A NEW BEAT You GOTTA take a listen TO, will RTF
Ive just finished it (but its not finished yet) and I think it's good
It's the first time I record an instrument live (guitar)
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Take listen..
And coMment PLEASE, will rtf
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well the guitar is off time wise.
drums bang
not really feeling the melodies u put out. they remind me of a scary movie a bit.
wen the chorus comes in it gets a bit better
keep @ it bro. itll get better. juss polish this joint up
RTF http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...95-378693.html
Okay Ill mend that.. Thanks for fast reply
you brought out the rock kit on this
these kind of tracks arent really my cup of tea, i would work on your production a little more, keep it interesting throw in effects and breaks or whatever you see suitable to keep this movin
PR
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Up Against the Wind
ok, thanks for the feed
up.
Word the guitar is off... So fix that, and then I'll listen to it seriously.
The guitar needs to be turned up too I think, I can't really hear it too well. I like the drums, and I do like that reverse cymbal into the crash, its a cool way to build up suspense. I think you might be able to make do without the bass or at least change the way it sounds or something, kind of overbearing. Not bad though, I don't know if you fixed the guitar or something but I don't think its off. Its a little awkward right before the drums come in but its still on beat. Well actually its off beat, but its still in time.
I dont think guitar is off the time.... right before drums, i fucked it all up with bass so it may sound that.. I fixed that.. Thanks for the comments
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Last edited by II; October 2nd, 2008 at 02:08 PM
I actually like the melody i could def. write some crazy metaphysical shit to this i like it just turn that guitar up and focus on getting the instruments the right volume so they almost blend together but overall i like it keep it up
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Ok, thanks.. Uppin
that melody is gonna get stuck in my damn head man...word i agree with illogikal....some metaphysical deep crazy shit could be spewed all over this track man.....wanna see more.
that guitar is sick. (and it is on beat btw). This kind of sounds like a Linkin Park type track to me. With the rock style drums and the synth buildups in the back but then you throw the soft weeping guitar in there and it balances well. Dude above me is right about that melody. I think its dope
I don't like that pad. Drums are cool. Definately dig that guitar. Lower that pad, and up the guitar. Overall, it's a decent beat. Keep at it man.
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