To My Almost Baby Mama: happy mother's day

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To My Almost Baby Mama: happy mother's day

May Drains Your Soul Down To
Empty Tear Ducts,
Wondering If June Will Ever Come
Soon Enough To Sweep You Away From
All The 'What If's, Could've Been's And Maybe's'
But Time Will Wear Your Old Scars To
Remind You Of How Far The Blood Trails,
Of How Hard The Strong Fell, While
Holding Her, So Frail...
So Still

A Moment When Innocence
Outweighed Experience,
9.34 Ounces Of Everlasting
Beauty,
24.7 Centimeters Closer To
God;
Truly An Angel

And Though, We Have No
Strength To Speak Of Her,
Only Silently Dream Of
What Could've Been,
Try To Imagine How Big
Her Smile Would Be,
How I'd Give Anything To See The
Gleam In Her Eyes And
Hear Her Say
To You...

"Happy Mama's Day"

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This was pretty decent. Not something seen alot nowa days but still seen alot. The structure was a bit off and the rhymeskeme coulda used a tid of improvement. Other then that it was pretty good.