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Young Fredo
Vulgar
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He Who Hesitates Is Lost... Hard Attack (GAMEOVER)
Nigga cums on RB fucking around like he actually got a dick
We know u love the vulgar gay experience, balls n penis u like to lick
Better at sex than anyone... now he just needs a male friend
My lyrics hit u in various places. mixing it like I got blades, u I blend
Dumb fuck even if the ground was ur target u’d still miss
Nigga I’m so “Mad” fuck u up “den” come at u quick it’s a blitz
Normally people live and learn for experience nigga u just living
Matter of fact scratch that, killed u, pray to “God”* lucky he was forgiving
I could see through this wack emcee even wid my eyes closed
Murdered. Give u 2 da noobs with the bacteria flow. Decomposed
*God of War (Champ match)
He Who Hesitates Is Lost... Hard Attack (GAMEOVER)
He Who Hesitates Is Lost... Hard Attack (GAMEOVER)
Your wack,
Kill yourself, should of gave him a rope & hung em high
They say the good die young…..we just want young to die
But see I’m better in every category plus far from dead….
How do I break this to you?….fuck it, I’ll use your arm instead
Before you enter young's thread there should be a disclaimer
Fredo’s an open gay cuz even his avatar shows he’s a flamer
He’s another boring noob, most likely a classic virgin…
& couldn’t raise a few eyebrows…..if he was a plastic surgeon
I’ll put you 6 ft under, but the torture varies too…
Call me Lebron James cuz I’ll take you to the hole…..& bury you
I cant really say this was a close battle..
Young- Your verse had good structure and flowed okay, but the jokes that were attempted were childish and Really unfunny.. You threw them out half hashed too imo, like it mattered, but it didn't matter what you said or something. Work on the force behind your punches, and if you dont already.. repaeat them out loud to hear how they sound. Your attempts at personals would've been good, but the punches off the personals crashed cause the were really weak this battle.
Vulgar- That short bar style works well for you, tho, I Still cant believe i lost.. lucky for you i quick keyed cause i forgot about it lol.. sorry, had to get that off my chest.
Anyway yeah, that style helped you keep the punches simple, yet still fairly effective in this one. You also threw in some nameplay, all-be-it played you made it your own and delivered it well. That goes for the entire verse FTMP.
Best Bars:
Normally people live and learn for experience nigga u just living
Matter of fact scratch that, killed u, pray to “God”* lucky he was forgiving
^ a noteworthy attempt at a personal, yet in retrospect the bar as a whole lacks any sting,
v.s.
Kill yourself, should of gave him a rope & hung em high
They say the good die young…..we just want young to die
^played but effective..
He’s another boring noob, most likely a classic virgin…
& couldn’t raise a few eyebrows…..if he was a plastic surgeon
^this was funny, tho it coulda been set up a bit better maybe.
So yeah, I'ma have to v/ Vulgar in this one for the better overall
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damn vulgar this some hardhitting shit right here
Kill yourself, should of gave him a rope & hung em high
They say the good die young…..we just want young to die
But see I’m better in every category plus far from dead….
How do I break this to you?….fuck it, I’ll use your arm instead
FEDO THIS DIDN'T FLOW WELL PLUS HE BEAT YOU OUT IN THE PUNCHLINES ALSO
Nigga cums on RB fucking around like he actually got a dick
We know u love the vulgar gay experience, balls n penis u like to lick
Better at sex than anyone... now he just needs a male friend
VOTE=VULGAR
My lyrics hit u in various places. mixing it like I got blades, u I blend
damn vulgar this some hardhitting shit right here
Kill yourself, should of gave him a rope & hung em high
They say the good die young…..we just want young to die
But see I’m better in every category plus far from dead….
How do I break this to you?….fuck it, I’ll use your arm instead
FEDO THIS DIDN'T FLOW WELL PLUS HE BEAT YOU OUT IN THE PUNCHLINES ALSO
Nigga cums on RB fucking around like he actually got a dick
We know u love the vulgar gay experience, balls n penis u like to lick
Better at sex than anyone... now he just needs a male friend
VOTE=VULGAR
My lyrics hit u in various places. mixing it like I got blades, u I blend
Kill yourself, should of gave him a rope & hung em high
They say the good die young…..we just want young to die
But see I’m better in every category plus far from dead….
How do I break this to you?….fuck it, I’ll use your arm instead
vs
Nothing
Fredo Didnt Bring Much To The Table, His Attempts Were Short Thrown. Even The Attempt At Making A Personal Blow With His Champ Match With Gow. Nice Try, But Your Wording Ruined The Hit. Try Working On That. Your Rhyme Structure Just Doesnt Seem To Work Right Dude. Vulgar Easily Took This Based On His Opponents Weak Throws. Far One Sided And Far Easy IME. Vulgar Beasted Him.
v/ Vulgar
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Over all i felt both drops were good on many levels both yall did a good job..
Kill yourself, should of gave him a rope & hung em high
They say the good die young…..we just want young to die
Before you enter young's thread there should be a disclaimer
Fredo’s an open gay cuz even his avatar shows he’s a flamer
^^I felt these were Vulgars Best lines
Normally people live and learn for experience nigga u just living
Matter of fact scratch that, killed u, pray to “God”* lucky he was forgiving
and this was the only line i felt Young landed
Punches- Vulgar
Flow-Vulgar
Vote - Vulgar
poll your vote^
Kill yourself, should of gave him a rope & hung em high
They say the good die young…..we just want young to die
He’s another boring noob, most likely a classic virgin…
& couldn’t raise a few eyebrows…..if he was a plastic surgeon
vs.
nothing
Young you got an ok idea with the punches, just need to make them much less wordy, little more creative, and hella lot more smooth. keep elevating man
vote vulgar
please rtf
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...088/index.html
The Last Level
Kill yourself, should of gave him a rope & hung em high
They say the good die young…..we just want young to die
But see I’m better in every category plus far from dead….
How do I break this to you?….fuck it, I’ll use your arm instead
Before you enter young's thread there should be a disclaimer
Fredo’s an open gay cuz even his avatar shows he’s a flamer
I’ll put you 6 ft under, but the torture varies too…
Call me Lebron James cuz I’ll take you to the hole…..& bury you
^Your whole verse came hard (no homo) pretty much. There was one bar that I felt was played but other then that the rest of it was really hard hitting. Your best bar was the one with "the good die young" cause I definitely liked that.
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Normally people live and learn for experience nigga u just living
Matter of fact scratch that, killed u, pray to “God”* lucky he was forgiving
^That was your only good bar. The whole verse was decent but this was the hardest bar and still could've been worded better ya know?
v/ Vulgar
No doubt, his entire verse had better punches, everything, etc.
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