Ironic

[Sting3r]

I can't really explain this, the purpose is worthless
Doesn't compare or comply, & no surface as earth is..
no version is certain, Nothing's asserted or worded
Even if I service my nervous urges, no burden's averted
I could douse my tendencies chemically with Henecy
Until my short term memory, short term memory, memory
But I wont ever be listed in that wicked condition
In the same elicit position of lifted, the visits conflicted

I like the color purple, I'm Not sure what a sexist is
I'm an active passive attractive lazy perfectionist
I should probably get that stamped to my shirt
Cause I'm tired of filling out all the face book paperwork..
I'm a faithless jerk, find some one compatible
Cross reference my interests, & be tactical
forget what a bitch got & Ripped partial parts
Some one who likes Anime, Hip-hop, & mixed martial arts
I get confused when dudes only look at the tits
when I search for a pretty face and wits.. that's it

If that person exists!!!!

They probably just died in a violent wreckage
On E-harmony, in the car, sending me a private message


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post6824348
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...un-387778.html

[Sting3r]

...... damn

[country]

lmfao thats fuckin NASTY dude


u got the best flow from any one i seen on here

If that person exists!!!!

They probably just died in a violent wreckage
On E-harmony, in the car, sending me a private message

that shit is classic


this was FIRE man, cant complain bout nothing


yo i wanna collab with you

[Sting3r]

thanks for the warm feed man

[Kizmit_TUC]

Nice piece

[fazeT]

I can't really explain this, the purpose is worthless
Doesn't compare or comply, & no surface as earth is..
no version is certain, Nothing's asserted or worded
Even if I service my nervous urges, no burden's averted
^^
WHAT THE FUCK??? whoo kid bring dat shit back, god damn!!!

top to bottom, shit was dope
I totally agree wit country!
Will be peepin ur shit from now on......

Uppin dis shyt!!

[Neko]

Tight man thats my kind of rap. Real rugged shit.

[Silhouettes]

Great piece... A couple of stretched lines (mixed martial arts... should've removed Hip Hop or Anime for the flow's sake, would've been a great line.. Face book paperwork-line didn't flow well either)... The short term memory line was corny to me as well.

You flowed well, when it comes to multies you obviously chose quantity over length, and you pulled it off well... After reading the first part, I thought this was going to take a totally different direction, so the second part was a funny flip to me. The two parts are totally different, yet they kind of connect well.. And the closing was greatness... G/J

[Spaz Incendio]

Lethal's writtens get more play on RB than his own fucking website.


Bravo! Nice piece. Good flow (for the most part). A lot of quotables here...I found the short term memory thing to be a gimmick and somehow it worked on me. It seems like one of those lines you hate or love. But other than that, not much to say that hasn't been said....

Somebody get Digga from his bat cave!!! (he should feed this)

[Silhouettes]

Reflex = Lethal?

Whuttup dude? (Koko here if you didn't already know)

[Caderyn]

Lethal's writtens get more play on RB than his own fucking website.


Bravo! Nice piece. Good flow (for the most part). A lot of quotables here...I found the short term memory thing to be a gimmick and somehow it worked on me. It seems like one of those lines you hate or love. But other than that, not much to say that hasn't been said....

Somebody get Digga from his bat cave!!! (he should feed this)

I refuse to feed a style I gave him.
Secondly, .

He'll just say "It's for audio, blah blah blah"..

<3'z you Lethal

[Sting3r]

Sup koko, thanks for the feed every one.

Spaz, sup dude.

Digga, you hit it right on the nail..
This is more of an audio piece..

and if you want to claim that you "gave me" this style..
lets be realistic.. It was really k1 and that cypher tourny that got me used to the shorter bar.. not you.

[Caderyn]

Sup koko, thanks for the feed every one.

Spaz, sup dude.

Digga, you hit it right on the nail..
This is more of an audio piece..

and if you want to claim that you "gave me" this style..
lets be realistic.. It was really k1 and that cypher tourny that got me used to the shorter bar.. not you.

And who might I add showed you to netcees..
Where you masturbated to some of the netcees I showed you..

Give cred where cred is due son..
Jander isn't even relevant..

Your just avoiding my daps..
Now hand'em over..

[Sting3r]

And who might I add showed you to netcees..
Where you masturbated to some of the netcees I showed you..

Give cred where cred is due son..
Jander isn't even relevant..

Your just avoiding my daps..
Now hand'em over..

My style IS short bar like some seen on netcees.. like storm G..

but it's definitely my own flow and multi progression..
not to mention the way I approach each verse..

So if you're insinuating that YOU showed me "my style"
I'd still have to disagree, and hold back your daps!!

I started out texting with short bar, and progressed into that hideous long bar style that dominates now...

...
A simple " nice verse " would have sufficed.

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on another note..
I rock your world, now give me MY daps!!!

[Caderyn]

Ok let me just finish my point by saying..
Who showed you Storm-G?

Mhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhm.

And it was ennh..
Tbh, I havent seen a really original rhyme scheme in ages..
It's all continuitive multi's..
Nothing really different, just quasi-different placement.

So "nice verse."

^^Is that a water cooler or a toilet..
It says "mic" but I hardly believe it.