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    Murda Murda Kill Kill

    Hahahahahaha...... It's all too funny this time around.

    A sneak attack from the back It's a fact your life is OVER!
    Lying face down eating the dirt, Bloody shirt from the bullet that didnt even hurt.
    Im gone before yo homies even known that youve been shot down.
    Safely in my apartment i start plotting my new discartment.
    Will it be your fat boy lova or your new born sista.
    Dosent matta to me, you will eventually see the fate that evidently come to be.
    I guess I will end your Lovas life, he aint too bright, wont even notice me hiding in his closet with my 8" blade knife.
    He Lays down on his bed obliviously, so blind to see me hiding silently.
    The closet opens, The fat fuck is unaware, But I am very much aware.
    On my tippy toes I stalk him, as calm as Ive ever been.
    As i go to make my move my eyes turn red, Blood is soon to be shed.
    With one quick swipe, The knife ends his life.
    The blade is hidden in his skull, His brain is now full, His life is now over.
    No more worries for him, As he is now in heaven.


    Last edited by UltimateIllusion; May 27th, 2008 at 01:54 AM

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    Re: Murda Murda Kill Kill

    if you don't post links for this and your other piece...I'm closing both tomorrow...there are rules.
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    Re: Murda Murda Kill Kill

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    Re: Murda Murda Kill Kill

    You missed a lot of rhymes opportunities in there to kill it on the multis... slow down, reread, and perfect. Unless you like me throwing up drafts to come back to later just to get your word known quick. As far as context - kinda sick... kinda twisted... I would hope writing it is enough
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