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Thread: 8 Bars of My Heart

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    §olja*Lyricist
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    8 Bars of My Heart

    My "8 bars of Heart" My "8 bars of Heart"
    I've been abu§ed and brui§ed in the heart/
    §eem like I was doomed a§ I crept out the wound from the §tart/
    When I was a baby I ate weed out the back §eat of my dad' § car/
    That incident left me with a painful and permenant mental §car/
    The world a§ I know it i§ full of pain and mental angui§h/
    I wi§h pain wa§ more like match fire, ea§y to extingui§h/
    referring to a match when its just lit


    When I wa§ younger walking down the §treet I got stuck up/
    Lightning fla§hed before my eye..........Thought I wa§ about to die/
    Nigga a§ked me for $2 and I wa§ gonna give it to him not gonna lie/
    Turned around and it wa§ my freind so I gue§§ I lucked up/

    I have grey hair§ at i§xteen cuz I'm real stre§§ed
    §till able so you could say that I'm real ble§§ed/

    Before a tear §hed'§ down my eye I think about other§ wor§t off and decide not to cry/
    I vi§ualize my§elf in §tarving ethoiopian'§ po§ition and notice how they barely §eem get by/
    Next time you go through pain just remember it could be wor§t/
    When going through pain ju§t realize that you're not the fir§t/

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    §olja*Lyricist
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    uppin
    Last edited by §olja*Lyricist; April 30th, 2003 at 05:51 PM

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    not bad...

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    nice

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    §olja*Lyricist
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    thnx

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    uppin 4 more response

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    I like how it got me to think. Life is pretty rough kid... I know what cha mean... I feel ya
    Peace Out!

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    Artikqlit
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    Nice imagery...Cud really imagine wut you were sayin...felt ya emotion...besides that everythin wuz tite also...nice drop, mayn.

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    the imagery was good....the emotion was felt, it was nice...it was predictable though, like i knew you were gonna end it on somethin optimistic by the middle of the 2nd stanza...it was good though, i can't front on it

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    §olja*Lyricist
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    thx for the response

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    SOMETIMES
    I WISH I COULD DIE, YOU TO CAN FILL THE PAIN IN MY LIFE
    THE PAIN OF A KNIFE IN THE BACK, THE WANTING FOR THE THINGS THAT I LACK. THE PAIN THAT I POUR INTO TRACKS.
    THE PAIN THAT MANY MEN PUT INTO SACS. ITS DRASTIC
    PAIN CHANGED ME INTO AN ADICT FOR AUTOMATICS
    AND THE MATHMATICS OF THE STREET.
    THUG + RED + BLUE = BEEF
    NIC + DIME + OUNCE = Gs
    KNOWLEDGE + UNITY + LOVE = PEACE
    I WANT REST TILL THE EQUATION IS COMPLETE
    STAY UP SOLJA, AFTER PAIN ALWAYS COMES RELIEF

    ONE
    JSTACKS

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    §olja*Lyricist
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    that was tite man

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    [*¤ĐîMęŘńФ* ]
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    Damnz,
    Luv`n this ... was quite raw eith ur emotions
    i could feel ur words very good!!
    Much props ...

    Really diggin ya style boo

    Pz

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    that was hot to def, i'm lovin it

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