brothermantis vs MaRVJ

[MaRVJ]

12 lines
due 2nite
only explained votes no hatin shit
if u dont understand shit dont vote

[MC Punchasizeyerface]

check

[MaRVJ]

check..

[MC Punchasizeyerface]

aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE? you couldn't startle Americas top model...
you couldn't spit a hot verse if Siracha had cock in the bottle...
What you really need to do is contemplate your chances for survival-
only way you'll walk out of here is if i put hands on you like a tent revival..
And hellejiuia! Trust that won't nothin' be marv, about j after this, fuck that..
This walt disney studio rapper couldn't make doe with Bambi's nut sack...
You don't want the hand to hand.. this dude couldn't bang sluts in afganistan..
couldn't get ya dick wet wit bitches tit clamped tightly in a mamogragh...
And I hope you went for the battle record bitch.. and the botched vb code..
I'll smack the shit out of this little bitch litterally.. and hit the komode...
you could spread gun talk and gangster terms on that cupcake flow and it'll be sweet..
If you were a tiger i couldn't coax quotes from your pussy mouth with raw wildabeast meat..

[MaRVJ]

foolish n fake dude is a snake,he'll even cross his family.
but its cleary after the battle wit him he lose his Sänity
can it be? he's know as a nasty nigga lips smother'd in dem blisters.
doo chaser...if a bitch need her ass ate brother will a-sister.
you all fucked up got trouble flowin ya bars an controlin ya broads.
his girl aint wanna go 2 his crib she said give me space im goin 2 mar's.
why go at marvj son when left & right niggaz is beatin you??.
you 0-30 bum only BMW i ever my life saw was the vehicle.
i told u leave that shit alone dem drugz make u act'd out fool.
everyone know's bmantis uses meth and he blacout 2.
ya ryhmes dont get redman..kill yaself stick knife in ya cheek.
but u winnin this battle's impposible like bitin ya teeth.

dont get nothin dont

[The Incredible Hulk]

aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE? you couldn't startle Americas top model...
you couldn't spit a hot verse if Siracha had cock in the bottle...
6/10
What you really need to do is contemplate your chances for survival-
only way you'll walk out of here is if i put hands on you like a tent revival..
6/10
And hellejiuia! Trust that won't nothin' be marv, about j after this, fuck that..
This walt disney studio rapper couldn't make doe with Bambi's nut sack...
7/10
You don't want the hand to hand.. this dude couldn't bang sluts in afganistan..
couldn't get ya dick wet wit bitches tit clamped tightly in a mamogragh...
6/10
And I hope you went for the battle record bitch.. and the botched vb code..
I'll smack the shit out of this little bitch litterally.. and hit the komode...
6/10
you could spread gun talk and gangster terms on that cupcake flow and it'll be sweet..
If you were a tiger i couldn't coax quotes from your pussy mouth with raw wildabeast meat..
6/10

overall=31/50


foolish n fake dude is a snake,he'll even cross his family.
but its cleary after the battle wit him he lose his Sänity
6/10
can it be? he's know as a nasty nigga lips smother'd in dem blisters.
doo chaser...if a bitch need her ass ate brother will a-sister.
6/10
you all fucked up got trouble flowin ya bars an controlin ya broads.
his girl aint wanna go 2 his crib she said give me space im goin 2 mar's.
6/10
why go at marvj son when left & right niggaz is beatin you??.
you 0-30 bum only BMW i ever my life saw was the vehicle.
6/10
i told u leave that shit alone dem drugz make u act'd out fool.
everyone know's bmantis uses meth and he blacout 2.
6/10
ya ryhmes dont get redman..kill yaself stick knife in ya cheek.
but u winnin this battle's impposible like bitin ya teeth.
7/10

overall=31/50


MY VOTE=DRAW....

not much help i know,but thats how i see each verse,and i aint gonna go back and give someone an extra mark just to call a winner,its how i see it...peace

[The Incredible Hulk]

Sorry,its 37/60 each* i missed off the last bars..lol

[MC Punchasizeyerface]

aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE? you couldn't startle Americas top model...
you couldn't spit a hot verse if Siracha had cock in the bottle...
6/10
What you really need to do is contemplate your chances for survival-
only way you'll walk out of here is if i put hands on you like a tent revival..
6/10
And hellejiuia! Trust that won't nothin' be marv, about j after this, fuck that..
This walt disney studio rapper couldn't make doe with Bambi's nut sack...
7/10
You don't want the hand to hand.. this dude couldn't bang sluts in afganistan..
couldn't get ya dick wet wit bitches tit clamped tightly in a mamogragh...
6/10
And I hope you went for the battle record bitch.. and the botched vb code..
I'll smack the shit out of this little bitch litterally.. and hit the komode...
6/10
you could spread gun talk and gangster terms on that cupcake flow and it'll be sweet..
If you were a tiger i couldn't coax quotes from your pussy mouth with raw wildabeast meat..
6/10

overall=31/50


foolish n fake dude is a snake,he'll even cross his family.
but its cleary after the battle wit him he lose his Sänity
6/10
can it be? he's know as a nasty nigga lips smother'd in dem blisters.
doo chaser...if a bitch need her ass ate brother will a-sister.
6/10
you all fucked up got trouble flowin ya bars an controlin ya broads.
his girl aint wanna go 2 his crib she said give me space im goin 2 mar's.
6/10
why go at marvj son when left & right niggaz is beatin you??.
you 0-30 bum only BMW i ever my life saw was the vehicle.
6/10
i told u leave that shit alone dem drugz make u act'd out fool.
everyone know's bmantis uses meth and he blacout 2.
6/10
ya ryhmes dont get redman..kill yaself stick knife in ya cheek.
but u winnin this battle's impposible like bitin ya teeth.
7/10

overall=31/50


MY VOTE=DRAW....

not much help i know,but thats how i see each verse,and i aint gonna go back and give someone an extra mark just to call a winner,its how i see it...peace

Fair enough, i guess, but why even post. you didn't even give any feedback you dumb ass.. tis' a freepost i see here marv.. what do you think? I say we chop that n*gger up and put him under the mattress like drug money..lol

[The Incredible Hulk]

Dumb fuck? because before i started voting i didnt know it was going to be a draw,you fucking idiot...freepost? how can a vote be a freepost?

if you want it set it up....what feedback do you want?ok

hit harder with your punches,use more multies,connect your whole bar,dont just go from one line to the next just to rhyme....

...

[MaRVJ]

uppppppp

[MC Punchasizeyerface]

It's no big deal C0MpL3XsHUN. But really it is a freepost. What did you acomplish with it? calling it a draw is not voting. it's indecisiveness. In the future you should really just say fuck it and not post if you come to that conclusion. it just seems like a waist of time. nobody wants to read your opinion on a battle if it doesn't go on way or another, especially if you don't even explain, just use those stupid numbers, but hey to earch his own. That just makes it that much less tolerable///so maybe thats what was supposed to happen with this. you've learned a lesson about idiocy and...no you won't be such a fucking drooling down syndrome, missing chromosome,fuckface tard J/k (I mean that the three lines represent the point when i stopped saying what i really meant to say... elevate.)

Up^^^^

[The Incredible Hulk]

Me elevate? dude.... i'd murder you in a battle...if you want me to go one way or the other i'll go with MarvJ,if you really want me to?

[KnowP]

What you really need to do is contemplate your chances for survival-
only way you'll walk out of here is if i put hands on you like a tent revival..
You don't want the hand to hand.. this dude couldn't bang sluts in afganistan..
couldn't get ya dick wet wit bitches tit clamped tightly in a mamogragh...

VS

foolish n fake dude is a snake,he'll even cross his family.
but its cleary after the battle wit him he lose his Sänity
why go at marvj son when left & right niggaz is beatin you??.
you 0-30 bum only BMW i ever my life saw was the vehicle.
you all fucked up got trouble flowin ya bars an controlin ya broads.
his girl aint wanna go 2 his crib she said give me space im goin 2 mar's.

BM had was flowing but some bars were a bit of a stretch like the opener and closer. Re-wording could have helped the punch strike harder. The afgan bar was nicely executed to me. Marv had the better verse overall. More punch than filler. A bit more creative and the closer came off better than BM. Good personal and BMW bar was a great concept but wording was lacking...

RTF ME VS SHADOWFRONT

v/ Marv

[Writtenz Allah.]

And hellejiuia! Trust that won't nothin' be marv, about j after this, fuck that..
This walt disney studio rapper couldn't make doe with Bambi's nut sack...
What you really need to do is contemplate your chances for survival-
only way you'll walk out of here is if i put hands on you like a tent revival..

vs

foolish n fake dude is a snake,he'll even cross his family.
but its cleary after the battle wit him he lose his Sänity
you all fucked up got trouble flowin ya bars an controlin ya broads.
his girl aint wanna go 2 his crib she said give me space im goin 2 mar's.

This battle was meh... These the bars that caught my attention. Marv had wp flow and a personal. Bmantis had nice mutlities and decent punches. Im gonna say Marv edged this out though.

Punches= Both
Personals= Marv
Wp= Marv
Np= N/A
Multies=BMantis
Flow= Marv

[MC Punchasizeyerface]

Me elevate? dude.... i'd murder you in a battle...if you want me to go one way or the other i'll go with MarvJ,if you really want me to?

Dude, I didn't make any battle cries to you...if you wanna go, set it... Really i just want you to SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't post in this thread again. If you wanna battle whatever. I'd let you vote again since you did such a great job last time but i have this thing about people with sand in thier vagina voting out of spite.



UP^^^^