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    please criticize my flow

    Understand when I say this is something I play with--
    I don’t need to have a basis whenever I say shit
    If I drop your faggot name--just be thankful I say it---
    Maybe I’ll be gracious and not speak to your gayness---
    Or I wont trip thru this space and rip thru Ur-anus….
    separate your ass from the place that your brain is--
    your life an experiment under construct enslavement
    we allow you your threads-- it's wackness containment--
    so lay your 'BET' s on weaponz like 'black entertainment'---
    Your 'bars' are so 'weak' -no - 'phone calls' or pages--
    Im like 'Verizon wireless --more bars in more places'
    It’s been verbalweaponz through all your name changes
    I stay johnny blaze shit-perfection --your sick of it--
    but who cares about a bunch of pussies and hypocrites--
    Sittin on the internet counting bars in written scripts?
    Ill drop seventeen- --Like anyone even gives a shit?
    no audio -but there you go-- Criticizing flow it's ridiculous--
    What you guessed how I spit it?---you’re omnipotent?
    NO! There’s only one god and I’m him---so live with it---
    Hey kids--I dropped my first verse in hieroglyphics-
    that’s the illest dig against me and I had to spit it-
    You don’t get it? “dub is so hard cuz Viagra did it”
    If you wanna talk shit-kids-cant wait for the punch lines---
    Until then---to suck my dick-come-get in the lunch line---


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    Re: please criticize my flow

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    Re: please criticize my flow

    lmao---i knew you were up....

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    Re: please criticize my flow

    as for the verse


    u know i think its fuckin nasty


    ur scheme,content,FLOW, lmao raw man

    any kid dissin dawg cant take u int he battle field, u know this i know this



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    Re: please criticize my flow

    i know theres no real flow in text pieces

    but this had flow just spittin it how it reads

    cell phone/bars/verizon flip was sick

    I stay johnny blaze shit-perfection --your sick of it--
    but who cares about a bunch of pussies and hypocrites--
    Sittin on the internet counting bars in written scripts?
    Ill drop seventeen- --Like anyone even gives a shit?
    no audio -but there you go-- Criticizing flow it's ridiculous--
    What you guessed how I spit it?---you’re omnipotent?

    lmao it's funny cause it's true

    these kids don't want it with you

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    Re: please criticize my flow

    lol...nice...up

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    Re: please criticize my flow

    HAHAHA i fucking love it, LMFAO I FUCKING LOVE IT, thats like the best way to describe this shit lmfao good shit man, that was fucking savage ruthless ass shit. keep spittin like that nigga stay up.
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    Re: please criticize my flow

    upppppp

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    Re: please criticize my flow

    nice flow man
    I like yo style
    except for the last two lines shit was a on par
    stay up!!
    love to hear this audio

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    Re: please criticize my flow

    bump^

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    Re: please criticize my flow

    flow was good man..

    Im like 'Verizon wireless --more bars in more places'

    ^ that line was dope.
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    Re: please criticize my flow

    upit

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    Re: please criticize my flow

    shit was nice VDub... flow was on point throughout, some hot multies and punches... wasn't feelin' the Verizon punch, a little tired... but other than that it was raw yo...


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    Re: please criticize my flow

    sick...ill vocab...punches were on point...i wasnt feelin the verizon punch..but thats my opinion....rhyme scheme was there when read back.....
    Quote Originally Posted by verbalweaponz
    but who cares about a bunch of pussies and hypocrites--
    Sittin on the internet counting bars in written scripts?
    ..fav line the truth is so cold lol..nothin negative to say..keep droppin the hottness.~1~


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    Re: please criticize my flow

    That was nuts man. Fuck, your punchlines are stellar.

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