Im The Multi-King (Open Collab)

[Kapital J]

Kapital J
Im makin history
Im literally killin these silly niggas with my lyrically invincible ability
Im splendid
Athletic like Jerome Bettis
You lackin them academics
Im laughin cuz your ass is pathetic
I got that central intelligence so your ass is detectable
I spit hazardous chemicals so your death is inevitable
You'll never get to my level
My methods incredible
Im better than excellent
I guess its genetical
My vest is impenitrable to protect my left ventricle
You better correct bein disrespectful
My spits isnt edible
Like insect infested vegetables
When they get caught in your intestines
I said they indigestible
Catch a headache better get a medic
Forget hypothetical questions
Lets get technical for a second
Up next its.......
Vince
We're principled spitters that'll rip you a liver
So unless you been dipped in the River Styx
I'll be killing you quicker I'ma serial killer
Born a realist or better yet born for real shit
I touch your tissues, bones n' gristle
Just to make you feel this your ideal quips
Are child's play to me they barely reveal wit
You conceal thrift in each bar I role with Kapitalist pigs
The type that get a boner when victims ask us to live
No plastic surgeon alive could patch up your ribs
After we coat the wound with gasoline then stick a match in the shit
How far did they think they'd actually get
Your ad-libs are way out of line....get back to the script
I'm the type to make emcees practice while I crack their back with a whip
Its crazy how I can lyrically go from passive to pissed
Leaving a fairly large slash on the wrists
I'll scar your face to the bone then smash it with bricks
I'm married to the game it only refers to me as a passionate bitch
You ain't even gotta put an asterisk in, even this pattern could twist
Its Vince & Kap J if you don't mind..."Could you back off our dicks!".
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11th Commandment
Thou Shall Not Fuck With Us
&

Verbal Mercenaries
I'll Ghost For You If The Price Is Right!!!

[Kapital J]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...my-393807.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ct-392641.html

[Kapital J]

If you wanta hop on dis shit just PM me

[The Genesis]

cool shit, the structure was off, chopping the lines too short makes it harder to pick up the flow, but the flow was still on point nonetheless, not bad at all, keep elevating.

hit my joint up with some feed if you get a chance:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...re-393619.html

[Emajanashun]

i agree with Gen, structure was too short for the multis to be read more fluently but it was still a pretty good read..

[cALiiM3]

eh...could have been a lot better...lot of one liners that didnt really hit in my opinion...i didnt understand what you were talking about a lot of the time you could have done another one or two lines to keep going. keep hittin those multys my dude. but i see some potential. you just need to keep working. but with lyrics like that i would suggest audio instead of text.

[$JaKPoT$]

you are no where near the multie king, I AM!

[Kapital J]

ok nigga wutev you say

[konshens]

this could have been much better but it was good nice multis and good lines just a little stretched in areas and that kinda messed up the flow but you had a really good topic and idea to go at it with rtf
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ic-393893.html

[KID L]

meh coulda been betters just a bunch of ranting as if you were bored