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    broken heart for severed loves

    How could I do this? I mean defy the innocence of someone so clueless.
    I have no excuses, decision made ma those tears are useless.
    How could I expect to stand as a man, if I can’t understand?
    The course of life, to be done trife and you expected to be my wife?
    I know I did wrong but tried to make it right,
    Forgiveness is trying i'm retiring look I don’t want to fight.
    Put a ring on the left hand only because you weren’t right.
    What I did was from spite, but you was wrong to begin with,
    How I felt gone to know you were touched by another lips,
    You did this willing me its killing me; it takes two to tango,
    My heart looks like 50 bodies after being shot i’m so mangled.
    Tangled, in this wicked web like internet adult sites, the results might...
    Have been different, but your discretions were consistent.
    You could win a Grammy for acting like you loved me of coarse i’m not happy,
    I know you like a relative and hate you more like they back stabbed me.
    I hope you’re happy, sunnier skies blind me, just because I stay hooded down
    Don’t mean you can pull the wool over my eyes from behind me.
    You make it to simple, nipples inside the mouth, when I was down south,
    Loyal you reap the spoils giving brains like you was liberal. Damn Cybil.

    Hook: beautiful lady, where is that we went wrong,
    Another lifetime maybe, right now you’re remembered since I wrote this song,
    Maybe me it was me could be maybe I wasn’t worthy,
    I am not saying I hate you but I want it to be known you hurt me.

    The crystal ball could of never predicted, how addicted you were to living exquisite,
    Me a fool when my mans visit how could I suspect you and him were being explicit?
    When I found out don’t worry he wont get a second chance,
    Neither will you i’m sorry boo the boats already advanced. This like a movie
    So save the last dance for another groupie, we went from high school playing hooky,
    Nicknames you called me your bookie, as far as love I was rookie, lookie,
    Save your words i’m not hearing your mouth,
    Betrayal is like a revolving door if you stay on you'll only find your way out.
    Take the blind route, my mind doubts, every word you say,
    All I do is see you and relay the images in instant replay,
    This the best way to part ways, when the heart strays,
    Finding you way back is like being blind trapped in a maze.
    I’m amazed; we lasted so many days,
    And I now i’m trying to chase memories
    But the only way like OJ or drinking OJ mixed with Hennessey.
    No remedy affedemies come rescue me.
    Minds games you lowered my self confidence, now i’m confident,
    Even though you abused me like condiments,
    Women come a dime a dozen and I could get more for my currency
    On foreign continents. You wanted divorce plus trying to take half,
    How fitting half of you is all I ever had.


    Hook: beautiful lady, where is that we went wrong,
    Another lifetime maybe, right now you’re remembered since I wrote this song,
    Maybe me it was me could be maybe I wasn’t worthy,
    I am not saying I hate you but I want it to be known you hurt me.

    we had a seed.... when you bleed i bleed, provide what she needs,
    actually not true you pocket your greed. while she calls him daddy,
    im the one responsable for raising her, its obsurd,
    how you can think those are just words. and dont think
    respect is a title i have earned, set aside my concearns,
    like what i think is berverent, but im not the one using a child as leverage.
    im not the one who really never intended on marriage,
    im offended you stayed their an excepted my heart setiments.
    pretended even moved into my residence then moved me out
    how could love spawn so much melevolence? eveident in evidence
    you were having affairs,when i poured my heart out who sat there without a care.
    you told me you loved him how was that fair? how do i prepare,
    how can i compare? now with her but still see your reflection in her glair.
    disgusted i dont even deserve to breath the same air, dont want to discuss it,
    im disgusted, but dont want to go to war,
    i put my heart on it honest take it it doesnt serve purpose anymore.



    Hook: beautiful lady, where is that we went wrong,
    Another lifetime maybe, right now you’re remembered since I wrote this song,
    Maybe me it was me could be maybe I wasn’t worthy,
    I am not saying I hate you but I want it to be known you hurt me.
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    ORDO ABACHO(ORDER OUT OF KAOS) CLICK
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    Re: broken heart for severed loves

    uppin
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    Re: broken heart for severed loves

    this was fuckin raw man

    there was a few iffy parts

    but the story was genius and dope


    straight sickness


    i think u should work on flow a lil other then that is sick

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    Re: broken heart for severed loves

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