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    You Don't Love Me Anymore Pt. 1

    You Don't Love Me Anymore Pt.1
    by: Novac

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    Yesterday you loved me.
    Today you don't.
    Except you do.


    Sometimes for hours

    I'd pluck off your fairy wings
    while you slept towards a porchlight;
    your northern star.

    With my fingertips I'd convince you
    to trust the dusty words
    and fine tuned pitch of my voice.

    And if

    I broke my wrist
    when I reached out
    to finger-trace the thought that counts,

    would you come back into focus?

    Promise?
    Promise.

    I promise I'd reverse retinal burns
    and spotted vision
    if it meant I could listen
    to your voice

    in soundwaves and count days
    that I missed it.

    Solemn in silence;

    only backwards,
    this time.


    Yesterday you loved me.
    Today you don't.

    Except this time,
    you really don't.

    You don't.
    Last edited by Novac; May 8th, 2010 at 01:18 AM
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    "Art is never finished, only abandoned."
    -Leonardo da Vinci

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    Re: You Don't Love Me Anymore Pt. 1

    Uppin' for feeds.
    "Art is never finished, only abandoned."
    -Leonardo da Vinci

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    Re: You Don't Love Me Anymore Pt. 1

    this was aite, nice emotion coo concept , diffrent, i really fealt thiss

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