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    Time To Die


    Living in a new age sodom and gomorrah
    Receive millions, but can't spare a quarter
    Bomb the Playboy Mansion, perverseness
    Where's the dignity, pft, only in these verses
    Behead pimps and free the women from grips
    Call my woman a slut, get some bruised lips
    Commercialism dipping hands in golden pots
    While your mother's die of a curable blood clot
    CraigstList, and XTUBE feed your desires
    Yet you don't care about children dying in fires
    Fuck a blue or a red, cops aim for the head
    Open your eyes, before hosting caverns with lead
    Shed some light like cutting the sun, listen;
    Life's bigger than your kinky fetish for fistin'
    I remember when, Cho shot up Virginia Tech
    Armed deuce, living an immigrant train wreck
    We damned him to hell, made a YouTube star
    Peace is right there in the heart, ain't that far
    We could burn KKK robes in Time Square
    Kill the Black Panther, just to make shit fair
    But nah, you wanna rape, kill, and pillage...
    Then you cats cry when we booby-trap the village
    We spend thousands in the Art of Murder
    Progress to elect those who pay it further
    Don't matter when you're dead and gone, kid
    Hate and Bigotry will survive, without the pen
    So continue in your moment of zen, damn...
    I'm dozin' off... time to dream happy...

    I can't sleep one hour without devouring the truth
    It's sour, and the taste ain't designed to soothe
    Tired of waking up to a subliminal fictional filth!
    Eh, our seeds crying over the absence of milk
    Yet you want to preserve your individual cultures
    Pickin' at the scripts of revolution like vultures


    -ADVICE-

    How about watchin kids while they play
    So predators dont try n' take them away
    How about shakin' that mans colored hand
    Instead of killing em', over proclaimed land
    How about forgetting the past

    and implementing some right, before its all our time to die.

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    Re: Time To Die

    No feedbacks? Anybody?
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    Re: Time To Die

    the scheme is AABB the whole time...im a little bored by it, but what do i know. the subject matter is well handled, though some lines are a little cliche and the theme has definitely been done before. i like the line about booby trapping the village.

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    i mean....good message, kind of fucks up tha bad stuff i wanna say,lol...all in all, yea tha concepts been done, but so tha fuck what!! Just cuz people spoke out before shits played now? So whatll happen when people stop spittin shit like this....no one will, exactly.
    Flow coulda been better, mor multies things like that, but remember its not what u say its how u say it. We need to keep hearin messages like this, just flip it a lil.

    oh and commie this aint nothin personal, jus sumthin i had to say...PEACE!

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    dont get me wrong dude, i think its important that people talk about this and he did a good job with it. im just sayin its been done, but yeah, theres nothing wrong with that

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    Pretty basic subject matter but still some nice bars. I like the references like VaTech

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    Thanks for the honest feed guys... appreciate it.
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    Re: Time To Die

    sick shit
    keep spittin dis style workz
    stayup

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    Quote Originally Posted by fazeT View Post
    sick shit
    keep spittin dis style workz
    stayup
    Forsure man...
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    Re: Time To Die

    Dope piece. I love the flow and lvoed the message you sent. You got straight to the point on everyline. Not much to say ,It flowed well threw the whole thing.. Good job on this sht bro. Keep it up.


    I remember when, Cho shot up Virginia Tech
    Armed deuce, living an immigrant train wreck
    We damned him to hell, made a YouTube star
    Peace is right there in the heart, ain't that far
    We could burn KKK robes in Time Square
    Kill the Black Panther, just to make shit fair


    -holy sht..HOT SHT BRO





    We gona ahve to definatly collab...




    THEY HAVE YET TO SEE CRAZY!!


    -Scytso

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    Quote Originally Posted by Accurit Phacts View Post
    Dope piece. I love the flow and lvoed the message you sent. You got straight to the point on everyline. Not much to say ,It flowed well threw the whole thing.. Good job on this sht bro. Keep it up.


    I remember when, Cho shot up Virginia Tech
    Armed deuce, living an immigrant train wreck
    We damned him to hell, made a YouTube star
    Peace is right there in the heart, ain't that far
    We could burn KKK robes in Time Square
    Kill the Black Panther, just to make shit fair


    -holy sht..HOT SHT BRO





    We gona ahve to definatly collab...




    THEY HAVE YET TO SEE CRAZY!!


    -Scytso
    Thanks for the feed Accurit... Scytsco's Up
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    Uppin.
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    Re: Time To Die

    werd.....We should collab sometime too......This shit had a wicked flow and message...
    your voice came off very strong in this piece and it had alot of quotables, one of which Accurit Phacts mentioned above......The closer was also dope....keep em comin man....

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