10 lines
No Bullshit
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Bring..
Sänity
BrotherMantis
10 lines
No Bullshit
Due in an hour
Bring..
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Sanity this is insane ...leave you wit' a bent frame...
I'll make your head and neck exit like highlander end game...
where u get a name like sanity..you better leave the psych 'lone...
Cause i'll call you collect in proximity and put one through yo' iphone...
You git it son? you'll need a pep talk after this one...
I'll lay down the long long arm of the law on you like John Grisham...
So sanity watch all that wack shit you try to hand me...
Cause I squeeze and leave the kid in the meadow like bambi...
end game.. the blades are forcing your head and necks exodus...
This fruit standing on the side of the road would peplex mexicans...
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Why am I battling you? We know your insanely wack
but I guess science does prove that opposites attract
after one of your battles I was full, however
I will give you credit though...
...your verses are quite the filler
If I throw punches with no force you'd give in
you'd get knocked out with Jabs like forrest griffen
In this game there's a bridge to cross before you're sick
so I hope you come to that bridge...
...and jump off With your leg tied to a brick
beat me? you have a better chance finding the lost city of atlantis
so when the votes come in you better be praying mantis
...meh...
up^^^^
wow yo brother mantis lets battle
up...need actual votes, not free post.
Really??? Votes Please
^dis nigga right here...LOL!Originally Posted by tru statz
In this game there's a bridge to cross before you're sick
so I hope you come to that bridge...
...and jump off With your leg tied to a brick
beat me? you have a better chance finding the lost city of atlantis
so when the votes come in you better be praying mantis
vs
funny closer
mantis you got the structure and flow, but no creative bars exept for the closer, which if worded differently, could have hit harder. No set up for it. Sanity took this iwt better word and name play and execution IMO...
v/ Sanity
rtf: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...436/index.html
and
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...193/index.html
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You git it son? you'll need a pep talk after this one...
I'll lay down the long long arm of the law on you like John Grisham...
vs
Why am I battling you? We know your insanely wack
but I guess science does prove that opposites attract
beat me? you have a better chance finding the lost city of atlantis
so when the votes come in you better be praying mantis
Nice Opener & Closer Sanity, Pretty Creative On That 1st Hit..That Was Nameplay Off You & A Hit To Your Opponent..Nice Touch, Those Bars Were By Far The Best Overall In This Battle - For Both Of You - However Sanity Came Out Hitting Pretty Smoothly And Ended This With A Cool Hit As Well..Mantis Had Some Pretty Solid Bars As Well But Majority Of 'em Lacked And Made His Verse Fall To His Opponent..Good Battle Though To Both Of You, Not Bad At All Though
v/ Sanity
RTF On My Battle..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...627/index.html RTF
brother u got the basic idea of punchlines dwn u just gotta b more creative the iphone line coulda been nice but it just didnt make sense 2 me sanitys opener was nice and the tied 2 a brick bar coulda been nice with better wording but overall san verse was a lil bit better than bm v/san
to the top!
after one of your battles I was full, however
I will give you credit though...
...your verses are quite the filler
beat me? you have a better chance finding the lost city of atlantis
so when the votes come in you better be praying mantis
vs
nothin....
very weak i didnt really see nothin that made me go "ooh" but from the look of the verses san ur's was betta
v/sanity
RTF!!!!!!!
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