From Love to Hate

[Kapital J]

First things first: What did I do to you
To deserve this? Girl why am I hurtin?
Ya see
I dont see what you seen in me to make you leave
So baby would you please just tell me!
Right now I find it difficult to understand everything
Cuz ya wit anotha man but I love you anyways.
I'd take you back any day Ya dont even care
Cuz if you cared then you wouldnt have gone no where
And I dont know why but it kills me inside
Everytime ya ride by with ya new guy
I try to keep a smile on my face as you drive away
Seems like its everytime that I try to say
That im sorry
Even though I did nothin wrong
I guess I cant accept the fact that my love is gone
Had to promise my heart that i'd be done wit you
Right after this song
Depart with these words: Goodbye So Long!
Ya probly dont see it but i'm startin to hate you
Before I disappear I just wanna thank you
For takin my heart
Im amazed that we've made it this far
Now we're way past the part we started breakin part
Its like we skipped it
I guessed I must have missed it
Cuz just a moment ago I was holdin ya close
Next thing I know you roamed off into da distance
If ya woulda brought ya problems to my attention
I promise I woulda have fixed it
But never mind now I guess I just gotta forget it
Just like you forgot me like I had no existence......
Bitch get da fuck outta here Im not even finished
Wit dis song
And you already tryna come home
Constantly callin my phone
Please just leave me alone
I gotta move on
I gotta new girl
Bitch
I hope you rot all on ya own ©

[Kapital J]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ry-395497.html

[Kapital J]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post6997957

[Kapital J]

uppin i need feedback

[Amba.Darlin]

this is something easy to relate too. The confusion of your feelings. Hating yourself for loving them. Attempting to move on, but once they crawl back and you get closure, you realize you don't need them. good read

[Kapital J]

Uppin

[Kapital J]

uppin

[BETTER THEN U]

i have been through this before and i hate the feeling so much so i can relate.flow was a little off but it had good raw emotion in and nice pictures brought forth by your words.nice drop.
hit my piece up...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...op-395729.html

[Verbal Hologram]

i like the emotion in this piece man. It actually think It was alright in written form, although the way to set it out here made it a little difficult to read (as in middle of the page) Anyway i think you should go ahead and do it audio.....A nice short piece, well done homie....stay up

[Philosopher.]

I can relate to this because i've been through a lot of love/hate relationships, situations and things of that nature so I know how it goes. I know it's hard to get past it and move on but anyways overall this was a good piece here, one of the few I actually enjoyed. Keep it up..

[Fatal.]

The best thing about this peice was the emotion. you really summed up feelings and imagery with this. I could really get into it. nothing complex, nothing with intense rhymes and multies, but a good read.

[Ink Poyzin]

The best thing about this peice was the emotion

First I'll start by saying, man, your writing is already improving from most of the other pieces I've came across by you. The emotion in this was strong, bro. Definitely somethin' me and some other guys can relate to here. Alot of times I still see my ex chicks walking around with other men. Overall, bro, I was feeling this. Keep writing, dude, thanks for the read..

[Led Poison]

Nice drop fams. Felt the emotion throughout the verse..flow was smooth n the imagery was there...wordin was koo..could've been abit betta but still str8....keep it up. Chek out ma drop..."The Heart of a Soilder" let me kno wat u think...thanx inadvance...again, go0d shit homie keep up da goodwork