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    Talking !!!Decapitation Creation!!!

    I gonna decapitate you, as I smash ya face through a bakery window. And after that i'll bake you. I hate fake dudes and I hope Michael Jackson rapes you. Bu then again you'd give consent, take it, and say "Thank You". The i'd say "MAKE WAY!!!!" with a stainless razor blade and chase you and slay you. Trace you with sidewalk chalk like grade school. But hey, you could say someone finally laid you when I lay you in ya grave and pave you and after day two I'll stay prayin to make Satan reincarnate you as the walking dead but honestly your not a threat. I'll drop off ya head when I cock back and pop off ten. Leaving two shots left. Then i'll hop the fence.
    But Im Not Done Yet
    I thought I taught you ya gotta watch who you mess wit?Are you deaf bitch? When I knocked you senseless obviously you lost all ya senses. But when i'm talkin to you ya better correct ya deafness so I can readdress this lesson.
    Just Check This
    I'm tempted to stretch this weapon and let this shit flow like gas at ya local Exxon or Citgo. Light this shit up like a night time disco and explode. Next thing ya know you gettin thrown to Mexico. Better hope you don't get blown to bits by the border patrol. But no, I ordered them to hold up so we can toke up, roll up a blunt, blow some dro, gotta go, times up. So I take my last hit and get back to business. Sit back, relax, and laugh as my bad ass chick bitch slaps you with ya own snapped wrists. Leaving imprints, gashes, and slits as you get smashed to bits by a ton of bricks. I TOLD YOU I'M NOT THE ONE TO FUCK WITH.
    You just wanna be super but your as simple as it gets
    Some get the pooper scooper cuz I just shit on this kid!!

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    You just wanna be super but your as simple as it gets
    Some get the pooper scooper cuz I just shit on this kid!!

    Kapital J aka "Imperial Trigga"
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    You just wanna be super but your as simple as it gets
    Some get the pooper scooper cuz I just shit on this kid!!

    Kapital J aka "Imperial Trigga"
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    Re: !!!Decapitation Creation!!!

    Flow was almost intact through-out.Smooth multies and some good punches there.Liked the beginning more.Vocab was aiight.Physical assaults thrown lyrically in face?

    Good stuff.

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    Re: !!!Decapitation Creation!!!

    this was alright good flow structure was kinda off but it works good vocab but coulda bin better multies were okay but you need more metas and similies more imagery in my opinion
    flawless phonics from the godless kriminal konshens.
    honest a promise to murder massively
    with no accomplice....

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    Re: !!!Decapitation Creation!!!

    I dont know man.... for a piece like this I would imagine a long piece, more imagery, like I dont see much decapitation done in this.... and you should structure your piece u know.... vocab was alright...

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    Re: !!!Decapitation Creation!!!

    uppin
    You just wanna be super but your as simple as it gets
    Some get the pooper scooper cuz I just shit on this kid!!

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    Re: !!!Decapitation Creation!!!

    uppin
    You just wanna be super but your as simple as it gets
    Some get the pooper scooper cuz I just shit on this kid!!

    Kapital J aka "Imperial Trigga"
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    Re: !!!Decapitation Creation!!!

    gonna decapitate you, as I smash ya face through a bakery window. And after that i'll bake you. I hate fake dudes and I hope Michael Jackson rapes you. Bu then again you'd give consent, take it, and say "Thank You".

    lol.....after that it just seemed like long ass threats that didn't flow too well....some lines was either too long or too short.....

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    Re: !!!Decapitation Creation!!!

    last up
    You just wanna be super but your as simple as it gets
    Some get the pooper scooper cuz I just shit on this kid!!

    Kapital J aka "Imperial Trigga"
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