thanks dagel, lol.
thanks dagel, lol.
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Tommorow is a slave to yesterday.
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Tommorow is a slave to yesterday.
Short but sweet. Felt like you could've put a little more in it. Some lines were too short (though every line could've had more to it) I see what you were trying to do. And it was a cool idea. Worked for the most part. But if you're looking for the thumbs up of ALL readers. You'll have to write a little more lol. Cool concept. Cool read. Only have one complaint, and that's the length of the lines being too short. But other than then, cool stuff bro.
.....wtf?
Whether your a king or a street sweeper,
We all dance with the Grim Reaper.
thanks dagel, lol.
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