The Secret to Your Heart

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The Secret to Your Heart
By:Flatline

Gather around, my dearest friends
So I might tell you what I’ve learned
The real secret to love and happiness
Is to give it away, and it’ll return

Loving another exposes
Your compassion to so much more
As if led blind into the desert
Only to find what you’re looking for

Unconditional love arrives
After selfish bonds are broken
And if you love authentically
True love’s language will be spoken

Do not fear to take a risk
If you want love for yourself
Go on! It is waiting for you
To pick your heart up off the shelf

Live in love as you were meant
To grasp it in this lifetime
As you’ve been called you’ll learn
Its true path within this rhyme

Please listen to what I have shared
Don’t wait for someone to love thee
Find someone you can truly love
For loving them will set you free

[abiona]

the message is good... but the presentation is a little cliche. sounds like a hallmark card to me.

i like what you are saying, but i cant get past the sing-songy vibe this has to it.

i think you could benefit from trying to approach the topic on a deeper level.

i thought from the language of this and your other piece that you were a boy... found it interesting that the person who originally posted this on another site is a female.

hmm.