Black Hornet VS MoHolix

[Black Hornet]

12 lines...
check in now..post in 24 hours (no later) after check
no editing your verse..
dont forget the 2 links...
anything goes..say whatever..

[MoMaui]

sweet check in

[Black Hornet]

Check...

links
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=371778
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=369848

[MoMaui]

my drop going to be late by bout 2hrs going out

[MoMaui]

Got Shelby's permission to recomission you green no longer
Black Beauties tell you hit the gym get your punches stronger
Rhymes not complesx or colloquial thats not how a Britt Reid
Aint trying to provoke ya'll, but you not wanted like shit feed
Alone ranger...stranger danger your sidekicks don' robbed Shush
Democratic process...nah fags just don't get love from bush
Scared of you...ha, only ever scared of Sin('Tense)
last date no showed, prom night at the Holiday Inn
Scared to fight...just stick it to me, say fuck doubt
after this RB and the Maple Leafs want you to get the puck out
I can come back from a loss and just called ya my re-rout
bitches refusing head leave that blue balled in ya mout(h)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...59/index2.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...631/index.html

[MoMaui]

Guess i got a no show, even though it late just drop black.

[Black Hornet]

We could go head to head but my headbutt give ya brain a shock,
my loco-motives'll steam roll ya 'think tank' to break ya train of thought,
Ya 'love tap'(1) me cus ya punch-n-poetry break-up with no hard feelings,
nobody knows Alca-Holix...like he hid-out at an Anonymous Meeting,
my 25 wins medal batter ya chest an I'll use it to tear this jerk apart
you'll never earna single medal, but you'll leave with a purple heart,
Mo came in his Christmas best...he was so happy he couldn't wait-
to give me a free win before the 25th, like today wasn't Holisday
i'll scalp your punchlines, and smoke peace pipes on the weekends-
cus when Huron my land I burn Holi like Last of the Mo-heathans.(mohicans)
your not wild just cus your raised by a bitch, and a pack of mutts,
Im Sheer Khan in Mo-wglis village, Akela hound for actin up.


1) Poem title

[MoMaui]

sweet uppin

[Jæk]

Ya 'love tap'(1) me cus ya punch-n-poetry break-up with no hard feelings,
nobody knows Alca-Holix...like he hid-out at an Anonymous Meeting,
my 25 wins medal batter ya chest an I'll use it to tear this jerk apart
you'll never earna single medal, but you'll leave with a purple heart,
these were so so lines/ could be worded better^^
Mo came in his Christmas best...he was so happy he couldn't wait-
to give me a free win before the 25th, like today wasn't Holisday
this line was dope 5/5 personal word play hti ard and it was funny^^

MO you had good concepts and some ideas that were right but you didnt land the punch and som eof your lines were just to light wether clever or not still light keep it up tho bruh good stuff black that 5/5 line was dope son
no hate
my Vote-Black

[Black Hornet]

uppin...leave links.

[H.T.]

Scared to fight...just stick it to me, say fuck doubt
after this RB and the Maple Leafs want you to get the puck out
-this was your best attempt at a punch homie with the wordplay gotta be more creative tho that's a lil similar bro keep it up you'll get it


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my 25 wins medal batter ya chest an I'll use it to tear this jerk apart
you'll never earna single medal, but you'll leave with a purple heart,
'll scalp your punchlines, and smoke peace pipes on the weekends-
cus when Huron my land I burn Holi like Last of the Mo-heathans
-creative concept coulda hit a lil better homie


overall vote- black he came with the harder verse more punches and quotes lotb also
although i have seen better from him he got this.mo try coming more direct homie peep other peoples battles to see what they are doing stay up

[MoMaui]

sweet cheers HT uppin #2

[2121]

Scared to fight...just stick it to me, say fuck doubt
after this RB and the Maple Leafs want you to get the puck out
was alright

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Mo came in his Christmas best...he was so happy he couldn't wait-
to give me a free win before the 25th, like today wasn't Holisday

^ that was tight

vote black came alot harder with better punches.
keep it up tho mo

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=7403477

[fo11]

Got Shelby's permission to recomission you green no longer
Black Beauties tell you hit the gym get your punches stronger
Rhymes not complesx or colloquial thats not how a Britt Reid
Aint trying to provoke ya'll, but you not wanted like shit feed


Vs

We could go head to head but my headbutt give ya brain a shock,
my loco-motives'll steam roll ya 'think tank' to break ya train of thought,
Ya 'love tap'(1) me cus ya punch-n-poetry break-up with no hard feelings,
nobody knows Alca-Holix...like he hid-out at an Anonymous Meeting,



V/BH
BH's punches were better and MH's punches were good Tight battle though.
No hate

[MoMaui]

sweet uppin #3 more votes