This is only my third rap so please comment on what ya think with any hints and tips
im from the uk and im not from the hood/
but that dnt mean my rapping aint good/
ive got no stories of being in a gang/
and none of my rapping contains hood or ghetto slang/
ive never touched drugs or been in trouble with the law/
and i dont even know what its like to be poor/
but that dont mean my rhymes are shit/
to be considered good you dont have to have lived in a pit/
all you other rappers talk about taking a drug/
but ive never done anything to be a thug/
were im from theres no rapping game
but that dont mean the quality beats arent the same/
now how good you are at rapping aint about from were you hail/
as long as the rhymes and beats are what you nail/
in the uk theres no east or west coast/
its all wanabe ganstas that you will here about the most/
from where i hail theres no talk of the ghetto/
and writting rap songs aint a common way to let go/
but aim going to keep up this rap and rhyming/
and i will keep working on my rapping and freestyling/
now i aint going to keep rapping about a drive by shooting/
the worst you will here from me is angry horn tooting/
im telling you now i wont be bustin no caps/
but i will still keep writting and spitting raps/
ive never touched drugs or seen any ice/
i wont be skating and you all think im too nice/
other rappers dont respect me coz ive got money and im white/
i aint no gansta and i aint lookin for a fight/
all you rhymers under-estimate me/
but ive got the skills as you can see/
you wont hear about how ive been hustling/
or about how other ganstas are hating/
now im going to tell it as it is and speak the truth/
i aint got a shiny grill or a golden tooth