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    BloodCot Niggas

    http://rss.msnbc.msn.com/id/36134587/

    This is a Poetry, Its like Some Def Jam Poetry With Mos Def

    Excuse my language people

    In Some where in your sick little world
    What Would drive you to cause harm to this little girl
    Yall niggas make me what to be real sick and earl
    I m do what wayne did with this world
    i m Pick the world up and drop it onya fucking Head
    intill you scream for mercy or you slump and dead
    I hope death have a field day which yall
    Because yall niggas know this shit wrong
    Im prey and hope the girl mind not twisted
    Because she was done wrong by guys who wicked
    But if I knew who did it, best believe
    I would get the heat and check these freaks
    Im sorry yall Im just so angry at niggas
    Not black folks but niggas who clap triggas
    For bread plus all that other stupid shit
    The girl probably wondering why ya ll doing this
    This to any punk ass niggas that do the samething
    I wish in jersey they get it in and find you Bang bang
    With them thangs at they brain for the pain
    They did to this little girl what a shame
    Forever in her life she could feel the rain on her
    Of memories of them running a train on her
    I aint gone blame you jersery but hurry
    Get on ya job and help this girl she hurting
    Yall get the work quick..........united we stand

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    Re: BloodCot Niggas

    Wasn't feeling this, I think the subject matter is important but the way you approached the piece just came off as sophmorish....

    keep posting and elevating tho.

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