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    Write To This: Feb. 10th

    FEBRUARY 10TH - FEBRUARY 17TH

    Succeed Without Fear



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    Re: Write To This: Feb. 10th

    Bad pic for the first week back up...

    possibly edit a verse in here.


    Slowly sliding, slithering
    While my health is withering
    These chains confine me
    All they do is deny me

    Sitting here for all to see
    Hanging, with not control
    My movements?
    They are not my own.

    Blind to the others
    No one sees the real me
    Just the puppet I’ve become
    Stuck inside this conundrum

    How can I get out
    What must I do
    How can I do it
    This I do not know.


    Edit more in later... just a quick cypher style
    Last edited by Liquid Content; February 11th, 2008 at 11:28 AM

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    Re: Write To This: Feb. 10th

    With a tribal drum
    heartbeat,
    I asked you to
    love me without
    strings attached.
    but I became
    a raggedy puppet,
    governed by you
    and your
    Ventriloquist antics.
    If you leave me at a gig
    I sniff your trail,
    and find my way back home,
    because I love you
    with strings attached.

    8 min. so w/e
    Legion of Kings.

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    Re: Write To This: Feb. 10th

    Saved for my shit.
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
    TNL

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    Re: Write To This: Feb. 10th

    Saved.
    ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE

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    Re: Write To This: Feb. 10th




    A show for you
    -with only 1lt. of happiness

    Picture a better timing;
    for a taste of acidity.
    Cause where I stand…
    …is just lost time;
    Running away from happiness.
    -as I stay a slave
    To you who all watch;
    Though I am kind of shy…
    …I can’t help but show you,
    The new me and scars that smile.

    I tried forgetting who I was;
    But it didn’t help…
    … Cause you all just kept staring.
    My skin began to shiver;
    Not cause I was nervous,
    but because…
    … my emotions felt too pervious.
    -about you all staring
    Can’t help but wonder,
    Why I stay here strapped;
    Someone can save me…
    …it’s just I choose to be here.
    -why?
    I don’t know…
    …but most times I feel good;
    About me making you smile.
    I guess it’s just too bad…
    …that I can’t smile back.
    I feel like this…
    …right here, where I stand;
    Is my punch drunk love.
    Maybe the reason,
    Behind the cries…
    …is cause here;
    Is the only time I see smiles.
    -of enjoyment
    So please don’t go yet;
    At least let me remember,
    Your faces…
    …as I know you will all;
    Forget Mine

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    Re: Write To This: Feb. 10th

    Best of February 10th: Mr. Write!

    Nice verse, probably would get some good reviews...

    *Closed*
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