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    Journey Of The Seasons Pt.1

    Journey Of The Seasons Part One.
    Winter Turns to spring

    tears cause a slow sleet
    i am alone now, it's sad
    all life is now extinguished,
    the green grass craves rebirth
    but I will stand in it's way
    shielding my children,
    to protect them from truth.
    renewal, rebirth...
    I build this container for them,
    playing god?
    no i am his employee,
    Noahs tale repeated annually
    but now instead of a storm
    the sleeping arc only sails,
    ...upon frozen plains

    *Crack...Crack*
    The ice breaks

    I can finally show a smile
    Spring is finally in motion,
    my vessel of bloom docks,
    unloading my children
    before the arc perishes,
    falling into a watery abyss.
    Life in all forms, I awaken
    they rub away the slumber,
    stems stretch for the sky
    as blades of grass,
    cut a path through the ice
    to watch the clouds finale,
    anticipation builds inside me,
    as i break into tears so often.
    and bring a rain on queue
    ...to baptise the new year
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    Re: Journey Of The Seasons Pt.1

    they rub away the slumber,
    stems stretch for the sky
    as blades of grass,
    cut a path through the ice
    to watch the clouds finale,
    anticipation builds inside me,
    as i break into tears so often.
    and bring a rain on queue
    ...to baptise the new year
    loved the delicacy of this ending... particularly the beginning of this section.

    rub away the slumber


    that was so nice. soft. definitely an image that will remain with me for a while.

    enjoyed this... the second half more than the first... but as a complete package it was greatly felt.

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