Heartbreak Road

[PhloPyro]

Funny how you broads just continue to creep
as if we some geeks, another niggas scent in the sheets
Gettin'em weak, now its time for bitches to flee(flea)
No pest on'em...Yall niggas different from me
No stress on'em...Cheatin's just in they gene's(jeans)
No sweats on'em...So stand for what you believe/
Protest on'em...Even though she keeps u high. Illest Reffa
Excuses comin up short. Realest Keebler
No matter how much you love pussy she still a cheater(Cheeta)
So to accept and still believe her, Is to egg on. Basket to fill up Easter.
Its best you let her go til she learns her lesson
Or let go mirror style. Thats for her own reflection
get the steppin Ms.Sorority. No Exceptions
Pussies the road to death we better w/ no direction
So if you find a good girl you should hold her tight
Cus girls hearts getting colder than a homeless night
Just cus she pretty, dress nice and she so polite
Dont mean she cant leave you w/ a Broken Life

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...57626&posted=1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...57628&posted=1

[PhloPyro]

No Feed?

[Prophet Margin]

lol no ones been feedin on the one i posted earlier either....nice flow love the message cuz its Sooo true

So to accept and still believe her, Is to egg on. Basket to fill up Easter.

get the steppin Ms.Sorority. No Exceptions

-Love these lines ^^ great rhyme and metaphor
its short but every line makes you think and overall its a dope piece.

[Prophet Margin]

also love the multiple meanings words with the parentheses

[PhloPyro]

Good Lookin For the Feed Back Man

[Flo-Rez]

cuzo i really dont like txt but u snapped on the last four lines.....
the whole thing is good but the last four is whats up i wld put that as my facebook status lol....

[PhloPyro]

Good Lookinn Mann lookin for More Feed Back

[PhloPyro]

feeed?

[PhloPyro]

none????????????????

[KnowP]

Dog, you gotta pretty nice flow my man. Vocab is a bit weak, but your structure is pretty solid. You got that Jay-Z swag the way you transition your bars and Im really feelin the way you used the word play. Pretty decent piece right here dog. Keep it up. And post on other cats OM's so they can know who you are and that way, you will get more feed back on your joints as well...Hit up my crews OM. Creational Damage!

[rhymebad]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...556/index.html

look this was nice and short really enjoyed this one but dang dude you got it in for girls and i loved this part right here for real

Its best you let her go til she learns her lesson
Or let go mirror style. Thats for her own reflection
get the steppin Ms.Sorority. No Exceptions
Pussies the road to death we better w/ no direction

[thatKidB]

thought this was cool. thought it would be like a depressing type ish. liked how you bring across your point in this. like what knowP said. you have like a swag or what not. flowed good to me. solid wordplay. overall it wasn't special, but not bad at all. good job