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    Battlefield Ballad

    As the desert consumes , every one of my men
    War is a sacrifice , why must it be of a friend
    Pray to God for help, rejected time and again
    Everyday on patrol , aimlessly searching
    Bombs going off , can't find the insurgents
    Sniper rifle ready , to cap off a couple turbins
    The sun scorching , feels like Hell's Gates
    Pulse racing , my heart's the Belmont Stakes
    Can barley breathe , my whole body aches
    But a job's a job , continue with the mission
    Though they strong , my squad's in shit condition
    Been 3 days from camp , we low on ammunition
    Private needs medicine , miles of sand no physician
    Choking on his own saliva , can't find the oasis
    Supposed to be Devil Dogs, fear's on their faces
    Madness is what we feel , a bunch of head cases
    Forgetting the comforts , a bed,shower and food
    Death is upon us , pretty much this group's screwed
    Radio outta range , the corporal begins to feud
    Can't take the pressure , tears fall from his eyes
    Talking bout his daughter , never said his goodbyes
    She's the world to him , Dad may not reach stateside
    We all feel his pain , all of us got kids and loving wives
    Together we share , a harmonious , loneliness cry
    Battlefields stretch for days , when will we see our own
    Hours, weeks from now? or in a body bag on the way home
    United we stand , brothers in arms amongst this warzone

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    Re: Battlefield Ballad

    good piece LS.. good flow, pretty deep and emotional, a few lines could have been worded with better vocab, but it was still a great read... is this from a real life expeince?

    anyways keep it up brothren'

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    Re: Battlefield Ballad

    thanx RP and its not personal experience but i got fam over in Iraq and just got me thinking bout them in this.

    anyways upping ^

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    Re: Battlefield Ballad

    up this shit

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