LLL Season 11: Week 3
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LLL Season 11: Week 3
Standard Rules (can be found in LLL Office)
Check in by Wednesday
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Good Luck
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Bar vs Comm
$crip vs Hex
BTK vs $in
Meters vs Manic
RAS vs Ancel
Last edited by The Archetype; July 26th, 2009 at 11:02 PM
Last edited by Rizpy; July 26th, 2009 at 10:30 AM
Originally Posted by The Archetype
Every league's got a clown, the guy who digs wack shit thats retarded
I think we all know The Type...
... will even tell you HIMSELF that he's garbage
New to the league? Dawg u from '03, i should hit you
U needed SIX YEARS to get into a league I walked into
This bum is amusing cuz ur future's glum and confusing
The sign-in thread says drop ur best link...
... you posted one of you LOSING
Yea u get no respect, but quit the bitching guy
Ur "wins" came via two has-beens... that didn't try
People think u can win? The predictions may revive you dude
The Arch is golden...
... but I don't need to be at McDonalds to drive thru u
This guy's through, n' even tho u got dumb rhymes
Ur an award winning rapper, now go earn one at something OTHER than front lines
U just some weak shit, u may as well quit, this fags doomed
U'll amount to nothing, a TA is just the bitch of the classroom
Saw the pic in ur sig, that whore's one to be beckoned
Seems like u got the girl of ur dreams...
... refusing to look at u for more than a second
Last edited by Rizpy; July 25th, 2009 at 09:39 AM
*sigh*
I'm stoked to be here. I've always found new challenges enticing
And Riz is my stiffest competition yet... but that's just because he likes men
First Futuristic then Hex. I sense bitch moves at their worst
Cuz the quotes you do in the beginning are the only quotables in your verse
Comm said that experience would probably bring a win to Riz
Guess R's made a name for himself... but forgot to tell anyone what it is
And his girl? Ugly as fuck. You should see her moving in to holler
She causes a chain reaction... once she loses the slack on her collar
But Riz is a pimp and a player. He fucks different chicks on the sneak
Kid has bitches on the side... show and other carnival freaks
I'm in the Big Leagues now. With good comp i gotta focus completely
So it's just me and my computer... my girlfriend, dog, phone and TV
I thought i was the wackest but Phly put me against the league's worst cat
Kid fucked up the style i used so badly I had to switch my format
Anyway congrats on last week. It's an achievement to overthrow Hex
Too bad you're still cursed with that face, body and a lame life of solo sex
...blah...
Every league's got a clown, the guy who digs wack shit thats retarded
I think we all know The Type...
... will even tell you HIMSELF that he's garbage
OK
New to the league? Dawg u from '03, i should hit you
U needed SIX YEARS to get into a league I walked into
LOL
This bum is amusing cuz ur future's glum and confusing
The sign-in thread says drop ur best link...
... you posted one of you LOSING
Meh
Yea u get no respect, but quit the bitching guy
Ur "wins" came via two has-beens... that didn't try
Nah
People think u can win? The predictions may revive you dude
The Arch is golden...
... but I don't need to be at McDonalds to drive thru u
Nah
This guy's through, n' even tho u got dumb rhymes
Ur an award winning rapper, now go earn one at something OTHER than front lines
Meh
U just some weak shit, u may as well quit, this fags doomed
U'll amount to nothing, a TA is just the bitch of the classroom
Nah
Saw the pic in ur sig, that whore's one to be beckoned
Seems like u got the girl of ur dreams...
... refusing to look at u for more than a second
Lmao
VS
I'm stoked to be here. I've always found new challenges enticing
And Riz is my stiffest competition yet... but that's just because he likes men
LOL
First Futuristic then Hex. I sense bitch moves at their worst
Cuz the quotes you do in the beginning are the only quotables in your verse
Nah
Comm said that experience would probably bring a win to Riz
Guess R's made a name for himself... but forgot to tell anyone what it is
ok
And his girl? Ugly as fuck. You should see her moving in to holler
She causes a chain reaction... once she loses the slack on her collar
nah
But Riz is a pimp and a player. He fucks different chicks on the sneak
Kid has bitches on the side... show and other carnival freaks
LOL
I'm in the Big Leagues now. With good comp i gotta focus completely
So it's just me and my computer... my girlfriend, dog, phone and TV
NO
I thought i was the wackest but Phly put me against the league's worst cat
Kid fucked up the style i used so badly I had to switch my format
OK
Anyway congrats on last week. It's an achievement to overthrow Hex
Too bad you're still cursed with that face, body and a lame life of solo sex
LMao
Vote/Arch
vs
Every league's got a clown, the guy who digs wack shit thats retarded
I think we all know The Type...
... will even tell you HIMSELF that he's garbage
funny
New to the league? Dawg u from '03, i should hit you
U needed SIX YEARS to get into a league I walked into
ok
This bum is amusing cuz ur future's glum and confusing
The sign-in thread says drop ur best link...
... you posted one of you LOSING
lmao
Yea u get no respect, but quit the bitching guy
Ur "wins" came via two has-beens... that didn't try
nah
People think u can win? The predictions may revive you dude
The Arch is golden...
... but I don't need to be at McDonalds to drive thru u
ok
This guy's through, n' even tho u got dumb rhymes
Ur an award winning rapper, now go earn one at something OTHER than front lines
ok
U just some weak shit, u may as well quit, this fags doomed
U'll amount to nothing, a TA is just the bitch of the classroom
mehh ok
Saw the pic in ur sig, that whore's one to be beckoned
Seems like u got the girl of ur dreams...
... refusing to look at u for more than a second
ok
overall- this battle was decent, im not gonna lie i exoected more from arch. riz- i never read yiur shit before but i liked the beginning of your verse this week, seems like you fell off toward the end but still def. had the stronger overall punches, he takes this one.
v/ Riz
A.rtificial I.ntelligence
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New to the league? Dawg u from '03, i should hit you
U needed SIX YEARS to get into a league I walked into
This bum is amusing cuz ur future's glum and confusing
The sign-in thread says drop ur best link...
... you posted one of you LOSING
Yea u get no respect, but quit the bitching guy
Ur "wins" came via two has-beens... that didn't try
Saw the pic in ur sig, that whore's one to be beckoned
Seems like u got the girl of ur dreams...
... refusing to look at u for more than a second
VS
First Futuristic then Hex. I sense bitch moves at their worst
Cuz the quotes you do in the beginning are the only quotables in your verse
Comm said that experience would probably bring a win to Riz
Guess R's made a name for himself... but forgot to tell anyone what it is
Anyway congrats on last week. It's an achievement to overthrow Hex
Too bad you're still cursed with that face, body and a lame life of solo sex
Hmmm, pretty cool.. both had some stand outs a couple misses n some played shit... Arch got back on track this week somewhat cus i didnt feel his verse much last week. but some concepts were still complete misses to me like the computer bar, side show n chain reaction is type played. Riz dropped some heavy personals and it was enough to take the win.
Vote - Riz
Every league's got a clown, the guy who digs wack shit thats retarded
I think we all know The Type...
... will even tell you HIMSELF that he's garbage
New to the league? Dawg u from '03, i should hit you
U needed SIX YEARS to get into a league I walked into
This bum is amusing cuz ur future's glum and confusing
The sign-in thread says drop ur best link...
... you posted one of you LOSING
Vs
First Futuristic then Hex. I sense bitch moves at their worst
Cuz the quotes you do in the beginning are the only quotables in your verse
Comm said that experience would probably bring a win to Riz
Guess R's made a name for himself... but forgot to tell anyone what it is
But Riz is a pimp and a player. He fucks different chicks on the sneak
Kid has bitches on the side... show and other carnival freaks
Anyway congrats on last week. It's an achievement to overthrow Hex
Too bad you're still cursed with that face, body and a lame life of solo sex
The 1st 3 bars of Riz's verse were definitly nice.. AND personal.. then he seemed to fall off with some corny shit, along with a couple that were just too simple for my liking.. Arch had one more quotable, and they were kinda spread out, instead of all bunched up at the start of his verse like Riz's were.. and that works for me better.. I hate to see somebody fall off 3 bars in to their verse, cuz it doesn't appeal to me/the reader when you read 3 nice bars, followed by 5 staight misses.. so for that reason, and Arch having one more quotable, I gotta go with him here.. very, very close battle tho.... \\//ote: The Archetype
Every league's got a clown, the guy who digs wack shit thats retarded
I think we all know The Type...
... will even tell you HIMSELF that he's garbage
lol decent.
New to the league? Dawg u from '03, i should hit you
U needed SIX YEARS to get into a league I walked into
haha short and nice.
This bum is amusing cuz ur future's glum and confusing
The sign-in thread says drop ur best link...
... you posted one of you LOSING
lol alright..
Yea u get no respect, but quit the bitching guy
Ur "wins" came via two has-beens... that didn't try
nope.
People think u can win? The predictions may revive you dude
The Arch is golden...
... but I don't need to be at McDonalds to drive thru u
meh.
This guy's through, n' even tho u got dumb rhymes
Ur an award winning rapper, now go earn one at something OTHER than front lines
ehh..weak.
U just some weak shit, u may as well quit, this fags doomed
U'll amount to nothing, a TA is just the bitch of the classroom
ok...
Saw the pic in ur sig, that whore's one to be beckoned
Seems like u got the girl of ur dreams...
... refusing to look at u for more than a second
pretty cool.
I'm stoked to be here. I've always found new challenges enticing
And Riz is my stiffest competition yet... but that's just because he likes men
ehh..pretty played.
First Futuristic then Hex. I sense bitch moves at their worst
Cuz the quotes you do in the beginning are the only quotables in your verse
lol..cool.
Comm said that experience would probably bring a win to Riz
Guess R's made a name for himself... but forgot to tell anyone what it is
good..
And his girl? Ugly as fuck. You should see her moving in to holler
She causes a chain reaction... once she loses the slack on her collar
nice..
But Riz is a pimp and a player. He fucks different chicks on the sneak
Kid has bitches on the side... show and other carnival freaks
lol..
I'm in the Big Leagues now. With good comp i gotta focus completely
So it's just me and my computer... my girlfriend, dog, phone and TV
nah.
I thought i was the wackest but Phly put me against the league's worst cat
Kid fucked up the style i used so badly I had to switch my format
eh..alright.
Anyway congrats on last week. It's an achievement to overthrow Hex
Too bad you're still cursed with that face, body and a lame life of solo sex
ok closer..
Vote//Archetype - more consistent and while they both had 3 or 4 nice bars i enjoyed arch's more out of those. good battle here.
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Every league's got a clown, the guy who digs wack shit thats retarded
I think we all know The Type...
... will even tell you HIMSELF that he's garbage
you set yourself up for this, its aight or better
New to the league? Dawg u from '03, i should hit you
U needed SIX YEARS to get into a league I walked into
aight, cool swag to it
This bum is amusing cuz ur future's glum and confusing
The sign-in thread says drop ur best link...
... you posted one of you LOSING
i like how you're trying to be personal, they arn't all connected great, this one in particular i thought could have been worded harded
Yea u get no respect, but quit the bitching guy
Ur "wins" came via two has-beens... that didn't try
getting a little lackluster
People think u can win? The predictions may revive you dude
The Arch is golden...
... but I don't need to be at McDonalds to drive thru u
average
This guy's through, n' even tho u got dumb rhymes
Ur an award winning rapper, now go earn one at something OTHER than front lines
meh
U just some weak shit, u may as well quit, this fags doomed
U'll amount to nothing, a TA is just the bitch of the classroom
meh, intial punches have to dope to me and they are still a reach a lot of the time
Saw the pic in ur sig, that whore's one to be beckoned
Seems like u got the girl of ur dreams...
... refusing to look at u for more than a second
lol, aiight
vs.
I'm stoked to be here. I've always found new challenges enticing
And Riz is my stiffest competition yet... but that's just because he likes men
played
First Futuristic then Hex. I sense bitch moves at their worst
Cuz the quotes you do in the beginning are the only quotables in your verse
average at best
Comm said that experience would probably bring a win to Riz
Guess R's made a name for himself... but forgot to tell anyone what it is
jokes, kindof an old flip tho
And his girl? Ugly as fuck. You should see her moving in to holler
She causes a chain reaction... once she loses the slack on her collar
meh/bad
But Riz is a pimp and a player. He fucks different chicks on the sneak
Kid has bitches on the side... show and other carnival freaks
wordings off, didnt deliver the delay style properly for me
I'm in the Big Leagues now. With good comp i gotta focus completely
So it's just me and my computer... my girlfriend, dog, phone and TV
this was pretty dope actually
I thought i was the wackest but Phly put me against the league's worst cat
Kid fucked up the style i used so badly I had to switch my format
meh
Anyway congrats on last week. It's an achievement to overthrow Hex
Too bad you're still cursed with that face, body and a lame life of solo sex
meh
tough to call, arch had the make a name flip and distraction punches which were nice but not much besides that really, riz had the personal tip going for him more, and was just a little more consistent in my eyes
close battle and ill def be second guessing myself a bit but v/ riz
Every league's got a clown, the guy who digs wack shit thats retarded
I think we all know The Type...
... will even tell you HIMSELF that he's garbage
New to the league? Dawg u from '03, i should hit you
U needed SIX YEARS to get into a league I walked into
This bum is amusing cuz ur future's glum and confusing
The sign-in thread says drop ur best link...
... you posted one of you LOSING
vs.
First Futuristic then Hex. I sense bitch moves at their worst
Cuz the quotes you do in the beginning are the only quotables in your verse
Comm said that experience would probably bring a win to Riz
Guess R's made a name for himself... but forgot to tell anyone what it is
pretty close battle here. riz started out on a role in my opinion, but the second half of his verse wasnt really up to par with first.. the only thing i liked after those first three punches was the mcdonalds/arch punch. arche usually drops better than this, but regardless it was decent. i just think riz came alot more personal and it gave him the edge in this one though.
vote - riz
This bum is amusing cuz ur future's glum and confusing
The sign-in thread says drop ur best link...
... you posted one of you LOSING
People think u can win? The predictions may revive you dude
The Arch is golden...
... but I don't need to be at McDonalds to drive thru u
Vs.
Comm said that experience would probably bring a win to Riz
Guess R's made a name for himself... but forgot to tell anyone what it is
But Riz is a pimp and a player. He fucks different chicks on the sneak
Kid has bitches on the side... show and other carnival freaks
Anyway congrats on last week. It's an achievement to overthrow Hex
Too bad you're still cursed with that face, body and a lame life of solo sex
Vote: The Archetype, this battle was ok, Riz had the best bar but some of his punches really lacked any substance or harsh flips on the personal, Arch had a fairly decent verse, few misses here & there but I felt he edged it slightly with more quotables
Every league's got a clown, the guy who digs wack shit thats retarded
I think we all know The Type...
... will even tell you HIMSELF that he's garbage
(okay, ellipses structure unneeded though. decent)
New to the league? Dawg u from '03, i should hit you
U needed SIX YEARS to get into a league I walked into
(heh, ok)
This bum is amusing cuz ur future's glum and confusing
The sign-in thread says drop ur best link...
... you posted one of you LOSING
(heh, pretty harsh)
Yea u get no respect, but quit the bitching guy
Ur "wins" came via two has-beens... that didn't try
(too much of this, throw something more complicated)
People think u can win? The predictions may revive you dude
The Arch is golden...
... but I don't need to be at McDonalds to drive thru u
(hm, could've done way more w/ this. ok)
This guy's through, n' even tho u got dumb rhymes
Ur an award winning rapper, now go earn one at something OTHER than front lines
(ehh)
U just some weak shit, u may as well quit, this fags doomed
U'll amount to nothing, a TA is just the bitch of the classroom
(heh, pretty coo)
Saw the pic in ur sig, that whore's one to be beckoned
Seems like u got the girl of ur dreams...
... refusing to look at u for more than a second
(ok)
I'm stoked to be here. I've always found new challenges enticing
And Riz is my stiffest competition yet... but that's just because he likes men
(played out)
First Futuristic then Hex. I sense bitch moves at their worst
Cuz the quotes you do in the beginning are the only quotables in your verse
(heh, pretty cool)
Comm said that experience would probably bring a win to Riz
Guess R's made a name for himself... but forgot to tell anyone what it is
(okay-ish)
And his girl? Ugly as fuck. You should see her moving in to holler
She causes a chain reaction... once she loses the slack on her collar
(eh, played-ish. ok though)
But Riz is a pimp and a player. He fucks different chicks on the sneak
Kid has bitches on the side... show and other carnival freaks
(this is cool)
I'm in the Big Leagues now. With good comp i gotta focus completely
So it's just me and my computer... my girlfriend, dog, phone and TV
(not worded right)
I thought i was the wackest but Phly put me against the league's worst cat
Kid fucked up the style i used so badly I had to switch my format
(i like the self-deprecating approach but this is kinda sad i think)
Anyway congrats on last week. It's an achievement to overthrow Hex
Too bad you're still cursed with that face, body and a lame life of solo sex
(nah, nothing hear i feel)
this battle is mad close, closest of the week, but i have Riz barely taking it
v- Riz
Every league's got a clown, the guy who digs wack shit thats retarded
I think we all know The Type...
... will even tell you HIMSELF that he's garbage
liked this.. dope find, think he was actually speaking to me when he said that haha
New to the league? Dawg u from '03, i should hit you
U needed SIX YEARS to get into a league I walked into
decent personal
This bum is amusing cuz ur future's glum and confusing
The sign-in thread says drop ur best link...
... you posted one of you LOSING
dope hit..
Yea u get no respect, but quit the bitching guy
Ur "wins" came via two has-beens... that didn't try
not feelin it, too simple
People think u can win? The predictions may revive you dude
The Arch is golden...
... but I don't need to be at McDonalds to drive thru u
aiight-ish, needs to be more direct
This guy's through, n' even tho u got dumb rhymes
Ur an award winning rapper, now go earn one at something OTHER than front lines
nah, not feelin it
U just some weak shit, u may as well quit, this fags doomed
U'll amount to nothing, a TA is just the bitch of the classroom
good..
Saw the pic in ur sig, that whore's one to be beckoned
Seems like u got the girl of ur dreams...
... refusing to look at u for more than a second
lol, decent
vs
I'm stoked to be here. I've always found new challenges enticing
And Riz is my stiffest competition yet... but that's just because he likes men
lol, aiight
First Futuristic then Hex. I sense bitch moves at their worst
Cuz the quotes you do in the beginning are the only quotables in your verse
decent
Comm said that experience would probably bring a win to Riz
Guess R's made a name for himself... but forgot to tell anyone what it is
coo-ish..
And his girl? Ugly as fuck. You should see her moving in to holler
She causes a chain reaction... once she loses the slack on her collar
funny shit, fresh flip on a played concept.. not often I like these
But Riz is a pimp and a player. He fucks different chicks on the sneak
Kid has bitches on the side... show and other carnival freaks
I've actually seen one or two sideshow hits before, this was aiight
I'm in the Big Leagues now. With good comp i gotta focus completely
So it's just me and my computer... my girlfriend, dog, phone and TV
indirect punch, decent idea tho
I thought i was the wackest but Phly put me against the league's worst cat
Kid fucked up the style i used so badly I had to switch my format
ehh.. not feelin it
Anyway congrats on last week. It's an achievement to overthrow Hex
Too bad you're still cursed with that face, body and a lame life of solo sex
again, weak one.
riz was pretty consistent, with a couple misses that were drastic..
he had some NICE personals but then started to get stuck on the
personals and didn't switch it up... causing shit to be a bit boring..
then he quickly picked back up. where as arch had some solids in
the beginning and fell off hard at the end.. really closely matched
guys.. actually a dope one at that... props for goin hard guys
vote Riz, by a punch
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