*EDITED BY PUNCH*
Punch
(Champion with 265 points and 5 title defenses)
Vince
(Challenger with 89 points)
10 lines, good luck....................
Punch
Vince
*EDITED BY PUNCH*
Punch
(Champion with 265 points and 5 title defenses)
Vince
(Challenger with 89 points)
10 lines, good luck....................
Last edited by Barcotic; March 31st, 2009 at 04:30 PM
Check.
Chizzeck....
Type that trash verse you'll beg for copyrights how quick I'll own it
you'd prolly ask for an extension in LLL from below the waist of your opponent
I'm blitzing your weak lines they'll all laugh at how my prey's attacked
You could hate on Kenny G instrumentals and still not downplay the sax
I'm taking the belt lil' homie your reign will definitely be in the past-tense
Heard Punch is on his 'aye-game'...so is every Canadian with an accent
your feeding is starved for strong bars and I always laugh at your flips
Noobs will skim for a recycled Punch
only to find that the compactor smashed him to bits
Lyrically I just outshine the current champ...you can't excel, you're gay
and that 3-bar style is all Eth's like the class clown with failing grades
Last edited by Barcotic; March 31st, 2009 at 05:48 PM
Vince is known as a little baby so after this battle he'll cry n melt,
..and pacifier when I stomp him so far in the ground he'll fly by Hell..
Before he was banned his only traits were stealing bars n ducking,
..and after the bitch got candy stopped biting and started sucking..
I don't know why he came back, maybe he likes doin petty things,
..but Visa horrible text battler who doesn't get credit for anything..
He's a biter that just won't quit, I hope there's no mistaking him,
..if he seizure good lines he'll shake and try to resist taking them..
He clearly spit quick but it's even more clear that he lost n I got him,
next time he drops off the top
..he should make sure there's rocks at the bottom..
Last edited by Barcotic; March 31st, 2009 at 05:39 PM
Type that trash verse you'll beg for copyrights how quick I'll own it
you'd prolly ask for an extension in LLL from below the waist of your opponent
set up and punch didn't fit... but punch was ok...
I'm blitzing your weak lines they'll all laugh at how my prey's attacked
You could hate on Kenny G instrumentals and still not downplay the sax
eh...
I'm taking the belt lil' homie your reign will definitely be in the past-tense
Heard Punch is on his 'aye-game'...so is every Canadian with an accent
lol...
your feeding is starved for strong bars and I always laugh at your flips
Noobs will skim for a recycled Punch
only to find that the compactor smashed him to bits
ok...
Lyrically I just outshine the current champ...you can't excel, you're gay
and that 3-bar style is all Eth's like the class clown with failing grades
eh... not feeling...
vs
Vince is known as a little baby so after this battle he'll cry n melt,
..and pacifier when I stomp him so far in the ground he'll fly by Hell..
ok...
Before he was banned his only traits were stealing bars n ducking,
..and after the bitch got candy stopped biting and started sucking..
lol...
I don't know why he came back, maybe he likes doin petty things,
..but Visa horrible text battler who doesn't get credit for anything..
good flip...
He's a biter that just won't quit so I hope there's no mistaking him,
..if he seizure good lines he shakes while trying to resist taking em..
eh...
He clearly spit quick but it's even more clear that he lost n I got him,
next time he drops off the top
..he should make sure there's rocks at the bottom..
good closer...
another 11th Crew battle... lol... good shit by both... Punch by a bar...
Type that trash verse you'll beg for copyrights how quick I'll own it
you'd prolly ask for an extension in LLL from below the waist of your opponent
okish opener
I'm blitzing your weak lines they'll all laugh at how my prey's attacked
You could hate on Kenny G instrumentals and still not downplay the sax
nahh
I'm taking the belt lil' homie your reign will definitely be in the past-tense
Heard Punch is on his 'aye-game'...so is every Canadian with an accent
lol nice
your feeding is starved for strong bars and I always laugh at your flips
Noobs will skim for a recycled Punch
only to find that the compactor smashed him to bits
ok
Lyrically I just outshine the current champ...you can't excel, you're gay
and that 3-bar style is all Eth's like the class clown with failing grades
nahh
vs
Vince is known as a little baby so after this battle he'll cry n melt,
..and pacifier when I stomp him so far in the ground he'll fly by Hell..
ok opener
Before he was banned his only traits were stealing bars n ducking,
..and after the bitch got candy stopped biting and started sucking..
good
I don't know why he came back, maybe he likes doin petty things,
..but Visa horrible text battler who doesn't get credit for anything..
okishh
He's a biter that just won't quit so I hope there's no mistaking him,
..if he seizure good lines he shakes while trying to resist taking em..
ok
He clearly spit quick but it's even more clear that he lost n I got him,
next time he drops off the top
..he should make sure there's rocks at the bottom..
nice closer
Vote: Punch, felt vince had a few bars that let him down, defo not near the strongest battle that i've seen by Punch but was strong enough to win this none of the less
let me take you to the movies.
Punch
Vince is known as a little baby so after this battle he'll cry n melt,
..and pacifier when I stomp him so far in the ground he'll fly by Hell..
..Nice wordplay punch Solid opener..
Before he was banned his only traits were stealing bars n ducking,
..and after the bitch got candy stopped biting and started sucking..
..lmao cool..
I don't know why he came back, maybe he likes doin petty things,
..but Visa horrible text battler who doesn't get credit for anything..
..Heh witty name play like it..
He's a biter that just won't quit, I hope there's no mistaking him,
..if he seizure good lines he'll shake and try to resist taking them..
..ok-ish...
He clearly spit quick but it's even more clear that he lost n I got him,
next time he drops off the top
..he should make sure there's rocks at the bottom..
..Ok closer..
Vince
Type that trash verse you'll beg for copyrights how quick I'll own it
you'd prolly ask for an extension in LLL from below the waist of your opponent
..OK Opener..
I'm blitzing your weak lines they'll all laugh at how my prey's attacked
You could hate on Kenny G instrumentals and still not downplay the sax
..Heh alright..
I'm taking the belt lil' homie your reign will definitely be in the past-tense
Heard Punch is on his 'aye-game'...so is every Canadian with an accent
..ok but that aye/canadian concepts are played..
your feeding is starved for strong bars and I always laugh at your flips
Noobs will skim for a recycled Punch
only to find that the compactor smashed him to bits
..lol I thought this was good actually..
Lyrically I just outshine the current champ...you can't excel, you're gay
and that 3-bar style is all Eth's like the class clown with failing grades
..damn man you had the right personal here just thought you'll do something different, ok-ish closer..
Overall vote- Punch little close but not as much seeing as punch stayed constant with his punches/wordplay also his personals was set up better
Cool, uppin for more votes..^^
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Vince is known as a little baby so after this battle he'll cry n melt,
..and pacifier when I stomp him so far in the ground he'll fly by Hell..
ok
Before he was banned his only traits were stealing bars n ducking,
..and after the bitch got candy stopped biting and started sucking..
lol dope
I don't know why he came back, maybe he likes doin petty things,
..but Visa horrible text battler who doesn't get credit for anything..
nice nameplay
He's a biter that just won't quit, I hope there's no mistaking him,
..if he seizure good lines he'll shake and try to resist taking them..
lol nice
He clearly spit quick but it's even more clear that he lost n I got him,
next time he drops off the top
..he should make sure there's rocks at the bottom..
didn't feel
vs.
Type that trash verse you'll beg for copyrights how quick I'll own it
you'd prolly ask for an extension in LLL from below the waist of your opponent
ok
I'm blitzing your weak lines they'll all laugh at how my prey's attacked
You could hate on Kenny G instrumentals and still not downplay the sax
ok
I'm taking the belt lil' homie your reign will definitely be in the past-tense
Heard Punch is on his 'aye-game'...so is every Canadian with an accent
ok
your feeding is starved for strong bars and I always laugh at your flips
Noobs will skim for a recycled Punch
only to find that the compactor smashed him to bits
good
Lyrically I just outshine the current champ...you can't excel, you're gay
and that 3-bar style is all Eth's like the class clown with failing grades
ok, do not use the gay thing, it's played out
I vote for Punch. He had hotter lines than Vince, I was feeling it that much really.
..........
vince-
Type that trash verse you'll beg for copyrights how quick I'll own it
you'd prolly ask for an extension in LLL from below the waist of your opponent
...this was ok...
I'm blitzing your weak lines they'll all laugh at how my prey's attacked
You could hate on Kenny G instrumentals and still not downplay the sax
..not feeling it sorry...
I'm taking the belt lil' homie your reign will definitely be in the past-tense
Heard Punch is on his 'aye-game'...so is every Canadian with an accent
...ok...
your feeding is starved for strong bars and I always laugh at your flips
Noobs will skim for a recycled Punch
only to find that the compactor smashed him to bits
...pretty good...
Lyrically I just outshine the current champ...you can't excel, you're gay
and that 3-bar style is all Eth's like the class clown with failing grades
..ok closer...
Punch-
Vince is known as a little baby so after this battle he'll cry n melt,
..and pacifier when I stomp him so far in the ground he'll fly by Hell..
..nice...
Before he was banned his only traits were stealing bars n ducking,
..and after the bitch got candy stopped biting and started sucking..
...nice...
I don't know why he came back, maybe he likes doin petty things,
..but Visa horrible text battler who doesn't get credit for anything..
....pretty good punch...
He's a biter that just won't quit, I hope there's no mistaking him,
..if he seizure good lines he'll shake and try to resist taking them..
....clever punch...
He clearly spit quick but it's even more clear that he lost n I got him,
next time he drops off the top
..he should make sure there's rocks at the bottom..
...good closer...
alright overall this was a good battle. vince you had some good bars, but also some weak ones as well, sorry to say it vince..but not bad overall. punch you came strong, every bar had some sting to it and it was very consistent overall, very well structured and the wordplay again was nice. very nice drop. keep it though vince..
v/Punch
Uppin this shit..^^
Vince is known as a little baby so after this battle he'll cry n melt,
..and pacifier when I stomp him so far in the ground he'll fly by Hell..
wasn't feeling it
Before he was banned his only traits were stealing bars n ducking,
..and after the bitch got candy stopped biting and started sucking..
lol
I don't know why he came back, maybe he likes doin petty things,
..but Visa horrible text battler who doesn't get credit for anything..
ok
He's a biter that just won't quit, I hope there's no mistaking him,
..if he seizure good lines he'll shake and try to resist taking them..
ok
He clearly spit quick but it's even more clear that he lost n I got him,
next time he drops off the top
..he should make sure there's rocks at the bottom..
ok closer
vs
Type that trash verse you'll beg for copyrights how quick I'll own it
you'd prolly ask for an extension in LLL from below the waist of your opponent
ok
I'm blitzing your weak lines they'll all laugh at how my prey's attacked
You could hate on Kenny G instrumentals and still not downplay the sax
meh
I'm taking the belt lil' homie your reign will definitely be in the past-tense
Heard Punch is on his 'aye-game'...so is every Canadian with an accent
wasn't really feeling it
your feeding is starved for strong bars and I always laugh at your flips
Noobs will skim for a recycled Punch
only to find that the compactor smashed him to bits
good nameplay
Lyrically I just outshine the current champ...you can't excel, you're gay
and that 3-bar style is all Eth's like the class clown with failing grades
this could have been a dope punch/personal if it was worded differently. Nice try tho
V/Barcotic