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    Homeless Rambling.

    Pavement slithers
    Beneath me,
    Amazed.
    Holding on to air
    I glide
    On a breezeway,
    Wafting
    A homeless odor,
    Some say it is me,
    But
    I am no different
    Than those
    Who walk these lands…
    …I just never leave.

    This is no home,
    More of a…
    …lay over.
    Soon, steel wings
    Shall meet gold gates
    In refuge for my own
    Humanity…
    …sanity.

    Walking in a slumber
    I venture off..

    Street madness
    Tugs me,
    Self in depth
    Drowning,
    Refusing to paddle.

    Steps pull me,
    Feet kiss
    The puckered ground.
    O how our mouth tastes
    Of cigarettes,
    And
    Faded smiles.

    Yet,
    Your touch
    Soothes a skin
    Allowing the scars
    To settle in.
    This one’s from you
    Remember,
    I sware the scab
    Enjoys life,
    Seemingly happy
    Smiling up.
    Carved
    Into my lower brow,
    Attempting to
    Slit the throat
    Of eye.

    Resistance,
    A locked door
    Made of perfect tree
    Ashes.
    From which caught fire
    As I camped in hell,
    Taken advantage of
    By cheap booze
    And leaves,
    That stayed
    In laughter
    And erotic fantasies
    Of concerned
    Bystanders.

    The Key,
    Remains mysterious.
    For its whereabouts
    Are unknown,
    To even my sanity...
    ...which leads to leapholes.
    for to my good fortune,
    i shoot life with
    a double minded barrel.

    Which means,
    The key to the answers
    Embedded in my soul
    Are untraceable through
    My very own existence.

    LUCKILY!

    Death
    Is but a locksmith,
    And as I refuse to eat
    The scraps
    Given from generous donors
    In silver trash decore.
    I find my bed
    To reak of rotting flesh,
    A smell
    That keeps me focused
    On the door within.

    Because of decayed lips
    my tongue hides
    behind swollen tonsils..

    gargling ideas,
    I bring a sign instead...

    Death,
    The keys to my soul
    Please.
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    Re: Homeless Rambling.

    Ill get links in the morning,

    this was an offspring of motivation pulled from ledges piece to just write....
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    Re: Homeless Rambling.

    This was a nice poem my dude. glad your getting active againa nd i am glad that your still writing with great depth man... i love how you portay your poems and you stay true to yourself with your own emotions and stay level headed about it. you dont try to do to much you just do enough with your content and direction of storyline man. ill edit more feed into your drop when i get more time homie..
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    Re: Homeless Rambling.

    i like this peom its very sharp the way you wrote it and effective and it delv's in to many depths of emotion. very good man.

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    Re: Homeless Rambling.

    good to read a change of style. thank god. yeah, i liked this. really emotional, i loved the death is a locksmith stanza. word @ inspired by ledge or w/e, this has a very ledgenzesque feel. yea, i made that up. your line breaking was excellent, i didn't think any of them were out of place. wording was pretty nice too, i noticed you spelled swear sware though? just watch out for stuff like that i guess. it seemed very random, very spur of the moment, i liked that. it's sort of like thoughts just spilling out in a cohesive fashion. so yeah, nice stuff spekz. hit my collab with abiona up plz.
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    Thanks e/one

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