Contenders: Born to Kill (9) vs. Lay Doubt (5)

[Vaskez]

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[Born To Kill]

Aight...cool...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-376041.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ar-376031.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ah-376034.html

[Lay Doubt.]

*intimidates you with check in*

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ng-376038.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...la-376036.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-376039.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ry-376037.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-376041p2.html

[Born To Kill]

*intimidates you with check in*

Ya weak and fuckin broke, kid...I got dollars o' plenty...
Intimidated by your check in?
No, but you're intimidated by the check in...a Denny's.
Of course love hurts a kid...it’s plain to see, doesn’t take a genius...
To see “Pain” across ya face and think in your case...
............................................That’s a fitting tattoo for a penis.
No boxed ears, broke nose, or shiners...ya just can’t touch me, son...
Bitch, you only assault one sense, and that’s my common one.
Lay thinks I drop junk, but I bounce when I step, ya girl can attest, I’m ill, yo...
You’ll see I got plenty of spunk...if you black light ya girl’s chest and pillow.
And sorry...but you were born to a whore, whole hood’s been in her thighs...
That’s why it caught ya neighbor’s eye, that you had your neighbor’s eyes.
Always reppin Pac, whether he wants you to or not...the shit has me bored...
So I’ll make you assume the same pose...from the one of him in the Morgue.
And on that note, I’ll charge ahead into guts, bring you to a dead stop...
By issuing you some gore, that’d a had Paul Heyman screaming his head off.
See, I’m happy like toys...gotta desk job, but for you the shit is...
You’re only able to grasp Joy if your boss buys the good dish liquid.
I'll spit it, a storm to leave ya shook...ya arrogance'll get checked...
Give this vane kid a weathered look...
................When I jam the arrow part of one thru ya fuckin neck.

OMG I DON'T DO AUDIO.. i don't have to be an audio head…

Good, stick to text...Michelle Obama should mimic this fuck...
Cuz at least you know enough to keep your bitch mouth shut.
.
.
.

[Lay Doubt.]

god, do you ever get better?
.
.
i've been to the top of this text shit and continued to drop fire there
your elevation process looks like a paraplegic army-crawling up a flight'a stairs
some cats think you'll beat me, how come y'all ain't trusting the greatest?
s'like everybody forgot that you suck..dog your alzheimers must be contagious
plus i stay blowin trees, purp n white widow cuz i gotta get fat hits
while the only chronic that you're familiar with is followed by "wackness"
you're republican n that's fitting, watch you get bombed when lay speaks
cuz the concepts you write are so old they belong in a john mccain speech
this new point system's chill, though you still ain't clever n that's fine
but with the way you getting ate..it's obvious you'll never get past nine
so stay in ya place, quit thinkin you ill..watch you get ripped like a fag
'fore i send you flying in the airborne, n cure any feelings of sickness you had
trying to take no a show win hoping for luck but this joke'll get snuffed
every punch you drop's predictable..cuz we're like "damn, i know it'll suck"
i owned you enough so fuck 20 lines, i won't let this fool get the belt
born's battled spit..
..n y'all shoulda seen this retard struggling not to drool on himself

[FUNΞRΔL PR∅]

Hidden Content:

i've been to the top of this text shit and continued to drop fire there
your elevation process looks like a paraplegic army-crawling up a flight'a stairs
^okay.. army part kinda weak'nd it..
some cats think you'll beat me, how come y'all ain't trusting the greatest?
s'like everybody forgot that you suck..dog your alzheimers must be contagious
^lol.
plus i stay blowin trees, purp n white widow cuz i gotta get fat hits
while the only chronic that you're familiar with is followed with "wackness"
^ok
you're republican n that's fitting, watch you get bombed when lay speaks
cuz the concepts you write are so old they belong in a john mccain speech
^ha,ha
this new point system's chill, though you still ain't clever n that's fine
but with the way you getting ate..it's obvious you'll never get past nine
^.. pretty good flip..
so stay in ya place, quit thinkin you ill..watch you get ripped like a fag
'fore i send you flying in the airborne, n cure any feelings of sickness you had
^cool..
trying to take no a show win hoping for luck but this joke'll get snuffed
every punch you drop's predictable..cuz we're like "damn, i know it'll suck"
^i laughed at that..
i owned you enough so fuck 20 lines, i won't let this fool get the belt
born's battled spit..
..n y'all shoulda seen this retard struggling not to drool on himself
^lmao..

vs.


Ya weak and fuckin broke, kid...I got dollars o' plenty...
Intimidated by your check in?
No, but you're intimidated by the check in...a Denny's.
^nah..just seems corny
Of course love hurts a kid...it’s plain to see, doesn’t take a genius...
To see “Pain” across ya face and think in your case...
............................................That’s a fitting tattoo for a penis.
^eh,didnt grasp this
No boxed ears, broke nose, or shiners...ya just can’t touch me, son...
Bitch, you only assault one sense, and that’s my common one.
^ok
Lay thinks I drop junk, but I bounce when I step, ya girl can attest, I’m ill, yo...
You’ll see I got plenty of spunk...if you black light ya girl’s chest and pillow.
^lol.
And sorry...but you were born to a whore, whole hood’s been in her thighs...
That’s why it caught ya neighbor’s eye, that you had your neighbor’s eyes.
^lmao.
Always reppin Pac, whether he wants you to or not...the shit has me bored...
So I’ll make you assume the same pose...from the one of him in the Morgue.
^cool
And on that note, I’ll charge ahead into guts, bring you to a dead stop...
By issuing you some gore, that’d a had Paul Heyman screaming his head off.
^meh..i get it.. but still
See, I’m happy like toys...gotta desk job, but for you the shit is...
You’re only able to grasp Joy if your boss buys the good dish liquid.
^id swear this was playd.. cuz of 'joy'. but its a decent punch
I'll spit it, a storm to leave ya shook...ya arrogance'll get checked...
Give this vane kid a weathered look...
................When I jam the arrow part of one thru ya fuckin neck.
^harsh
Good, stick to text...Michelle Obama should mimic this fuck...
Cuz at least you know enough to keep your bitch mouth shut.
^nah.. didnt connect well to me.


overall/-i got lay with 2 more lines than Born... but still lay was more consistant through out.. some of borns lines didnt connect well imo.. i wasnt feeling them nor the impact.. but lay had sum doozy's too.. but not many.. maybe one... the rest was above par.. just didnt hit hard as the lines i color coded..

V/-Lay

[Attack of the Muff]

Ya weak and fuckin broke, kid...I got dollars o' plenty...
Intimidated by your check in?
No, but you're intimidated by the check in...a Denny's.
(..eh weak)
Of course love hurts a kid...it’s plain to see, doesn’t take a genius...
To see “Pain” across ya face and think in your case...
............................................That’s a fitting tattoo for a penis.
(eh ok)
No boxed ears, broke nose, or shiners...ya just can’t touch me, son...
Bitch, you only assault one sense, and that’s my common one.
(cool)
Lay thinks I drop junk, but I bounce when I step, ya girl can attest, I’m ill, yo...
You’ll see I got plenty of spunk...if you black light ya girl’s chest and pillow.
(heh cool)
And sorry...but you were born to a whore, whole hood’s been in her thighs...
That’s why it caught ya neighbor’s eye, that you had your neighbor’s eyes.
(eh)
Always reppin Pac, whether he wants you to or not...the shit has me bored...
So I’ll make you assume the same pose...from the one of him in the Morgue.
(nice)
And on that note, I’ll charge ahead into guts, bring you to a dead stop...
By issuing you some gore, that’d a had Paul Heyman screaming his head off.
(ok)
See, I’m happy like toys...gotta desk job, but for you the shit is...
You’re only able to grasp Joy if your boss buys the good dish liquid.
(ok..rings of old)
I'll spit it, a storm to leave ya shook...ya arrogance'll get checked...
Give this vane kid a weathered look...
................When I jam the arrow part of one thru ya fuckin neck.
(eh ok)


i've been to the top of this text shit and continued to drop fire there
your elevation process looks like a paraplegic army-crawling up a flight'a stairs
(heh cool open)
some cats think you'll beat me, how come y'all ain't trusting the greatest?
s'like everybody forgot that you suck..dog your alzheimers must be contagious
(hahah..)
plus i stay blowin trees, purp n white widow cuz i gotta get fat hits
while the only chronic that you're familiar with is followed by "wackness"
(ok..worded nicelty)
you're republican n that's fitting, watch you get bombed when lay speaks
cuz the concepts you write are so old they belong in a john mccain speech
(eh ok)
this new point system's chill, though you still ain't clever n that's fine
but with the way you getting ate..it's obvious you'll never get past nine
(oh hell naw man)
so stay in ya place, quit thinkin you ill..watch you get ripped like a fag
'fore i send you flying in the airborne, n cure any feelings of sickness you had
(eh)
trying to take no a show win hoping for luck but this joke'll get snuffed
every punch you drop's predictable..cuz we're like "damn, i know it'll suck"
(LOL)
i owned you enough so fuck 20 lines, i won't let this fool get the belt
born's battled spit..
..n y'all shoulda seen this retard struggling not to drool on himself
(lol nice close)


v/aydoubt completely obliterated this one..consistent verse..lil wack shit

born came off and on more ok ish than nething imo




Quote:
Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.
OMG I DON'T DO AUDIO.. i don't have to be an audio head…

Good, stick to text...Michelle Obama should mimic this fuck...
Cuz at least you know enough to keep your bitch mouth shut.

[Qualm]

Ya weak and fuckin broke, kid...I got dollars o' plenty...
Intimidated by your check in?
No, but you're intimidated by the check in...a Denny's.
kinda cheesy but lol

vs

some cats think you'll beat me, how come y'all ain't trusting the greatest?
s'like everybody forgot that you suck..dog your alzheimers must be contagious
so stay in ya place, quit thinkin you ill..watch you get ripped like a fag
'fore i send you flying in the airborne, n cure any feelings of sickness you had
i owned you enough so fuck 20 lines, i won't let this fool get the belt
born's battled spit..
..n y'all shoulda seen this retard struggling not to drool on himself

Born was outdone here. A lot of borns stuff came off as cheesy such as the wrestling ish. Couldn't see any complexity although I did laugh but couldn't quote more than I did. Lad the bigger hitters such; the alziehmers line was cool and the drool line was LOTB. The way you set it up was nice. Anyways, Lay brought too much for Born's verse to compete with this week.

v/ Lay Doubt

[Kenny the G]

Ya weak and fuckin broke, kid...I got dollars o' plenty...
Intimidated by your check in?
No, but you're intimidated by the check in...a Denny's.
funny concept but the wording ruined it for me
Of course love hurts a kid...it’s plain to see, doesn’t take a genius...
To see “Pain” across ya face and think in your case...
............................................That’s a fitting tattoo for a penis.
nah
No boxed ears, broke nose, or shiners...ya just can’t touch me, son...
Bitch, you only assault one sense, and that’s my common one.
lol. i like this shit. direct and landed spot on
Lay thinks I drop junk, but I bounce when I step, ya girl can attest, I’m ill, yo...
You’ll see I got plenty of spunk...if you black light ya girl’s chest and pillow.
punch was LMAO....setup seemed like you were rambling imo
And sorry...but you were born to a whore, whole hood’s been in her thighs...
That’s why it caught ya neighbor’s eye, that you had your neighbor’s eyes.
i actually liked this. the punch was cool to me
Always reppin Pac, whether he wants you to or not...the shit has me bored...
So I’ll make you assume the same pose...from the one of him in the Morgue.
nice
And on that note, I’ll charge ahead into guts, bring you to a dead stop...
By issuing you some gore, that’d a had Paul Heyman screaming his head off.
doesnt work for me
See, I’m happy like toys...gotta desk job, but for you the shit is...
You’re only able to grasp Joy if your boss buys the good dish liquid.
ehh
I'll spit it, a storm to leave ya shook...ya arrogance'll get checked...
Give this vane kid a weathered look...
................When I jam the arrow part of one thru ya fuckin neck.
cool
Good, stick to text...Michelle Obama should mimic this fuck...
Cuz at least you know enough to keep your bitch mouth shut.
not feelin the finish. didnt hit hard to me


i've been to the top of this text shit and continued to drop fire there
your elevation process looks like a paraplegic army-crawling up a flight'a stairs
lol. cool opener
some cats think you'll beat me, how come y'all ain't trusting the greatest?
s'like everybody forgot that you suck..dog your alzheimers must be contagious
ok
plus i stay blowin trees, purp n white widow cuz i gotta get fat hits
while the only chronic that you're familiar with is followed by "wackness"
seen. not really an innovative flip
you're republican n that's fitting, watch you get bombed when lay speaks
cuz the concepts you write are so old they belong in a john mccain speech
lmao
this new point system's chill, though you still ain't clever n that's fine
but with the way you getting ate..it's obvious you'll never get past nine
ok
so stay in ya place, quit thinkin you ill..watch you get ripped like a fag
'fore i send you flying in the airborne, n cure any feelings of sickness you had
ya did the concept better than i did a few weeks back. kudos
trying to take no a show win hoping for luck but this joke'll get snuffed
every punch you drop's predictable..cuz we're like "damn, i know it'll suck"
not feelin
i owned you enough so fuck 20 lines, i won't let this fool get the belt
born's battled spit..
..n y'all shoulda seen this retard struggling not to drool on himself
LMAO. funny visual

well this was my personal fav. battle of the week. good reads on both sides. good ideas on both sides, nice polished verses and equally consistent imo. overall tho i think lays haymakers stuck alittle harder than borns, due in part to slicker, crisper wording.

v/lay by a pubic hair.

[Automatic.]

No boxed ears, broke nose, or shiners...ya just can’t touch me, son...
Bitch, you only assault one sense, and that’s my common one.
Lay thinks I drop junk, but I bounce when I step, ya girl can attest, I’m ill, yo...
You’ll see I got plenty of spunk...if you black light ya girl’s chest and pillow.

vs.

i've been to the top of this text shit and continued to drop fire there
your elevation process looks like a paraplegic army-crawling up a flight'a stairs
some cats think you'll beat me, how come y'all ain't trusting the greatest?
s'like everybody forgot that you suck..dog your alzheimers must be contagious
trying to take no a show win hoping for luck but this joke'll get snuffed
every punch you drop's predictable..cuz we're like "damn, i know it'll suck"
i owned you enough so fuck 20 lines, i won't let this fool get the belt
born's battled spit..
..n y'all shoulda seen this retard struggling not to drool on himself

nice showing from both. born did his usual style, but imo his punches weren't as funny as usual. idk what it was, but ya. that spunk line was what i was expecting throughout the verse, but it just wasn't there. lay had a nice verse. with the exception of the ate punch, everything was fresh and worded nicely. lmao at the predictable punch, that was nice.

ya, i v/ lay

[Jay Walker]

Lay thinks I drop junk, but I bounce when I step, ya girl can attest, I’m ill, yo...
You’ll see I got plenty of spunk...if you black light ya girl’s chest and pillow.


vs



i've been to the top of this text shit and continued to drop fire there
your elevation process looks like a paraplegic army-crawling up a flight'a stairs
so stay in ya place, quit thinkin you ill..watch you get ripped like a fag
'fore i send you flying in the airborne, n cure any feelings of sickness you had


a lot of your shit seemed to basic for me lay. like forgot you suck, droppin predictable, chronic wackness, old concepts - and even though the ate/nine punch had relevance to this battle, that doesn't change the fact that that concept is pretty played. the opener was basic too, but that shit was mad funny and the airborne was tight.


born, theres just something about your wording that kills your verses for me. instead of a smooth read, your setups have a million commas in them, saying like 50 short little things. i guess it boils down to i just dont like your style. your one punch i quoted was dope to me - mad clownage... if you dropped like that in every couplet, every verse - you'd do damage.

[Philly®]

Ya weak and fuckin broke, kid...I got dollars o' plenty...
Intimidated by your check in?
No, but you're intimidated by the check in...a Denny's.
meh
Of course love hurts a kid...it’s plain to see, doesn’t take a genius...
To see “Pain” across ya face and think in your case...
............................................That’s a fitting tattoo for a penis.
iight
No boxed ears, broke nose, or shiners...ya just can’t touch me, son...
Bitch, you only assault one sense, and that’s my common one.
coo
Lay thinks I drop junk, but I bounce when I step, ya girl can attest, I’m ill, yo...
You’ll see I got plenty of spunk...if you black light ya girl’s chest and pillow.
coo
And sorry...but you were born to a whore, whole hood’s been in her thighs...
That’s why it caught ya neighbor’s eye, that you had your neighbor’s eyes.
meh
Always reppin Pac, whether he wants you to or not...the shit has me bored...
So I’ll make you assume the same pose...from the one of him in the Morgue.
lol
And on that note, I’ll charge ahead into guts, bring you to a dead stop...
By issuing you some gore, that’d a had Paul Heyman screaming his head off.
iight/meh
See, I’m happy like toys...gotta desk job, but for you the shit is...
You’re only able to grasp Joy if your boss buys the good dish liquid.
meh
I'll spit it, a storm to leave ya shook...ya arrogance'll get checked...
Give this vane kid a weathered look...
................When I jam the arrow part of one thru ya fuckin neck.
meh


vs



i've been to the top of this text shit and continued to drop fire there
your elevation process looks like a paraplegic army-crawling up a flight'a stairs
coo
some cats think you'll beat me, how come y'all ain't trusting the greatest?
s'like everybody forgot that you suck..dog your alzheimers must be contagious
lol
plus i stay blowin trees, purp n white widow cuz i gotta get fat hits
while the only chronic that you're familiar with is followed by "wackness"
coo
you're republican n that's fitting, watch you get bombed when lay speaks
cuz the concepts you write are so old they belong in a john mccain speech
meh
this new point system's chill, though you still ain't clever n that's fine
but with the way you getting ate..it's obvious you'll never get past nine
meh
so stay in ya place, quit thinkin you ill..watch you get ripped like a fag
'fore i send you flying in the airborne, n cure any feelings of sickness you had
meh
trying to take no a show win hoping for luck but this joke'll get snuffed
every punch you drop's predictable..cuz we're like "damn, i know it'll suck"
lol!
i owned you enough so fuck 20 lines, i won't let this fool get the belt
born's battled spit..
..n y'all shoulda seen this retard struggling not to drool on himself
lol, nice



V/lay 4 consistency

[Vaskez]

lay wins 7-0 but was late so -2 votes. born only voted twice -6 votes
lay wins 5 to -6 by KO +4
born -1