aite u know what it is 10 lines...due today...or tomorrow...
aite u know what it is 10 lines...due today...or tomorrow...
chcking in good luck
i be back with a verse in like 2 hr or so
here's my check...yea let's make it good...
Better than me in text? this bitch is so wrong
Girls take less in?/lesson? they'd rather be morons
I got u in awe bring karnage...stick these cold bars where his heart is
Now i'd threaten to trash rex/wrecks but from ur name and rhymes...ur already garbage!
He's reading this hoping this rhyming is finished, thinkin he might be the winner
So much of his writtens related sickness...when he's writing prescriptions
Being rusty's not an excuse....lyrics? u got the sloppiest dude.
Got chicks so quick to commit...he proposed and they wanna tie the knot...to his noose!
Battlin me? u'll regret this..whore...beat u till ur neck is sore!
u write "Charmin"?...yea he gotta clean asses for ppl to say Less is more!
oh I thought, he dropped too, I cant feed properly till Rex drops....
legit though. maybe should of came a little harder, try not too stretch barz, I wonder what Rex is gonna come at chu wit... nice personals Swayde.
SicKMinDz
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_KILLA DIMEZ WITH KILLA RHYMEZ_
ok this is my 2ed quick verse since i got 3 battles to attend to but here it is
i can just tell,
He's rather weak an cant compete i'll crack his cheek with rapid Beast
each pass week watch his rank decrease untill hes layin flat deceased
his flow on the 'Freeway' falling fast asleep
i handle beef like cassidy as i casually turn wack emcees to Casualtie on battle Sceens
i'll ridicule this un-original indivisual
an then grip the tool and rip this dude for front'in like hes lyrical
fourth bar an ya Hoping Passed, i'll chock this fag then have'em roped and bag
ya bars Joke's is sad, didnt go full force??
Shhit only way u "cutin back" is Body-Slamin heads on Broken Glass
shit you already accepted the battle so its to late to Take it Back
if i was husstle ya verse,
i'll get no sell's cuz urs smells like rooten food in paper bags... Biatch!!!
alright this was a pretty average battle overall... i think Swayde came way too simple for the most part and started off too slow in his verse... it sounded like it was all over the place for the first three bars, and none of his punches were that creative. he was using wordplay that wasn't very original and just didn't hit hard enough on a personal level... i did like his fourth bar and thought that was the best in his verse, but still don't think it was good enough to win this battle. rexless came very simple as well, and didn't throw too many punches, but had a better flow and a good rhyme scheme going.. one piece of advise i can give to both rappers is to try and not use quotations so much in their verses, unless they are using a real quote that they took from somewhere... anyways nothing really stood out in either verse, but i think rexless came a lot more consistent...
vote: rexless
please rtf on my battle with Illfallible
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Being rusty's not an excuse....lyrics? u got the sloppiest dude.
Got chicks so quick to commit...he proposed and they wanna tie the knot...to his noose!
vs
i'll ridicule this un-original indivisual
an then grip the tool and rip this dude for front'in like hes lyrical
fourth bar an ya Hoping Passed, i'll chock this fag then have'em roped and bag
ya bars Joke's is sad, didnt go full force??
Shhit only way u "cutin back" is Body-Slamin heads on Broken Glass
shit you already accepted the battle so its to late to Take it Back
if i was husstle ya verse,
i'll get no sell's cuz urs smells like rooten food in paper bags...
rex ya flow an multis were good in this...swayde u had 1 nice line thats all
v/rex
upp for more votes plez
bump this
Being rusty's not an excuse....lyrics? u got the sloppiest dude.
Got chicks so quick to commit...he proposed and they wanna tie the knot...to his noose!
vs
i'll ridicule this un-original indivisual
an then grip the tool and rip this dude for front'in like hes lyrical
fourth bar an ya Hoping Passed, i'll chock this fag then have'em roped and bag
ya bars Joke's is sad, didnt go full force??
Shhit only way u "cutin back" is Body-Slamin heads on Broken Glass
vote rex
im going with swayde on this one the only line i liked in the entire battle came from him so he gets my vote
these lines took the battle
Being rusty's not an excuse....lyrics? u got the sloppiest dude.
Got chicks so quick to commit...he proposed and they wanna tie the knot...to his noose!
Battlin me? u'll regret this..whore...beat u till ur neck is sore!
u write "Charmin"?...yea he gotta clean asses for ppl to say Less is more!
vote=swayde
upp'in for more votes
Better than me in text? this bitch is so wrong
Girls take less in?/lesson? they'd rather be morons
1/3
I got u in awe bring karnage...stick these cold bars where his heart is
Now i'd threaten to trash rex/wrecks but from ur name and rhymes...ur already garbage!
2/3
He's reading this hoping this rhyming is finished, thinkin he might be the winner
So much of his writtens related sickness...when he's writing prescriptions
1/3
Being rusty's not an excuse....lyrics? u got the sloppiest dude.
Got chicks so quick to commit...he proposed and they wanna tie the knot...to his noose!
2/3
Battlin me? u'll regret this..whore...beat u till ur neck is sore!
u write "Charmin"?...yea he gotta clean asses for ppl to say Less is more!
1/3
-7/15
i can just tell,
He's rather weak an cant compete i'll crack his cheek with rapid Beast
each pass week watch his rank decrease untill hes layin flat deceased
1/3
his flow on the 'Freeway' falling fast asleep
i handle beef like cassidy as i casually turn wack emcees to Casualtie on battle Sceens
2/3
i'll ridicule this un-original indivisual
an then grip the tool and rip this dude for front'in like hes lyrical
1/3
fourth bar an ya Hoping Passed, i'll chock this fag then have'em roped and bag
ya bars Joke's is sad, didnt go full force??
Shhit only way u "cutin back" is Body-Slamin heads on Broken Glass
2/3
shit you already accepted the battle so its to late to Take it Back
if i was husstle ya verse,
i'll get no sell's cuz urs smells like rooten food in paper bags... Biatch!!!
1/3
-7/15
V/ rexless with best bar,it was clsoe though
fourth bar an ya Hoping Passed, i'll chock this fag then have'em roped and bag
ya bars Joke's is sad, didnt go full force??
Shhit only way u "cutin back" is Body-Slamin heads on Broken Glass
2/3
He's rather weak an cant compete i'll crack his cheek with rapid Beast
each pass week watch his rank decrease untill hes layin flat deceased
his flow on the 'Freeway' falling fast asleep
i handle beef like cassidy as i casually turn wack emcees to Casualtie on battle Sceens
i'll ridicule this un-original indivisual
an then grip the tool and rip this dude for front'in like hes lyrical
vs
nada really
weak battle here but i feel rex got the best of swayd
vote rex
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