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[Scripter]

dim Open as a begining in anything that starts with time
dim Open as to anything understand all from others eyes
dim Open as suggestion it dont always have to be mines
dim Open as hands, my arms, my charms, my life shines


#IF I didnt care I wouldnt be $mines
Then $Id have no hope or no looks in my rhymes
#Say Hi my name is scripter im a rhyme designer of all kinds
#Else $Id have no point in living my life
$Im the hottest MC Scripter this aint no lie
#Loop #Until I get a good hook just gotta find $mines
#Or #Do $I #While $I complete my rhymes
#End If I got a record label cant stop till its $mines

Class Average
{
but public:
     // I speak
 Average(int My Weight, int How Im Seen) construct me 
 ~Average(){}  //Build me up how you see
// Overloaded how you Class me the creed inside bleeds
void all thoughts you had to describe me please 
void all creeds that thought they could fit inside me

but Private:
int My Weight now you seen
int How Im Seen now you keep
} // My interests inside deemed

Uploading links........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...121/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...212/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...300/index.html

[djrubiks]

lol syntax error. Looks like VB which I feel is a waste of time.

Other than that I don't know how I feel about it, neat, original, structure although its a bit hard to follow and I feel anyone who doesn't have to deal with coding on a regular basis might have less appreciation for it. Cool concept though, I actually like this idea and think if you worked it out in a different way it could be pretty neat. As far as what you're actually saying I'm not to keen on. Its just average.

[Scripter]

still working on it thanks thats why it say uploading links i read the rules ty

[LedgenZ]

Yeah, I’ll have to wait until you sort through the syntax, because I’m having a hard time deciphering between your words and the PC jargon. It seems like an original idea, but at this point “seems” is the only word I can use to describe this piece. So I’ll try to check back with you a little later. Cool? Cool!

[Scripter]

I guess i could try to explain it:
Visual Basic where most programmers would start
dim stands for dimention pretty basic, also where you start in code
must do this before you can use your varitables you may have learned about this in normal math class in school
int stand for integer or integral which is always a number (hint* as in everyone has a number we are all unique)
anything you see with a # before it is actual Command but should be read as part of the poem
same with anything with $ before it which stands for a string type variables which carrys only keyboards strokes, text ect
What is a varitable ?
A varitable is a place in memory where data can be stored
VB Example
dim intSteelersScore as integer
must dim it first
then use it
intSteelersScore = 6 3
textbox = intSteelersScore
This will diplay the score in a textbox
Oh Loop is just what it says its a command that makes things happen over and over till it equals true
C++
Class like vb you delcare the variable
Public is to declare that all can see it through all data created
anything with // is just a comment in C++ ment only to help programs understand there code(does not run on the program)
so with the comments understood
we understand that im building something
In the next part
Im using a shape command which will decide my height and width(decides my shape)

 Average(int My Weight, int How Im Seen) construct me 
 ~Average(){}  //Build me up how you see

Overloaded things just allows more access by doubling it with what they call pointer or references
void means that it has no value
but I used it in metaphore for resetting starting over

// Overloaded how you Class me the creed inside bleeds
void all thoughts you had to describe me please 
void all creeds that thought they could fit inside me

I think that pretty well explains it lol enjoy