Invisible She

[P. Mortuus]

Sun kissed skin, fragile hair
Like filigree; her eyes so innocent
Unseen yet deep, her speech
Shakes my knees;
Yet it’s all irrelevant; I can’t hear
Nor speak so mute I breathe
Shallow breaths; heartbeat

STOPS

Resurrected I leave, too inept to get
What her body language said;
Her words meant,
Or what those long lashes kept
Repeating; her petulant friends
Laughed; head down I walked
Still shining from a halo
Which I left, when I walked away
Leaving her a bottle of mixed emotions;
And my shoes rubber with no grip;
Gelatin wraps for knees
And a tongue twisted-
I untied it- warbling out of tune;
Stu-Stut-Stuttering towards a moon
Faced beauty- scratch that….
Moon has potholes but she
was perfect, like those
vintage porcelain dolls…
expensive, rare and cherished.

[P. Mortuus]

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[Soule]

I liked this piece man, some really beautiful imagery. The bottle line was pretty dope, don't know why but I just smiled once read through that line. Some real tough emotion here man and your wording was well put also. Keep it up.

[Spoken Deity]

I wish i would have read this sooner...
I really really liked this... The imagery and intelligence in the entire piece was brilliant. You came with a strait forward piece from an abstract piece of art...but still, your imagery and direction were abstract aswell...I cant even explain it, lol.
I really enjoyed this read.
his the collab with ex and I will you? its up there somewhere

[Lady~Flamez]

Beautiful piece. I enjoyed you're honesty, and your word usage was clever.