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Big_Terror_8:13
DEADPROOF
10 lines due in 2 hours and no gay votes
For years there's been surprise horses in this stable
Just 6 wins in, I'm the realest nigga on this label
i wreck no jest thats just the truth
show dread.... to deadproof..and got left with headstew...he bled red like mensrual
hence my next two.
lines...at times i tire..of settin minds on fire....left him on the pyre
said hes dead proof...guess that makes him just a liar..
conspire...weave webs like a spider...but it'll come out right when i ignite it with my lighter
no survivors
like titanic....deeper than atlantis...on your weak brain i prey....got you prayin like a mantis
i rap this ...and your synapsis
fuckin collapses
This dude terror doesn't want any of my rhymes
So I'll act like a vet and kill this cat with 10 lines
8:13 mist be the time of day when you were born
Also the time when me and his mom was makin porn
I can beat this kid like it was 1-2 punch
Put up a bar and hav this kid back lookin hunched
I'm the king of this jungle so when I say this I'll be lion..
....this kid good
And his raps actually sound like he tryin.
Big terror don't like rappin I can tell in his old verse
Why u got time in your name? Oh yeah he's cursed
g/L
For years there's been surprise horses in this stable
Just 6 wins in, I'm the realest nigga on this label
Big Terror
i wreck no jest thats just the truth
show dread.... to deadproof..and got left with headstew...he bled red like mensrual
hence my next two.
Ehh
lines...at times i tire..of settin minds on fire....left him on the pyre
said hes dead proof...guess that makes him just a liar..
Nah
conspire...weave webs like a spider...but it'll come out right when i ignite it with my lighter
Blah
no survivors
like titanic....deeper than atlantis...on your weak brain i prey....got you prayin like a mantis
Weak
i rap this ...and your synapsis
fuckin collapses
Blah
DeadProof
This dude terror doesn't want any of my rhymes
So I'll act like a vet and kill this cat with 10 lines
No.
8:13 mist be the time of day when you were born
Also the time when me and his mom was makin porn
Def. No
I can beat this kid like it was 1-2 punch
Put up a bar and hav this kid back lookin hunched
Blah
I'm the king of this jungle so when I say this I'll be lion..
....this kid good
And his raps actually sound like he tryin.
Shit & played to death, but well worded.
Big terror don't like rappin I can tell in his old verse
Why u got time in your name? Oh yeah he's cursed
Shit
Terrible battle, I give it to DP, coz he worded a punch ok
Plottin your demise.
somebody else vote on this please and add some intelligence to the fuckin polls
Proof:
This dude terror doesn't want any of my rhymes
So I'll act like a vet and kill this cat with 10 lines
^ meh, didn't really see it as an opener, not much of a hit
8:13 mist be the time of day when you were born
Also the time when me and his mom was makin porn
^ straight, but could've used a tad bit more creativity.
I can beat this kid like it was 1-2 punch
Put up a bar and hav this kid back lookin hunched
^ meh, where's the personals and punches?
I'm the king of this jungle so when I say this I'll be lion..
....this kid good
And his raps actually sound like he tryin.
^ lol okay i fell for that, good shit man.
Big terror don't like rappin I can tell in his old verse
Why u got time in your name? Oh yeah he's cursed
^ uhhh....okay
BigTerror:
i wreck no jest thats just the truth
show dread.... to deadproof..and got left with headstew...he bled red like mensrual
hence my next two.
^ lines about bleeding like or as a menstrual are played to hell
lines...at times i tire..of settin minds on fire....left him on the pyre
said hes dead proof...guess that makes him just a liar..
^ meh....i don't really feel it...\
conspire...weave webs like a spider...but it'll come out right when i ignite it with my lighter
no survivors
like titanic....deeper than atlantis...on your weak brain i prey....got you prayin like a mantis
^ i don't feel your shit at all kid.
i rap this ...and your synapsis
fuckin collapses
^ meh....
I'm going to give this to DeadProof.....but this was a very weak battle, there were no punches or personals, but the more attempts at hitting goes to DP
Vote = DeadProof
Upupupupup
For years there's been surprise horses in this stable
Just 6 wins in, I'm the realest nigga on this label
Up.. I'd like some feed niggas.. I'm votin on all yalls
For years there's been surprise horses in this stable
Just 6 wins in, I'm the realest nigga on this label
I agree with him, terrible battle.. Terror just kept spittin multies and played shit, Deadproof could barely throw a punch. Proof got this for actually trying to diss opponent more consistently.Originally Posted by TopDolla
V/ Dp
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both came real weak to me......terr u need to fix ya wording and structure ya verse is everywhere u also need to thrwo better punches nothing u said was hitting everything was jus weak to me...dead ya verse was weak too u didn't have nothing that caught my attention ya wording and structure was better but u could've drop at least a couple punches and personals...but no hate/v dead for better wording and structre
The words I write are oxygen to greatness.
You guys don't get the vet and cat wordplay :l (use this as an up)
For years there's been surprise horses in this stable
Just 6 wins in, I'm the realest nigga on this label
I'm the king of this jungle so when I say this I'll be lion..
....this kid good
And his raps actually sound like he tryin.
vs
nothing...
813 didn't even direct a punch... & DP need's alot of work.. but he GmV for one below average punch.. nice attempt at the wp tho.
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