Seraphym vs Mr. DJ

[Mr. DJ]

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[Mr. DJ]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=416163
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...937/index.html


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[Seraphym]

Check...

BTW, before I do another battle I need votes on my pending battles. Shit keeps getting ignored and its dumb. I'm not wasting my time dropping a verse just so it gets ignored. Do ur part fellow battlers...

I'll drop my verse tonight or tomorrow

[Seraphym]

Cashiers check...lol. I'm buggin'

[Seraphym]

Dude ordered a request for destruction as if 'Jerusalem' wanted to replay 'Nero'/
Lyrical castration make his weak game sterile. Wanna play? Delete ya quality points now he's DJ Zero/
Ur music sucks and u forced me to put mute onto ur decibels diabolically turn this fruit into a vegetable/
The way I make a crowd move is esoterical, while this dude catches boos from his parents, too!/
I come in swinging Navajo tomohawks to DJ's torso while shooting Iroquois arrows thru it/
Fe,fi,fo,fum a Giant like NY or Chicago Bear who's ruthless, crush his bones to drink the marrow fluid/
Making movies of murder, massacre Mr. misfit, my mandibles mash this meek mammal/
r.eigning rockets, red radiation, ripping retinas, release a rampant raging Rex that's tyRanical/
Disillusioned dumb dufus desiring desirable destines doomed, Death's dominating devices/
Justified judgment-day , jailed juvenile just jump, jousting javelins jutted jamming him lifeless/

[Seraphym]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...251/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...112/index.html

[Mr. DJ]

You Cant Hide Behind Your Career Cuz You'll Fall With It & Get Yourself Killed
Cuz Its Guys Like You That Obama's Working To Get Support For Health Still
& You Sir Should Get A Salary For Getting Worked Over Time, & Time Again
New Link Rule Should Prove Your Rhymes Ended
...............................With A Link To Your Recycle Bin
DJ Lives The Fabolous Life, You Only Dream Of Having Your Own Like I Have
But I'll Just Cut Your Dream Short.....When You Get Thrown In The Bag
Its The Fact That Your Straight Garbage Kid & You Make Us All Snore, See
So I Dont Have To Explain How Much You Suck, Your Verses Already Do It For Me
I Intrigue My Fans, My Knowledge Goes Beyond Yours...You Just Lack Wit
I Give My Fans Food For Thought Cuz They Precious
...........................& You Wish You Was The Fat Bitch

[soulnmusic]

sera

alliteration was new too me, ddnt see it used like that before nice touch, but if u coulda made it more personal i think you woulda bodied this guy.

dj

nothing dude, u gotta throw punches.

make ur font bigger, remove the ............. dotn need it maybe ... but not like a hundred

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if i could vote lol, v/sera - punches and creativity

[Seraphym]

Thanks. The alliteration was tough cuz I was rushing to drop this. Up...

[The Nav Man™]

RTF please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...422/index.html

Seraphym
Dude ordered a request for destruction as if 'Jerusalem' wanted to replay 'Nero'/
Lyrical castration make his weak game sterile. Wanna play? Delete ya quality points now he's DJ Zero/
0/3 stretched much
Ur music sucks and u forced me to put mute onto ur decibels diabolically turn this fruit into a vegetable/
The way I make a crowd move is esoterical, while this dude catches boos from his parents, too!/
1/3
I come in swinging Navajo tomohawks to DJ's torso while shooting Iroquois arrows thru it/
Fe,fi,fo,fum a Giant like NY or Chicago Bear who's ruthless, crush his bones to drink the marrow fluid/
1/3 stretched
Making movies of murder, massacre Mr. misfit, my mandibles mash this meek mammal/
r.eigning rockets, red radiation, ripping retinas, release a rampant raging Rex that's tyRanical/
1/3 no
Disillusioned dumb dufus desiring desirable destines doomed, Death's dominating devices/
Justified judgment-day , jailed juvenile just jump, jousting javelins jutted jamming him lifeless/
1/3

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Mr. DJ
You Cant Hide Behind Your Career Cuz You'll Fall With It & Get Yourself Killed
Cuz Its Guys Like You That Obama's Working To Get Support For Health Still
1/3
& You Sir Should Get A Salary For Getting Worked Over Time, & Time Again
New Link Rule Should Prove Your Rhymes Ended
...............................With A Link To Your Recycle Bin
2/3 lol
DJ Lives The Fabolous Life, You Only Dream Of Having Your Own Like I Have
But I'll Just Cut Your Dream Short.....When You Get Thrown In The Bag
2/3 haha
Its The Fact That Your Straight Garbage Kid & You Make Us All Snore, See
So I Dont Have To Explain How Much You Suck, Your Verses Already Do It For Me
1/3 weak
I Intrigue My Fans, My Knowledge Goes Beyond Yours...You Just Lack Wit
I Give My Fans Food For Thought Cuz They Precious
...........................& You Wish You Was The Fat Bitch
2/3 lol

Seraphym-4/15..dude, you had pretty good concepts but all your shit is too long n stretched. Props on you rhyming n verse but needa work on structure n shit
Mr. DJ-8/15..pretty easy win man, nice verse
No hate. Stay Up

[Mr. DJ]

Yall Need To Poll Man..


Up

[YungDosia]

GOOD LINES FROM SERA...

HONESTLY DID NOT LIKE ANY LINES FAM, SORRY YOUR LINES WERE VERY STRETCHED AND PUNCHES DID NOT HIT AT ALL.


GOOD LINES FROM DJ...
I Intrigue My Fans, My Knowledge Goes Beyond Yours...You Just Lack Wit
I Give My Fans Food For Thought Cuz They Precious
...........................& You Wish You Was The Fat Bitch

HAHA FUNNY LINE, OK CLOSER.


OVERALL GOTTA SAY DJ TOOK THIS EASILY, HAD MORE PUNCHES EVEN THOUGH THEY DIDNT HIT HARD EITHER THEY WERE BETTER AND HAD MORE STING THEN SERA'S. ALSO DJ HAD THE ONLY QUOTABLE IN THE BATTLE TO ME. OK BATTLE YOU TWO.


VOTE-DJ

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

I Intrigue My Fans, My Knowledge Goes Beyond Yours...You Just Lack Wit
I Give My Fans Food For Thought Cuz They Precious
...........................& You Wish You Was The Fat Bitch


vs


nothin

dj had better punches sera it seems u ca be dope u just aint on dj's level yet

[Black Hornet]

well...this was pretty one sided. I thought DJ came with a lot harder overall shots, and more consitancy in terms of punches. Sera you had a couple decent attempts, but they didnt really connect as well as they could have. Props to both for coming their best but im gonna vote for DJ for harder verse.

v// DJ

[Mr. DJ]

*Picking My Nose*