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G-unit produced by Dr. Dre style here. Peep it.
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[soundclick]7459491[/soundclick]
Download: http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7459491
G-unit produced by Dr. Dre style here. Peep it.
Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...in-393610.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...95-393655.html
i thought the beat was decent...it was straight the right rapper on there would make it better
IJL
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Thanks.
Listening..Nice melody, drums okay.. I dont know if its these headphones or you should equalize the whole beat a bit, so theres more of the low frequences... Its kinda too tight to me.... Other than that I have no complaint.. Pyyace
Wish there was some reverb on that snare....sounds dry....i like the synth that comes in om the chorus sounds ill. Good work on this your def. getting better, melodies are getting better too.
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Its not bad, the melodies work together nice. The snare definately could use some work. I'd say just use a different one all together and maybe move that last snare back a 16th might sound better, I'm trying to imagine it in my head but alls I can hear is whats playing but I think that's how far back it should be moved instead of the two straight in a row like that. Either that or just drop it all together. But I think moving it back might be better instead.
Snare pattern is so wackkkkkkkkkkk
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too keyboard sounding imo, and stock keyboard sounds. get some more original doper samples. The melody is decent, it has potential. just use doper synths. Maybe use more live instrument sounds with same melody. ya dig. keep at it.
that snare is mad dry.. reverb that a bit.
the melodies sound like u been listenin to too much dre n tryna copy his style completely
there's parts where the bass line falls off key.. i dont like that.
other wise u need better sounds.
keep @ it tho.. try not to sound too much like dre tho.
theres a alotta good feedback above... the snare definitly... thought maybe adding the bass more in the sequence...
defintly a good listen
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