was ^ predictable, but you ain't the head they're choosing
n shit, if i wanted to be obvious..i should've just said you're losing
No.
Not the sharpest verse I've seen from Lay.
Still, some nice zingers!
VS
I'm bringin the heat evil. but we'll always be cool.. man we's people
I remember all the times we shared... my lines so you could beat Feeble
Better than his opener...but still, predictable punch.
once I'm gone, you'll still be in my shadow.. never forget it man it's true
cuz if my memory serves correct... even my memory's better than you
Hahahaha!
oh n' say hi to ya Mom. I could say things that'd make you disgusted
but homie I got respect, so I'll show you honor.... face where I busted
Hahahaha!
try to be a thug like $pit. don't know why you wanna copy a genius
Ryan everytime you do dirt, you just end up with rocks in ya penis
Not so much...
n' faggot I mean this.. you don't have the talent to beat me
but hey if you develop your skills, you can make a photo album of feces
Ouch...
it's no surprise... you can't whip this. you a bitch in disguise
trust me... if I catch 40 lashes, it'll be on my fists from your eyes
Cool...
but I can't lie. I admire your talent. hope you shine, forever gleam
homie I wish the best.... that second place could ever bring
Eh...
quit tryin to wile out.. c'mon man lets jus put shit on the table
yeah you're rockin a fresh style now.. but it still says $pit on the label
Eh...same as the opener...blah...
I was your mentor. not ya friend.. so all that fakin need to quit
there's iPhones now.. I don't need a side-kick you outdated piece of shit
Nice.
heard you working at Sears. see the truth hits a fool in his face
they got all that Craftsman.. n' you're the biggest tool in the place
Damn, Spit...
n' goddamn you're white.. anyone light sensitive is in for a shock
your face is so pasty... no wonder you're always glued to my cock
Eh...aight, but second rate concept...
sure you can win when you want to. n' ya flow's fluid when you rap
I never woulda guessed I'd stomp you.. cuz homie I knew it for a fact
Haha!
you blew it man ya wack. you're in trouble chump I'ma whore
we'll just call you LayLay... the way you'll be doubled-up on the floor
To me, very clever...nice-ity!
it's too bad.. what a waste.. all the lines you been savin to win
but if you play your role right, you might put out the flames on ya skin
Eh...decent flip, but still eh-ish...
n' don't call my baby a slut. listen man that's the wrong direction
cuz my daughter's too good for you... n' she ain't even started textin
NOT!
I know you're hungry for the title. but my punches sting ya face
don't worry your day's coming... I won't be signing in for season eight
Blah!
I liked Spit's better...made me wince a couple of times for ya, Lay.
Vote: Spit
so lose the ego pal, i know you like to compensate by gloating faggot
cuz girls put ya dick under a microscope more than Question's voting habits
you can say i'm gassed up for no reason but i'm scoping ya lies kid
how do i suck? when last week you thought my verse was doper than I did
ya getting worse, shoulda stayed gone when you left from the site
your 15 minutes are up..n i'm callin dibs on ya wife for the rest of the night
dawg i'm fresh when i write so saying you'll beat me is kinda silly
i'm a force to be reckoned with..you're just a fag who steals lines from Philly
you used to drop ancient punches, you know me homie i speak bold
looks like you're improving now..writing concepts that are only a week old
ya senile ass says you'll get to the finals with your so-called verse
n i'm sure you'll be competing with Born, to see who's gonna go bald first
cute chicks on both ya sides, but all you'll ever get's a hug g
cuz we know girls try n look hotter but kicking it with a bitch that's ugly
vs.
once I'm gone, you'll still be in my shadow.. never forget it man it's true
cuz if my memory serves correct... even my memory's better than you
oh n' say hi to ya Mom. I could say things that'd make you disgusted
but homie I got respect, so I'll show you honor.... face where I busted
n' faggot I mean this.. you don't have the talent to beat me
but hey if you develop your skills, you can make a photo album of feces
n' goddamn you're white.. anyone light sensitive is in for a shock
your face is so pasty... no wonder you're always glued to my cock
I know you're hungry for the title. but my punches sting ya face
don't worry your day's coming... I won't be signing in for season eight
$pit had alot of shit that just didn't hit hard....I saw the Craftsman punch coming from a mile away....Iphone line was meh...penis/rocks line was kinda corny...but the lines he did have hit....Lay would be like one meh line then at least 3 good ones...he had a much more consistent verse, and better personals, plus the line of the battle...either way if I win against Born it looks like I'll have to try harder next week...good read from you both...but honestly Lay took it rather smoothly with the good use of personals...and the truth hurts more than nothingness...
Vote - Lay Doubt.
Last edited by SmokaJoka; November 3rd, 2007 at 01:27 AM Reason: more detailed vote
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pretty cocky, huh joseph? listen bitch..
it's ironic that you would say that..it's pretty damn conceited, wow..
that's a 99.9% promise that'll get broken..like the reason you're breathing now
meh
so lose the ego pal, i know you like to compensate by gloating faggot
cuz girls put ya dick under a microscope more than Question's voting habits
ha
you're trash, it's unanimous..i don't need to ask these cats to poll
you write so bad santa'll replace your pen with a fucking sack of coal
ha
you can say i'm gassed up for no reason but i'm scoping ya lies kid
how do i suck? when last week you thought my verse was doper than I did
lol
instead of praising me you oughta focus on dropping a witty verse
n i know you'll come ready for me..equipped with pom-poms n a mini skirt
coo
ya getting worse, shoulda stayed gone when you left from the site
your 15 minutes are up..n i'm callin dibs on ya wife for the rest of the night
haha
dawg i'm fresh when i write so saying you'll beat me is kinda silly
i'm a force to be reckoned with..you're just a fag who steals lines from Philly
iight @ best =]
you used to drop ancient punches, you know me homie i speak bold
looks like you're improving now..writing concepts that are only a week old
coo, knew this was coming soon
it's puzzling you say you get laid a lot, i'll pick apart the jumble
your sex life is busy..to the point you even developed carpal tunnel
meh
ya senile ass says you'll get to the finals with your so-called verse
n i'm sure you'll be competing with Born, to see who's gonna go bald first
haha
yo but you're still my dawg though you may need to practice a bit
cuz even if you fell off..i know you'd lift yourself right back on my dick
played
damn what happened to $pit? guess ya better days are through bitch
been around the block a few times..n even have the tired cliches to prove it
reaching
i stay abusive n i'ma slap this whiny bitch cuz he's a pretender
you were a wild card, now you're acting more like a queen with a temper
iight
cute chicks on both ya sides, but all you'll ever get's a hug g
cuz we know girls try n look hotter but kicking it with a bitch that's ugly
ha
$pit is fugly, with the type of grill you shouldn't look at long
n after this face-off..try finding a fucking decent one to put back on
meh
that was ^ predictable, but you ain't the head they're choosing
n shit, if i wanted to be obvious..i should've just said you're losing
meh
vs
I'm bringin the heat evil. but we'll always be cool.. man we's people
I remember all the times we shared... my lines so you could beat Feeble
meh
once I'm gone, you'll still be in my shadow.. never forget it man it's true
cuz if my memory serves correct... even my memory's better than you
haha, coo
oh n' say hi to ya Mom. I could say things that'd make you disgusted
but homie I got respect, so I'll show you honor.... face where I busted
ha
try to be a thug like $pit. don't know why you wanna copy a genius
Ryan everytime you do dirt, you just end up with rocks in ya penis
meh
n' faggot I mean this.. you don't have the talent to beat me
but hey if you develop your skills, you can make a photo album of feces
develop/photo punches are done man... iight flip @ best tho
it's no surprise... you can't whip this. you a bitch in disguise
trust me... if I catch 40 lashes, it'll be on my fists from your eyes
seen something like this from u on PR
but I can't lie. I admire your talent. hope you shine, forever gleam
homie I wish the best.... that second place could ever bring
meh/iight, i got a chuckle
quit tryin to wile out.. c'mon man lets jus put shit on the table
yeah you're rockin a fresh style now.. but it still says $pit on the label
haha, nice
I was your mentor. not ya friend.. so all that fakin need to quit
there's iPhones now.. I don't need a side-kick you outdated piece of shit
haha
heard you working at Sears. see the truth hits a fool in his face
they got all that Craftsman.. n' you're the biggest tool in the place
ha
n' goddamn you're white.. anyone light sensitive is in for a shock
your face is so pasty... no wonder you're always glued to my cock
lol
sure you can win when you want to. n' ya flow's fluid when you rap
I never woulda guessed I'd stomp you.. cuz homie I knew it for a fact
iight
you blew it man ya wack. you're in trouble chump I'ma whore
we'll just call you LayLay... the way you'll be doubled-up on the floor
meh
it's too bad.. what a waste.. all the lines you been savin to win
but if you play your role right, you might put out the flames on ya skin
iight
n' don't call my baby a slut. listen man that's the wrong direction
cuz my daughter's too good for you... n' she ain't even started textin
meh
I know you're hungry for the title. but my punches sting ya face
don't worry your day's coming... I won't be signing in for season eight
haha
V/lay for a harder verse
pretty cocky, huh joseph? listen bitch..
it's ironic that you would say that..it's pretty damn conceited, wow..
that's a 99.9% promise that'll get broken..like the reason you're breathing now
MEH
so lose the ego pal, i know you like to compensate by gloating faggot
cuz girls put ya dick under a microscope more than Question's voting habits
LOL
you're trash, it's unanimous..i don't need to ask these cats to poll
you write so bad santa'll replace your pen with a fucking sack of coal
CORNY BUT GOT A CHUCKLE
you can say i'm gassed up for no reason but i'm scoping ya lies kid
how do i suck? when last week you thought my verse was doper than I did
NOT FEELIN
instead of praising me you oughta focus on dropping a witty verse
n i know you'll come ready for me..equipped with pom-poms n a mini skirt
MEH
ya getting worse, shoulda stayed gone when you left from the site
your 15 minutes are up..n i'm callin dibs on ya wife for the rest of the night
OK
dawg i'm fresh when i write so saying you'll beat me is kinda silly
i'm a force to be reckoned with..you're just a fag who steals lines from Philly
OK
you used to drop ancient punches, you know me homie i speak bold
looks like you're improving now..writing concepts that are only a week old
MEH
it's puzzling you say you get laid a lot, i'll pick apart the jumble
your sex life is busy..to the point you even developed carpal tunnel
HEH
ya senile ass says you'll get to the finals with your so-called verse
n i'm sure you'll be competing with Born, to see who's gonna go bald first
HAHA
yo but you're still my dawg though you may need to practice a bit
cuz even if you fell off..i know you'd lift yourself right back on my dick
NO
damn what happened to $pit? guess ya better days are through bitch
been around the block a few times..n even have the tired cliches to prove it
AHA, COOL FLIP
i stay abusive n i'ma slap this whiny bitch cuz he's a pretender
you were a wild card, now you're acting more like a queen with a temper
OH, NICE
cute chicks on both ya sides, but all you'll ever get's a hug g
cuz we know girls try n look hotter but kicking it with a bitch that's ugly
MEH
$pit is fugly, with the type of grill you shouldn't look at long
n after this face-off..try finding a fucking decent one to put back on
OK, SEEN IT BEFORE OTHERWISE..
that was ^ predictable, but you ain't the head they're choosing
n shit, if i wanted to be obvious..i should've just said you're losing
NAH
vs
I'm bringin the heat evil. but we'll always be cool.. man we's people
I remember all the times we shared... my lines so you could beat Feeble
HA
once I'm gone, you'll still be in my shadow.. never forget it man it's true
cuz if my memory serves correct... even my memory's better than you
COOL
oh n' say hi to ya Mom. I could say things that'd make you disgusted
but homie I got respect, so I'll show you honor.... face where I busted
MEH
try to be a thug like $pit. don't know why you wanna copy a genius
Ryan everytime you do dirt, you just end up with rocks in ya penis
OK
n' faggot I mean this.. you don't have the talent to beat me
but hey if you develop your skills, you can make a photo album of feces
NICE
it's no surprise... you can't whip this. you a bitch in disguise
trust me... if I catch 40 lashes, it'll be on my fists from your eyes
TOO PLAYED A CONCEPT
but I can't lie. I admire your talent. hope you shine, forever gleam
homie I wish the best.... that second place could ever bring
OK
quit tryin to wile out.. c'mon man lets jus put shit on the table
yeah you're rockin a fresh style now.. but it still says $pit on the label
OH, GOOD HIT
I was your mentor. not ya friend.. so all that fakin need to quit
there's iPhones now.. I don't need a side-kick you outdated piece of shit
OK
heard you working at Sears. see the truth hits a fool in his face
they got all that Craftsman.. n' you're the biggest tool in the place
HAHA
n' goddamn you're white.. anyone light sensitive is in for a shock
your face is so pasty... no wonder you're always glued to my cock
GOOD
sure you can win when you want to. n' ya flow's fluid when you rap
I never woulda guessed I'd stomp you.. cuz homie I knew it for a fact
DECENT
you blew it man ya wack. you're in trouble chump I'ma whore
we'll just call you LayLay... the way you'll be doubled-up on the floor
NAH
it's too bad.. what a waste.. all the lines you been savin to win
but if you play your role right, you might put out the flames on ya skin
NAH
n' don't call my baby a slut. listen man that's the wrong direction
cuz my daughter's too good for you... n' she ain't even started textin
MEH
I know you're hungry for the title. but my punches sting ya face
don't worry your day's coming... I won't be signing in for season eight
OK
NICE BATTLE GUYS. I THINK QUOTABLES WERE FAIRLY EVEN, MAYBE SPIT JUST EDGED IT HERE, PLUS ID SAY SPIT HAD A LIL MORE CONSISTENCY TOO EVEN THO HE FELL OFF AT THE END, OVERALL YOU BOTH HAD SOME FUNNY SHIT AND WHOEVER WINS WILL BE TAKING THE TITLE FOR SURE.
BUT
V/SPIT
A.I
Hip Hop Uk Resurrection
Can i vote???
Lay....
pretty cocky, huh joseph? listen bitch..
it's ironic that you would say that..it's pretty damn conceited, wow..
that's a 99.9% promise that'll get broken..like the reason you're breathing now
nah, i had to read this a couple times b4 it even made sense...wording was sorta awkward
so lose the ego pal, i know you like to compensate by gloating faggot
cuz girls put ya dick under a microscope more than Question's voting habits
not bad
you can say i'm gassed up for no reason but i'm scoping ya lies kid
how do i suck? when last week you thought my verse was doper than I did
too simple
instead of praising me you oughta focus on dropping a witty verse
n i know you'll come ready for me..equipped with pom-poms n a mini skirt
seen shit like this
ya getting worse, shoulda stayed gone when you left from the site
your 15 minutes are up..n i'm callin dibs on ya wife for the rest of the night
heh, ok i chuckled
you used to drop ancient punches, you know me homie i speak bold
looks like you're improving now..writing concepts that are only a week old
seen this too
ya senile ass says you'll get to the finals with your so-called verse
n i'm sure you'll be competing with Born, to see who's gonna go bald first
lol ok
yo but you're still my dawg though you may need to practice a bit
cuz even if you fell off..i know you'd lift yourself right back on my dick
nice flip
$pit is fugly, with the type of grill you shouldn't look at long
n after this face-off..try finding a fucking decent one to put back on
like you said...saw this coming
Spit....
I'm bringin the heat evil. but we'll always be cool.. man we's people
I remember all the times we shared... my lines so you could beat Feeble
LMAOIFHEFHE
once I'm gone, you'll still be in my shadow.. never forget it man it's true
cuz if my memory serves correct... even my memory's better than you
WOWW...
try to be a thug like $pit. don't know why you wanna copy a genius
Ryan everytime you do dirt, you just end up with rocks in ya penis
corny but ok
n' faggot I mean this.. you don't have the talent to beat me
but hey if you develop your skills, you can make a photo album of feces
hmm, this is new to me atleast. good hit
it's no surprise... you can't whip this. you a bitch in disguise
trust me... if I catch 40 lashes, it'll be on my fists from your eyes
corny again
but I can't lie. I admire your talent. hope you shine, forever gleam
homie I wish the best.... that second place could ever bring
lol
quit tryin to wile out.. c'mon man lets jus put shit on the table
yeah you're rockin a fresh style now.. but it still says $pit on the label
heh
I was your mentor. not ya friend.. so all that fakin need to quit
there's iPhones now.. I don't need a side-kick you outdated piece of shit
Lmfao, wtf man
sure you can win when you want to. n' ya flow's fluid when you rap
I never woulda guessed I'd stomp you.. cuz homie I knew it for a fact
iunno, this sorta thing is gettin kinda overdone now. decent i guess
you blew it man ya wack. you're in trouble chump I'ma whore
we'll just call you LayLay... the way you'll be doubled-up on the floor
good flip
it's too bad.. what a waste.. all the lines you been savin to win
but if you play your role right, you might put out the flames on ya skin
hmm, iunno i like the concept...dunno about the way u pulled it off tho
n' don't call my baby a slut. listen man that's the wrong direction
cuz my daughter's too good for you... n' she ain't even started textin
lol good try
I know you're hungry for the title. but my punches sting ya face
don't worry your day's coming... I won't be signing in for season eight
ha, nice closer
so lose the ego pal, i know you like to compensate by gloating faggot
cuz girls put ya dick under a microscope more than Question's voting habits
ya getting worse, shoulda stayed gone when you left from the site
your 15 minutes are up..n i'm callin dibs on ya wife for the rest of the night
ya senile ass says you'll get to the finals with your so-called verse
n i'm sure you'll be competing with Born, to see who's gonna go bald first
yo but you're still my dawg though you may need to practice a bit
cuz even if you fell off..i know you'd lift yourself right back on my dick
vs
I'm bringin the heat evil. but we'll always be cool.. man we's people
I remember all the times we shared... my lines so you could beat Feeble
once I'm gone, you'll still be in my shadow.. never forget it man it's true
cuz if my memory serves correct... even my memory's better than you
n' faggot I mean this.. you don't have the talent to beat me
but hey if you develop your skills, you can make a photo album of feces
but I can't lie. I admire your talent. hope you shine, forever gleam
homie I wish the best.... that second place could ever bring
quit tryin to wile out.. c'mon man lets jus put shit on the table
yeah you're rockin a fresh style now.. but it still says $pit on the label
I was your mentor. not ya friend.. so all that fakin need to quit
there's iPhones now.. I don't need a side-kick you outdated piece of shit
you blew it man ya wack. you're in trouble chump I'ma whore
we'll just call you LayLay... the way you'll be doubled-up on the floor
I know you're hungry for the title. but my punches sting ya face
don't worry your day's coming... I won't be signing in for season eight
doesnt seem like Lay tried as hard as spit, he was almost a lil too cocky. think that may've lost it for em. spit's quotables just hit alot harder imo and even the rest of his verse was more consistent.
v/ Spit, yea i was feelin about half of his verse lol
- King Tone
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2-3, spit's up.
Been a real one.
ya getting worse, shoulda stayed gone when you left from the site
your 15 minutes are up..n i'm callin dibs on ya wife for the rest of the night
so lose the ego pal, i know you like to compensate by gloating faggot
cuz girls put ya dick under a microscope more than Question's voting habits
you used to drop ancient punches, you know me homie i speak bold
looks like you're improving now..writing concepts that are only a week old
cute chicks on both ya sides, but all you'll ever get's a hug g
cuz we know girls try n look hotter but kicking it with a bitch that's ugly
vs
I'm bringin the heat evil. but we'll always be cool.. man we's people
I remember all the times we shared... my lines so you could beat Feeble
n' faggot I mean this.. you don't have the talent to beat me
but hey if you develop your skills, you can make a photo album of feces
it's no surprise... you can't whip this. you a bitch in disguise
trust me... if I catch 40 lashes, it'll be on my fists from your eyes
I was your mentor. not ya friend.. so all that fakin need to quit
there's iPhones now.. I don't need a side-kick you outdated piece of shit
heard you working at Sears. see the truth hits a fool in his face
they got all that Craftsman.. n' you're the biggest tool in the place
good battle guys..
$pit edges it
v/$pit
AI
read it earlier but too lazy to type anything. won't bother doing line by line breakdown, i got spit winning it, he was more consistent definitely, i think lay had a few disses i wasn't feeling too much, they were good but nothing special as opposed to the rest of his verse. spit came at him hard and was going crazy with every line. also the wording of that face-off line was wack, that's the wackest line of the battle imo, forced as hell.
anyways, great read.
vote/ spitacular
2-4 spit's up. although i'd appreciate a more detailed breakdown from marv.
can we get some more votes before this closes tonight?
Been a real one.
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