2 is a crowd on ridicule cloud 999
upside down turn around walk on out
its the end of your life a flashing film
born still
born to kill
sunday morning pills
till boring men will pray medication
amen
we'll see who's sane then!
2 is a crowd on ridicule cloud 999
upside down turn around walk on out
its the end of your life a flashing film
born still
born to kill
sunday morning pills
till boring men will pray medication
amen
we'll see who's sane then!
Suicide pieces have lost that bit of bit because it a tad overly used. This wasn't bad. Just needs some touch ups here and there.... I felt like its missing something maybe more depth to your character. IDK, keep writing
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Scytsophrenia
On that next level.. but STILL fuckin' crazy.
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this was just the first thing i ever wrote using it....it wasnt even the name of our group then...that came later...
its how my mother tried to use the morning after pill on me too....not suicide.
and how my father was church goer....i treated him like a catholic preist...and he prayed i wouldnt be born...for his reputation
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