Checkin in, Ill drop soon...
Jayone
Mantix Supremacy
Checkin in, Ill drop soon...
yeah im bout to go to work but ill hit this up when i get out in the am....aight homes check
Yo, Jayone you dont compete with me kid I'll murder you quick
you'll never get any respect from me son, I dont even show none to my bitch,
your outa' your damn mind if your thinkin your exceeding
couse this battles over for you, there isent a chance of you succeeding,
your a freak,and Im the only one in this battle proceeding
I wouldent feel one of Jayones lines if I was tweekin or speedin,
Im on top of my game Jay, your style is mad rusty
Ill leave you face down in the dust as if I was fuckin you lustly,
Jayone, you about to be number two and theres nothin you can do
your weak, I smoke Jay's (J's) by the minute so on mic or text you lose,
Jayone dosent stand a damn chance man its over for you
when Im seal your fate and steal your soul and split it in two,
Jayone dosent stand a damn chance man its over for you
when Im sealin your fate, stealin your soul and Im splittin the shit in two, ***
sorry bout that,^^^ thats the last 2 lines, I posted the wrong one,
My bad...
Aiyo Theres no QUESTION THIS DUDES WASTED,Jay PERPLEX HIM WIT FEW PHRASES to Prove What You TEXTIN IS TOO BASIC,
I Got This 'Shit So In The Bag" When I Rip "Open This Fag" and Stuff His INTESTINES IN SUIT CASES,
U've Been WARNED IM SPITTEN SICK Wit SWARMS OF DELIVERANCE Brain STORMS OF VICIOUSNESS,
Jay Was BORN FOR RIPPED KIDS "Phrasin Flexes" To Mucsle Ya "Basic Text Spits" Verses Leave You TORN LIKE LIGAMENTS,
I've DROPPED A FEW, OBNOXIOUS DUDES, So This OCK IS THRU, WATCH IT YOU...
Fuckin "Herb" I'll "Smoke" Any "Joints" Jah Makin"(Jamaican) Like RASTAS DO,
Beat Me You...You DUMB IT GETS WORSE, Fuckin Wit Jay ONE IS A CURSE, Lyrically Leave You HUNG IN A HEARSE,
This BUM'LL GET MURKED, Cuz You Couldnt "Back Up Ya words" Wit Ya TONGUE IN REVERSE,
SHOTS HIT FISTS WRECKIN YA, This OCK RIPPED WHEN TEXTIN BRUH,
and trust me he gonna "See Da Feet/See Defeat" When I DROP KICK HIS RETINA,
Jays DROPPIN STREET FACTS Mantix Claims He "Touchin Gats" Only Time You "Bustin Caps" Is When Ya LOCK YA KEY PAD,Text CLOCKIN WEAK FAGS You Roll Wit A "Bunch A Gays" N When I Say Ye "Punches Played" Aint Talkin Bout a BOXIN RECAP..... Quick Shit
Yo, Jayone you dont compete with me kid I'll murder you quick
you'll never get any respect from me son, I dont even show none to my bitch,
your outa' your damn mind if your thinkin your exceeding
couse this battles over for you, there isent a chance of you succeeding,
opener wasn't to tough, and the next bar seem filler for the punch
your a freak,and Im the only one in this battle proceeding
I wouldent feel one of Jayones lines if I was tweekin or speedin,
Im on top of my game Jay, your style is mad rusty
Ill leave you face down in the dust as if I was fuckin you lustly,
noo, and 4th bar sounds homo yo
Jayone, you about to be number two and theres nothin you can do
your weak, I smoke Jay's (J's) by the minute so on mic or text you lose,
Jayone dosent stand a damn chance man its over for you
when Im seal your fate and steal your soul and split it in two,
best u had is the 5th bar, and the closer could have been worded better
Jayone: to much to structure out and feed off lines so what i got from ur verse is perplexity, multies, and some punches i dig. The verse is better for the punches thrown and what i stated.
V.Jay, hit my battle up plz.
Mantix .. your verse was basic wasn't really captivating ... the only line i liked was the J's but that was aight
Jayone from bar one u went punch after punch and kept delivering
loved it.. and the flow was crazy
v/ J
2-0 uppin
this is hard to vote on...
Jay:
Fix the way you write, spell, talk, and structure...It took me 5 minutes to read the damn thing. So stop txting like an idiot.
Anyway, you had some okay stuff in your verse. SOme witty lines and some solid punches. No good personals but eh, You still came hard.
Work on structure, personals and having better self glorification (if your gonna have any)
Mantix:
I wanted to vote for you but I simple cant... You had alot of filler with only a few solid punches and personals. Im no impressed in reality.
Work on having wit, using strong words to pack a biggere punch and as always, personals.
Your verse was just simple and had alot of filler. Keep workin
v/ Jay
Better punches
Dont even bother to hit my sig unless you have 500 post...Infact, I dont care who I voted for, I helped you. HIt my sig
3-0...uppin
3-0....
and 3 of my five uppins
Beat Me You...You DUMB IT GETS WORSE, Fuckin Wit Jay ONE IS A CURSE, Lyrically Leave You HUNG IN A HEARSE,
This BUM'LL GET MURKED, Cuz You Couldnt "Back Up Ya words" Wit Ya TONGUE IN REVERSE,
this bar was ur only better 1, i've done this same exact concept cuz my style was like this years ago...
vs.
nothing
mantix didnt have any good quotable lines..evrything was just filler 2 me, & nothing stood out period, no good punches or rather yet no actual punches..jay incorporated mad multis in his verse which stretched his lines & made the structure look terrible...u did have sum punches in there, not the best attempts but better than ur opponent....elevate u guys
v/ jay
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how many votes u need to win on here?
uppin
Jayone wins by KO
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