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    LLL Season 12 Champ Match 2. ALIEN vs 4. Arch.

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    Re: 2. ALIEN vs 4. Arch.

    My battle's this weekend... so i'm dropping thursday probably... 20+?

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    Re: 2. ALIEN vs 4. Arch.

    Coo my ninja... Fuck AnyMeansNess
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    Re: LLL Season 12 Champ Match 2. ALIEN vs 4. Arch.


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    Got merked ya first 2 GT battles with your own horrible lines...
    Then I spotted you bars, and you won decisively without over time
    Now chill, I ain't sayin I wrote all your lines guy, chill...
    You only used one.... and it was all they chose for your highlite reel
    That's nothin against u... but how could this faggot serve me...
    When the 50+ lines HE wrote weren't even camera worthy
    But back to this text shit, its clear that you should NEVER mod...
    The league w/out u is like the lights with ya girl in bed... MUCH better off
    Obviously ALIEN would champ this season verse this Arch fuck...
    Cuz no Man on earth wants to step foot in a league your in charge of
    I mean, you got the rules bendin more than Dosia's teeth...
    As a mod, your more crooked then.... well.... Dosia's teeth
    ANY coach would love me, I'm talkin' NBA or college..
    Got a bullet with your name on it, yeah my shot got plenty of Arch on it
    My only comp no-showed due to no motivation for this awful dude...
    Ironic isn't it? You "beat" Tettris only to reach the very top and lose
    Arch is through..... Cry, Slow, DLB, Tett, even God I'd choose...
    To who I'd rather see in a champ match.. or who's a better mod than you
    People confused how your in champ match with the way you write...
    Until they find out your a doctor.. being sick is against your way of life
    You duck me? I'll come to your hospital, I ain't scared to get violent kid...
    I'll leave your blood on the walls and compromise your sterile environment
    Thinks he the shit now, the ego on this faggot big as can be...
    But Arch you ain't a star,
    Just cuz your the reason there will be an asterisk on this league

    Quote Originally Posted by Arch in EO
    This is Romeo's brother. I know he does shit on the site but I don't know if there was anything he had to do in the next couple of days. The report said he was @ a rest stop in sc and some kid ran into the street while a car was coming. He pushed the kid out the way but wound up w/ a concussion and some broke ribs. They're holding him for a few days @ the hospital for observation. Just giving y'all the heads up just in case anyone's looking for him
    Too scared to bring gangsta talk, wont hear of the chrome that your bustin...
    Shiiiiit, I already had him shook in the head waaaaaaay before the concussion
    Honestly, the fact you kept that little dude alive is lovely...
    Whats sad,
    Is that sprint into oncoming traffic was an attempt at suicide to duck me
    Kid lucky to be alive, your probably his closest friend...
    Now save everyone else in the world, and never post again
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    Re: LLL Season 12 Champ Match 2. ALIEN vs 4. Arch.

    sorry for the delay... anyway...

    My path here has gotten gayer. At first my opponents seemed erratic
    But first it was a bitch... then a bye... now i'm facing a full blown faggot
    I'm the best G. My name's in company with Conceited and Ness Lee
    Your name's getting banned with Hush for trying to rep netcees
    I mean... text battling should be a hobby. Not something for which you should take pride
    Your tourney champing can't be matched... neither can your lack of a social life
    Your friday nights revolve around leagues seeing which guy can be the best
    When the biggest punchline is you being a success off of the net
    Following my footsteps into med school... I see a future of medicine
    Not as an MD... just in the hospital when I break your limbs
    It'd take an abduction from this fucker for him to be laying w/ a chick
    Cuz any Alien close encounter... involves him almost waving at a bitch
    Females in general can't stand him. He approaches them all nervous
    And while he's trying to make a connection... they're turning off their phone's service
    Me champing's inevitable. Your weak shit can't overthrow me
    My drops smash on cats... you hope yours give you a chance to smash the homies
    I'll choke the breath out of this faggot. His life don't mean shit to me
    Cuz I could put Alien in a box like a Star Wars figurine
    His bitch is a whore for the ages. Her pussy's known for absorbing men
    Shit... her box is big enough to bury Gary Coleman in
    You don't fit what she wants in a man. You're too soft and pussy G
    She loves a roughneck... and the face fucking i give her suits her beautifully
    I know he's favored to win this battle. It's said he drops some of the best shit read
    I admit Al's head and shoulders above me... but his high heels give him in edge
    This fag's no match for Arch. I'm what he strives to be
    Cuz if Alien's holding a candle to me... it's part of his worshipping routine
    It took a car, pain pills and a concussion to put me out of commission
    Interestingly enough, reading your verses leave me in the same exact condition
    So fuck whatever bias you bring to this battle. Everything you drop is lame
    Cuz if Al's typing a haymaker... it's just him greeting me when he's on AIM

    ...blah...

    Good Luck hoe...

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    Re: LLL Season 12 Champ Match 2. ALIEN vs 4. Arch.

    Now chill, I ain't sayin I wrote all your lines guy, chill...
    You only used one.... and it was all they chose for your highlite reel
    Obviously ALIEN would champ this season verse this Arch fuck...
    Cuz no Man on earth wants to step foot in a league your in charge of
    My only comp no-showed due to no motivation for this awful dude...
    Ironic isn't it? You "beat" Tettris only to reach the very top and lose
    You duck me? I'll come to your hospital, I ain't scared to get violent kid...
    I'll leave your blood on the walls and compromise your sterile environment
    Thinks he the shit now, the ego on this faggot big as can be...
    But Arch you ain't a star,
    Just cuz your the reason there will be an asterisk on this league
    Honestly, the fact you kept that little dude alive is lovely...
    Whats sad,
    Is that sprint into oncoming traffic was an attempt at suicide to duck me

    vs

    My path here has gotten gayer. At first my opponents seemed erratic
    But first it was a bitch... then a bye... now i'm facing a full blown faggot
    Me champing's inevitable. Your weak shit can't overthrow me
    My drops smash on cats... you hope yours give you a chance to smash the homies
    I'll choke the breath out of this faggot. His life don't mean shit to me
    Cuz I could put Alien in a box like a Star Wars figurine
    His bitch is a whore for the ages. Her pussy's known for absorbing men
    Shit... her box is big enough to bury Gary Coleman in
    You don't fit what she wants in a man. You're too soft and pussy G
    She loves a roughneck... and the face fucking i give her suits her beautifully
    I know he's favored to win this battle. It's said he drops some of the best shit read
    I admit Al's head and shoulders above me... but his high heels give him in edge
    This fag's no match for Arch. I'm what he strives to be
    Cuz if Alien's holding a candle to me... it's part of his worshipping routine
    So fuck whatever bias you bring to this battle. Everything you drop is lame
    Cuz if Al's typing a haymaker... it's just him greeting me when he's on AIM

    Alien was pretty consistent, but I thought he could have landed more had he not stayed on the same subject for multiple punches. I thought there were too many "mod" punches, there were three straight bars talking about GT an I thought that was too much, and I thought the Dosia's teeth line was just a waste. Funny in general, but not at Arch's expense.

    Arch started off like ass imo, but from the middle to end I thought he picked it up big. Seemed almost intentional, all the meh and bad punches were early, all the good hits were towards the end. Looks like he edged it out by a couple bars. Overall, good battle. Congrats to the winner (whoever it ends up being).

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    Re: LLL Season 12 Champ Match 2. ALIEN vs 4. Arch.

    Now chill, I ain't sayin I wrote all your lines guy, chill...
    You only used one.... and it was all they chose for your highlite reel
    ANY coach would love me, I'm talkin' NBA or college..
    Got a bullet with your name on it, yeah my shot got plenty of Arch on it
    My only comp no-showed due to no motivation for this awful dude...
    Ironic isn't it? You "beat" Tettris only to reach the very top and lose

    vs.

    My path here has gotten gayer. At first my opponents seemed erratic
    But first it was a bitch... then a bye... now i'm facing a full blown faggot
    I mean... text battling should be a hobby. Not something for which you should take pride
    Your tourney champing can't be matched... neither can your lack of a social life
    Your friday nights revolve around leagues seeing which guy can be the best
    When the biggest punchline is you being a success off of the net
    It'd take an abduction from this fucker for him to be laying w/ a chick
    Cuz any Alien close encounter... involves him almost waving at a bitch
    This fag's no match for Arch. I'm what he strives to be
    Cuz if Alien's holding a candle to me... it's part of his worshipping routine

    thought u might need some voting help so...

    those were what i liked, alien half assed mostly and it made reading his verse really awkward compared to what i usually see

    v/ Arch.

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    Re: LLL Season 12 Champ Match 2. ALIEN vs 4. Arch.

    Now chill, I ain't sayin I wrote all your lines guy, chill...
    You only used one.... and it was all they chose for your highlite reel
    My only comp no-showed due to no motivation for this awful dude...
    Ironic isn't it? You "beat" Tettris only to reach the very top and lose
    You duck me? I'll come to your hospital, I ain't scared to get violent kid...
    I'll leave your blood on the walls and compromise your sterile environment
    Honestly, the fact you kept that little dude alive is lovely...
    Whats sad,
    Is that sprint into oncoming traffic was an attempt at suicide to duck me



    ....vs


    His bitch is a whore for the ages. Her pussy's known for absorbing men
    Shit... her box is big enough to bury Gary Coleman in
    You don't fit what she wants in a man. You're too soft and pussy G
    She loves a roughneck... and the face fucking i give her suits her beautifully
    It took a car, pain pills and a concussion to put me out of commission
    Interestingly enough, reading your verses leave me in the same exact condition
    So fuck whatever bias you bring to this battle. Everything you drop is lame
    Cuz if Al's typing a haymaker... it's just him greeting me when he's on AIM

    meh clos battle...alien had more agressive lines nd personals but I felt like he couldve had some better setups oir delivery I mean ya closer couldve been a lot more aggresive if u got more personal its jus a battle I'm sure arch wouldnt oif gave a fuck if u said sum grimey shit LMAO...overall pretty good verse I like the personals....arch u had better humor in ya verse but u also had a lot of played concepts like heead and shoulders, phone service blah...anyway u had sum good lines too but I wouldve liked to see u get more personal and agressive wit sum of ya lines gary coleman was sr8 I wouldve quoted the star war line but u use that in a box phrase too much overall...close nice little battle here I felt like arch wouldve took this if he spent more time with this verse or mabe if he didnt bump his head cuz this was pretty close already but I felt like aliens ersonals more....v/alien goodshit

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    Re: LLL Season 12 Champ Match 2. ALIEN vs 4. Arch.

    i'll leave this open til saturday for votes

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    Re: LLL Season 12 Champ Match 2. ALIEN vs 4. Arch.

    Now chill, I ain't sayin I wrote all your lines guy, chill...
    You only used one.... and it was all they chose for your highlite reel
    ANY coach would love me, I'm talkin' NBA or college..
    Got a bullet with your name on it, yeah my shot got plenty of Arch on it
    Arch is through..... Cry, Slow, DLB, Tett, even God I'd choose...
    To who I'd rather see in a champ match.. or who's a better mod than you
    Honestly, the fact you kept that little dude alive is lovely...
    Whats sad,
    Is that sprint into oncoming traffic was an attempt at suicide to duck me
    Kid lucky to be alive, your probably his closest friend...
    Now save everyone else in the world, and never post again

    vs.

    Females in general can't stand him. He approaches them all nervous
    And while he's trying to make a connection... they're turning off their phone's service
    Me champing's inevitable. Your weak shit can't overthrow me
    My drops smash on cats... you hope yours give you a chance to smash the homies
    I'll choke the breath out of this faggot. His life don't mean shit to me
    Cuz I could put Alien in a box like a Star Wars figurine


    ...I think arch came kinda weak .. Alien had way stronger punches imo.. some were pretty raw.. the last ones about the accident sealed it for me..

    v/ Alien

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    Re: LLL Season 12 Champ Match 2. ALIEN vs 4. Arch.

    Got merked ya first 2 GT battles with your own horrible lines...
    Then I spotted you bars, and you won decisively without over time
    Ehh, Borderline.
    Now chill, I ain't sayin I wrote all your lines guy, chill...
    You only used one.... and it was all they chose for your highlite reel
    Okay.
    That's nothin against u... but how could this faggot serve me...
    When the 50+ lines HE wrote weren't even camera worthy
    Nah.
    But back to this text shit, its clear that you should NEVER mod...
    The league w/out u is like the lights with ya girl in bed... MUCH better off
    Lol. Decent.
    Obviously ALIEN would champ this season verse this Arch fuck...
    Cuz no Man on earth wants to step foot in a league your in charge of
    Alright.
    I mean, you got the rules bendin more than Dosia's teeth...
    As a mod, your more crooked then.... well.... Dosia's teeth
    Lol.
    ANY coach would love me, I'm talkin' NBA or college..
    Got a bullet with your name on it, yeah my shot got plenty of Arch on it
    Cool.
    My only comp no-showed due to no motivation for this awful dude...
    Ironic isn't it? You "beat" Tettris only to reach the very top and lose
    Cool.
    Arch is through..... Cry, Slow, DLB, Tett, even God I'd choose...
    To who I'd rather see in a champ match.. or who's a better mod than you
    Nahh.
    People confused how your in champ match with the way you write...
    Until they find out your a doctor.. being sick is against your way of life
    Lol. Nice.
    You duck me? I'll come to your hospital, I ain't scared to get violent kid...
    I'll leave your blood on the walls and compromise your sterile environment
    Alright, I liked this.
    Thinks he the shit now, the ego on this faggot big as can be...
    But Arch you ain't a star,
    Just cuz your the reason there will be an asterisk on this league
    Nah.
    Too scared to bring gangsta talk, wont hear of the chrome that your bustin...
    Shiiiiit, I already had him shook in the head waaaaaaay before the concussion
    Lol. Nice.
    Honestly, the fact you kept that little dude alive is lovely...
    Whats sad,
    Is that sprint into oncoming traffic was an attempt at suicide to duck me
    Okay.
    Kid lucky to be alive, your probably his closest friend...
    Now save everyone else in the world, and never post again
    Weak closer.

    vs

    My path here has gotten gayer. At first my opponents seemed erratic
    But first it was a bitch... then a bye... now i'm facing a full blown faggot
    Lol. Cool.
    I'm the best G. My name's in company with Conceited and Ness Lee
    Your name's getting banned with Hush for trying to rep netcees
    Cool.
    I mean... text battling should be a hobby. Not something for which you should take pride
    Your tourney champing can't be matched... neither can your lack of a social life
    Alright.
    Your friday nights revolve around leagues seeing which guy can be the best
    When the biggest punchline is you being a success off of the net
    Nahh.
    Following my footsteps into med school... I see a future of medicine
    Not as an MD... just in the hospital when I break your limbs
    Nahh. Didn't rhyme really neither.
    It'd take an abduction from this fucker for him to be laying w/ a chick
    Cuz any Alien close encounter... involves him almost waving at a bitch
    Ehh, wording could've been better.
    Females in general can't stand him. He approaches them all nervous
    And while he's trying to make a connection... they're turning off their phone's service
    Lol. Ok.
    Me champing's inevitable. Your weak shit can't overthrow me
    My drops smash on cats... you hope yours give you a chance to smash the homies
    Cool.
    I'll choke the breath out of this faggot. His life don't mean shit to me
    Cuz I could put Alien in a box like a Star Wars figurine
    Lol. I liked this.
    His bitch is a whore for the ages. Her pussy's known for absorbing men
    Shit... her box is big enough to bury Gary Coleman in
    I liked this too. Ha.
    You don't fit what she wants in a man. You're too soft and pussy G
    She loves a roughneck... and the face fucking i give her suits her beautifully
    Good.
    I know he's favored to win this battle. It's said he drops some of the best shit read
    I admit Al's head and shoulders above me... but his high heels give him in edge
    Nahh. Corny
    This fag's no match for Arch. I'm what he strives to be
    Cuz if Alien's holding a candle to me... it's part of his worshipping routine
    Nahh.
    It took a car, pain pills and a concussion to put me out of commission
    Interestingly enough, reading your verses leave me in the same exact condition
    Alrightt.
    So fuck whatever bias you bring to this battle. Everything you drop is lame
    Cuz if Al's typing a haymaker... it's just him greeting me when he's on AIM
    Decent closer.


    All in all, both had solid verses here. Really an entertaining battle. Good shit from both. Both had there ups and downs but both came with it. This was a pretty close match too. I liked a lot of shit from both verses. after re-reading and counting the lines I liked from each verse, I have to say Arch edged this one more stand out punch line that edged him the win here. Good shit y'all.

    V/ - Arch


    - P.S, don't know if my vote'll count but if not, take it as feed.

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    Re: LLL Season 12 Champ Match 2. ALIEN vs 4. Arch.

    Got merked ya first 2 GT battles with your own horrible lines...
    Then I spotted you bars, and you won decisively without over time
    aiight
    Now chill, I ain't sayin I wrote all your lines guy, chill...
    You only used one.... and it was all they chose for your highlite reel
    dope personal
    That's nothin against u... but how could this faggot serve me...
    When the 50+ lines HE wrote weren't even camera worthy
    okay..
    But back to this text shit, its clear that you should NEVER mod...
    The league w/out u is like the lights with ya girl in bed... MUCH better off
    Lol, aiight
    Obviously ALIEN would champ this season verse this Arch fuck...
    Cuz no Man on earth wants to step foot in a league your in charge of
    ok-ish.. sorta plays into the previous line too much
    I mean, you got the rules bendin more than Dosia's teeth...
    As a mod, your more crooked then.... well.... Dosia's teeth
    not feelin it
    ANY coach would love me, I'm talkin' NBA or college..
    Got a bullet with your name on it, yeah my shot got plenty of Arch on it
    dope...
    My only comp no-showed due to no motivation for this awful dude...
    Ironic isn't it? You "beat" Tettris only to reach the very top and lose
    Lol, nice
    Arch is through..... Cry, Slow, DLB, Tett, even God I'd choose...
    To who I'd rather see in a champ match.. or who's a better mod than you
    decen...
    People confused how your in champ match with the way you write...
    Until they find out your a doctor.. being sick is against your way of life
    coo... fresh take on a used flip
    You duck me? I'll come to your hospital, I ain't scared to get violent kid...
    I'll leave your blood on the walls and compromise your sterile environment
    gritty, I liked it
    Thinks he the shit now, the ego on this faggot big as can be...
    But Arch you ain't a star,
    Just cuz your the reason there will be an asterisk on this league
    meh.. ok
    Too scared to bring gangsta talk, wont hear of the chrome that your bustin...
    Shiiiiit, I already had him shook in the head waaaaaaay before the concussion
    hah, coo...
    Honestly, the fact you kept that little dude alive is lovely...
    Whats sad,
    Is that sprint into oncoming traffic was an attempt at suicide to duck me
    okay, sorta the same punch as the previous one tho
    Kid lucky to be alive, your probably his closest friend...
    Now save everyone else in the world, and never post again
    coulda been harder, but this is coo still

    vs

    My path here has gotten gayer. At first my opponents seemed erratic
    But first it was a bitch... then a bye... now i'm facing a full blown faggot
    meh..
    I'm the best G. My name's in company with Conceited and Ness Lee
    Your name's getting banned with Hush for trying to rep netcees
    decent.. coulda been harder
    I mean... text battling should be a hobby. Not something for which you should take pride
    Your tourney champing can't be matched... neither can your lack of a social life
    Lol... dope
    Your friday nights revolve around leagues seeing which guy can be the best
    When the biggest punchline is you being a success off of the net
    not feelin it..
    Following my footsteps into med school... I see a future of medicine
    Not as an MD... just in the hospital when I break your limbs
    okay
    It'd take an abduction from this fucker for him to be laying w/ a chick
    Cuz any Alien close encounter... involves him almost waving at a bitch
    Lol...
    Females in general can't stand him. He approaches them all nervous
    And while he's trying to make a connection... they're turning off their phone's service
    Hah, decent...
    Me champing's inevitable. Your weak shit can't overthrow me
    My drops smash on cats... you hope yours give you a chance to smash the homies
    wasn't feelin this.. to me it doesn't make much sense as a punch unless you're calling him gay
    I'll choke the breath out of this faggot. His life don't mean shit to me
    Cuz I could put Alien in a box like a Star Wars figurine
    weak..
    His bitch is a whore for the ages. Her pussy's known for absorbing men
    Shit... her box is big enough to bury Gary Coleman in
    LOL... funny
    You don't fit what she wants in a man. You're too soft and pussy G
    She loves a roughneck... and the face fucking i give her suits her beautifully
    okay..
    I know he's favored to win this battle. It's said he drops some of the best shit read
    I admit Al's head and shoulders above me... but his high heels give him in edge
    okay, again..
    This fag's no match for Arch. I'm what he strives to be
    Cuz if Alien's holding a candle to me... it's part of his worshipping routine
    aiight, dece...
    It took a car, pain pills and a concussion to put me out of commission
    Interestingly enough, reading your verses leave me in the same exact condition
    Lol.. dope
    So fuck whatever bias you bring to this battle. Everything you drop is lame
    Cuz if Al's typing a haymaker... it's just him greeting me when he's on AIM
    okay closer



    this was actually kinda close.... arch prolly had the LOL of the battle. that gary coleman shit made me laugh.. buuuuut... when I look at both verses and peep the lines I didn't like? ALIEN's verse was better in that aspect.. because the lines I didn't get into from him were still hard, they were just repeated concepts.. where as arch's lines I didn't like.. I just genuinely didn't like them... both were about even or very close in quotables though.. good match...


    vote ALIEN

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    Re: LLL Season 12 Champ Match 2. ALIEN vs 4. Arch.

    Now chill, I ain't sayin I wrote all your lines guy, chill...
    You only used one.... and it was all they chose for your highlite reel
    That's nothin against u... but how could this faggot serve me...
    When the 50+ lines HE wrote weren't even camera worthy
    But back to this text shit, its clear that you should NEVER mod...
    The league w/out u is like the lights with ya girl in bed... MUCH better off
    Obviously ALIEN would champ this season verse this Arch fuck...
    Cuz no Man on earth wants to step foot in a league your in charge of
    ANY coach would love me, I'm talkin' NBA or college..
    Got a bullet with your name on it, yeah my shot got plenty of Arch on it
    My only comp no-showed due to no motivation for this awful dude...
    Ironic isn't it? You "beat" Tettris only to reach the very top and lose
    Arch is through..... Cry, Slow, DLB, Tett, even God I'd choose...
    To who I'd rather see in a champ match.. or who's a better mod than you
    Thinks he the shit now, the ego on this faggot big as can be...
    But Arch you ain't a star,
    Just cuz your the reason there will be an asterisk on this league
    Too scared to bring gangsta talk, wont hear of the chrome that your bustin...
    Shiiiiit, I already had him shook in the head waaaaaaay before the concussion

    vs

    My path here has gotten gayer. At first my opponents seemed erratic
    But first it was a bitch... then a bye... now i'm facing a full blown faggot
    Females in general can't stand him. He approaches them all nervous
    And while he's trying to make a connection... they're turning off their phone's service
    I'll choke the breath out of this faggot. His life don't mean shit to me
    Cuz I could put Alien in a box like a Star Wars figurine
    His bitch is a whore for the ages. Her pussy's known for absorbing men
    Shit... her box is big enough to bury Gary Coleman in
    So fuck whatever bias you bring to this battle. Everything you drop is lame
    Cuz if Al's typing a haymaker... it's just him greeting me when he's on AIM


    vote-alien.....this was a decent battle for the champ match. Alien came with some good personal shit. The highlight real line was hard hitting, and the tettris was concept was fucking ill....Arch you started off real well with the opener, than you seemed to fall off for about a half of a verse...lots of filler. You did pick it up again near the end but not enough quotables to get you the win
    Scytsophrenia

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