Jus spittin, please listen

[BEAZY813]

Hate strokes tha streets and got a painter's rythm/
We wear this burden, go get tha tailor we badly fitted/
has been written but ova time erased what was wrote/
ten 'thou shall nots' forgotten, knotted into one joke/
at every corner's a church, for every church many hurses/
where you'll see mothers cursin tha person who took her first/
kid you not, for every kid is a kin who gets revenge/
dont give a fuck if they win, in hell they'll blend in/
lil git kicks his feet in tha pew while parents work/
preachin to their legions while cheatin, tha marriage hurts/
wonderin 'when will it stop!', when will hypocrisy flop/
I know its big in religion cuz tha sermons so hot/
preacher, preacher! Take tha job of havin to save souls/
to tha roads in tha hoods that aint paved in gold/
said my piece now imma sit back, my arms is folded/
P.S.! The governments a lie. Yes! I have spoken!/

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[BEAZY813]

damn...uppin

[BEAZY813]

yo!!! could i get some feed!!!

and i gotta speak up for commie too cuz he got hot shit that no onez replyin too, wuts good yall?!!!

[The Genesis]

I don't know why audio structured shit like this gets slept on, def better than some 'text' shit. although it was still lyrically simple, the flow was on point as well as relevance to topic, even though it was basically subjectless you still had a message to get across and did so effectively, stay up.

[BEAZY813]

good lookin genesis, hit commies shit up to if u can

[Mami]

I agree entirely with genesis. This was a good read. As Genesis said with you having an Audio structure you would think this would be weak. But, even through the simplicity of your bars, you came off with an earnest message. You did a good job here, looking to see more from you.

[Westcoast]

This was a simple plain flow but it was on point and on topic... Good multies and rhymes you used man... Keep it up BEAZY

[heartints]

Laid back but definitely not wack

[country]

this was aight


cant believe someone using the word "git" lol


this site is a bunch of gits


anyways

keep spittin man, this was ok

[BEAZY813]

a bunch of gits? who u tryin to insult homie?

oh well, at least u upped this

[Deadtwo]

keep it up nice read

[Neko]

Tight man i especially, liked the ending

[fazeT]

kewl lil spit

has been written but ova time erased what was wrote/
ten 'thou shall nots' forgotten, knotted into one joke/
at every corner's a church, for every church many hurses/
where you'll see mothers cursin tha person who took her first/
kid you not, for every kid is a kin who gets revenge/
dont give a fuck if they win, in hell they'll blend in/
lil git kicks his feet in tha pew while parents work/
preachin to their legions while cheatin, tha marriage hurts/
^^
this was dope
stay up!!!!